打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant with a direct topic sentence and a specific example. Improve by making the response slightly more cohesive with a linking phrase and by varying vocabulary (e.g., use 'retain' or 'recall' instead of 'remember'). Also shorten redundancy: avoid repeating similar ideas. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer handwriting because writing notes by hand helps me retain information better. For example, during lectures I take handwritten notes, which makes it easier for me to recall key points later.

建议: The answer gives a direct response and a reason, but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improve by starting with a clearer topic sentence ('I use a laptop every day') and use a linking word ('because' is fine) with correct grammar and a concise explanation. Limit to one or two sentences.

示例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I frequently visit clients and a laptop is more portable than a desktop. As a result, it’s my preferred device for work on the go.

建议: The response addresses the question but has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases ('practice' should be past tense; last sentence is confusing). Improve by using past tense consistently, removing unclear parts, and adding one specific detail about when or how you progressed. Use linking words like 'after that' correctly.

示例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. We had a weekly computer class where I practiced touch-typing, and after that I gradually improved through regular exercises.

建议: You answer the question with a method, but grammar and word choice need correction ('offer'→'offers', 'the practice'→'practice'). Improve by providing a concise topic sentence, correct verb forms, and a specific detail (name the site or describe a routine). Use a linking phrase like 'for example' or 'for instance'.

示例: I improve my typing by using an online typing platform that offers timed games and drills. For example, I visit the site twice a week and practice speed exercises to increase my words-per-minute.

× I type a laptop keyboard every day because I often go out to see my clients and laptop is easier to bring with me.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I often go out to see my clients and a laptop is easier to bring with me.

The original sentence is missing the preposition 'on' and the indefinite article 'a' before the second 'laptop'. Add 'on' to show the action performed using the keyboard (correct verb + object pattern). Add 'a' because 'laptop' is a singular, countable noun mentioned for the first time. Also keep the article consistent in both places.

× I type a laptop keyboard every day because I often go out to see my clients and laptop is easier to bring with me.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I often go out to see my clients and a laptop is easier to bring with me.

The verb 'type' normally uses the preposition 'on' with devices (type on a keyboard). The original omitted 'on', causing an unnatural phrase. Adding 'on' fixes the verb-preposition collocation.

× I learned to type in my elementary school.

✓ I learned to type in elementary school.

The article 'my' is not necessary in this context; native speakers typically say 'in elementary school'. The past tense 'learned' is correct, but the article usage is awkward. Removing 'my' yields a more natural expression.

× There was a computer class every week and at the time I practice typing.

✓ There was a computer class every week, and at the time I practiced typing.

The sentence sets a past-time context ('There was'), so the verb 'practice' should be in the past tense 'practiced' to maintain consistent past narration. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity.

× After then I gradually tried to write time.

✓ After that, I gradually learned to type faster over time.

'After then' is unidiomatic; use 'after that' or 'then'. The phrase 'tried to write time' is unclear and likely incorrect. I replaced it with a plausible intended meaning: improving speed ('learned to type faster over time'). This fixes the sentence structure and clarifies the idea.

× It's important to type quickly, so there is a website that offer the typing game and I sometimes visit the site and the practice typing as quickly as I can.

✓ It's important to type quickly, so there is a website that offers a typing game, and I sometimes visit the site and practice typing as quickly as I can.

Several issues: 'offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular subject 'website' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27), and 'the typing game' is better as 'a typing game' (article error). Remove the extra 'the' before 'practice'. I corrected verb agreement and article usage and simplified the structure. The sentence does not require passive voice; the main problem was agreement and articles.

× It's important to type quickly, so there is a website that offer the typing game and I sometimes visit the site and the practice typing as quickly as I can.

✓ It's important to type quickly, so there is a website that offers a typing game, and I sometimes visit the site and practice typing as quickly as I can.

The relative clause 'that offer' must match the singular noun 'website', so the verb should be 'offers'. Also 'the typing game' is better as 'a typing game' for general mention. Remove the extra 'the' before 'practice'. These changes fix agreement and article issues.

× I type a laptop keyboard every day because I often go out to see my clients and laptop is easier to bring with me.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I often go out to see my clients and a laptop is easier to bring with me.

The noun 'laptop' is singular and requires an article ('a laptop') when mentioned generally. Also the phrase 'a laptop keyboard' is singular and acceptable; ensure articles are used consistently for countable nouns.