打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve clarity, grammar and vocabulary; give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons, and avoid irrelevant or incorrect words. Use linking words (for example, "because" and "however") and limit to 3–4 sentences. Correct collocations (e.g., "send messages", "convenient and fast").

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient when I send messages from my laptop or iPad. For example, at work I send emails and instant messages several times a day, which is much quicker than writing by hand. However, I still write handwritten cards occasionally when I want something more personal.

建议: Make the answer direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence stating which device you use daily. Then give one or two specific examples of typical tasks, using correct vocabulary (e.g., "customer inquiries", "table bookings"). Keep it concise and coherent with linking words like "because" or "so".

示例: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard almost every day because I handle many customer inquiries by email. For example, I often reply to questions about table bookings for birthday parties and confirm reservation details, so the laptop is more convenient than a desktop for my work.

建议: Provide a concise, well-structured answer with a clear time reference and brief description of how you learned. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use correct tense and simple linking words (e.g., "when I was a teenager" and "we had a computer class").

示例: I learned to type when I was a teenager at school. We had a computer class where each student practiced on desktop computers, and the teacher taught us basic typing skills and proper finger placement.

建议: Give a clear, structured answer: state your method, explain why it helps, and give a specific routine. Correct vocabulary ("improve typing speed and accuracy", "typing lessons/practice") and avoid unclear phrases like "forget on both speed and actor". Use linking words like "for example" and "because".

示例: I improve my typing by practising every day to build both speed and accuracy. For example, I set aside 15 minutes daily for focused typing exercises without music or other distractions so I can concentrate on correct finger placement and make fewer mistakes.

× I prefer typing especially when I'm sending message from my work on my laptop or iPad because it is faster and easier to eat it.

✓ I prefer typing, especially when I'm sending messages for work on my laptop or iPad, because it is faster and easier to do.

Pronoun and noun usage errors: 'message' should be plural 'messages' to match general activity; 'from my work' is unnatural; use 'for work'. 'it' after 'easier to' needs a verb, so use 'do'. Also capitalization of 'iPad' and punctuation improved. Suggestion: use plural for general activities and include the correct verb after 'easier to'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I used to write handwritten letter more often, but now I mainly use e-mail for convenient and speeds.

✓ I used to write handwritten letters more often, but now I mainly use email for convenience and speed.

Quantifier and noun form errors: 'handwritten letter' should be plural 'handwritten letters' for habitual past action. 'e-mail' can be 'email'. 'for convenient and speeds' is incorrect: use nouns 'for convenience and speed'. Suggestion: match noun forms and use correct abstract nouns for reasons. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Almost every day when I'm working at tithe a lot of e-mail mostly inquiry from customer about lusteration such as the booking table for birthday party or question about recent booking.

✓ Almost every day when I'm working I handle a lot of emails, mostly inquiries from customers about reservations, such as booking a table for a birthday party or questions about recent bookings.

Run-on and word choice errors: sentence lacks proper verbs and articles; 'tithe' is incorrect, removed. 'e-mail'->'emails', 'inquiry'->'inquiries', 'customer'->'customers', 'lusteration' likely intended 'reservation' or 'reservation-related' so use 'reservations'. Also clarify 'booking table' -> 'booking a table'. Suggestion: break into clearer clause with subject and verb and use correct plural forms and vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So I usually my use my laptop keyboard for that.

✓ So I usually use my laptop keyboard for that.

Pronoun/word order error: extra 'my' is inserted before 'use'. Remove the extra word and place 'usually' before the verb for correct adverb placement. Suggestion: keep subject-verb order and avoid duplicate possessives. Grammar problem type ID:12

× It was long time ago already when I on teenage.

✓ It was a long time ago when I was a teenager.

Tense and missing verb: 'on teenage' is incorrect; use 'was a teenager'. Also include the article 'a' with 'long time'. Suggestion: use past tense 'was' and the correct noun 'teenager' with an article. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yeah, there there was a class of the it's a new class called the PC.

✓ Yeah, there was a new class called PC class.

Redundancy and structure errors: repeated 'there', awkward phrasing 'a class of the it's a new class'. Simplify to 'there was a new class called PC class' or 'a PC class'. Suggestion: eliminate repetitions and choose a concise noun phrase. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It's new thing.

✓ It was a new thing.

Article and tense errors: include the article 'a' before 'new thing' and match past tense 'was' because speaking about past. Suggestion: use appropriate articles and consistent tense. Grammar problem type ID:22

× They have a room a lot of with a lot of computer in there and they had a huge keyboard, so on.

✓ They had a room with a lot of computers, and they had huge keyboards, and so on.

Quantifier and noun pluralization: 'a room a lot of with a lot of computer' is jumbled; use 'a room with a lot of computers'. 'keyboard' pluralized to 'keyboards' matching 'a lot of computers'. Use past tense 'had'. Suggestion: reorder phrase to 'a room with a lot of computers' and pluralize nouns. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I think the best way typing is effective everyday and forget on both speed and actor.

✓ I think the best way to improve typing is to practice every day and focus on both speed and accuracy.

Multiple errors: missing infinitive 'to' after 'way', 'typing is effective' is wrong meaning; use 'to improve typing' and 'practice every day'. 'forget on' is incorrect, intended 'focus on'. 'actor' is wrong word; should be 'accuracy'. Suggestion: use correct infinitives, verbs, and vocabulary for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:16

× For example, I set aside 15 minutes daily to use typing listen and avoid distraction like music so I can concentrate on correct finger placement.

✓ For example, I set aside 15 minutes daily to practice typing and avoid distractions like music so I can concentrate on correct finger placement.

Word choice and adverb placement: 'use typing listen' is incorrect; should be 'practice typing'. 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions'. Suggestion: use 'practice' for activities and pluralize countable nouns; place adverbs like 'daily' where they naturally fit. Grammar problem type ID:20