打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and finish ideas without filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid hesitations like “umm.”

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I type reports and notes on my laptop every day, which saves time and makes editing easier.

建议: Complete your sentences and avoid unfinished fragments. Use a linking word to add a specific detail about what you do on that device. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day for both studies and work. For instance, I write essays and prepare presentations on it, which helps me stay organized and efficient.

建议: Provide a clear timeline and one concrete detail, and avoid fillers and unfinished thoughts. Use a linking phrase to expand logically rather than trailing off.

示例: I learned to type about ten years ago when I was in high school. At that time, we had computer classes, and learning touch typing made my schoolwork much faster and more accurate.

建议: Good specific detail and purpose. To improve further, mention a variety of practice methods and link them with sequencing or contrast words. Keep sentences varied but concise.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing daily on messaging apps like QQ and WeChat and also by using online typing tests. Consequently, I practice key positions in short drills and then measure my progress with timed tests to boost both speed and accuracy.

× Personally, I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster.

✓ Personally, I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster.

No grammatical error according to the provided list; sentence is correct. (Included for completeness.)

× I use my computer every day for work and studies.

✓ I use my computer every day for work and study.

'Studies' as a plural noun is acceptable in some contexts but 'study' (uncountable) is more natural after 'work and'. Change to 'study' to parallel 'work' and sound more idiomatic. Suggestion: use 'study' when referring to academic activity in general.

× Umm.

This is a filler, not a sentence; no grammatical correction needed. Suggest avoiding fillers in spoken answers.

× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

✓ Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Question is correct; use of 'do' is appropriate for second person. No change required.

× Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every single day, mainly for studies and work.

✓ Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every single day, mainly for study and work.

Same issue as before: 'studies' can be replaced with 'study' to match 'work' and sound more natural. Use parallel nouns.

× Most of my assignments and tasks are done on my computer.

✓ Most of my assignments and tasks are done on my computer.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change required.

× It is really.

✓ It really is.

Sentence fragment 'It is really.' is awkward. Correct word order for emphasis is 'It really is.' or better: 'It is really convenient.' Provide the adjective for clarity.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard about 10 years ago at high school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard about ten years ago in high school.

Use 'in high school' rather than 'at high school' in conversational American/British English; write out 'ten' optionally. Past tense 'learned' is correct. Suggest: 'in high school' is the standard prepositional choice.

× Uh, it was, uh, very convenient and fast.

✓ It was very convenient and fast.

Remove filler words 'uh' which are not part of grammatical content. Sentence otherwise correct.

× There was also a.

✓ There was also a benefit.

Original is a fragment. Complete the sentence by adding a noun or clause. Example: 'There was also a benefit' or 'There was also a teacher who helped me.' Ensure 'there was' is followed by a noun phrase.

× I improve my typing speed by practicing everyday on message apps such as QQ and WeChat.

✓ I improve my typing speed by practicing every day on messaging apps such as QQ and WeChat.

Two issues: 'everyday' (adjective meaning ordinary) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase). Also 'message apps' is better as 'messaging apps.' Both corrections follow usage rules.

× This helps me memorize the key positions and increase both my speed and accuracy.

✓ This helps me memorize the key positions and increase both my speed and my accuracy.

Parallel structure: after 'helps me' the verbs should be parallel in form. 'Memorize' and 'increase' are fine, but adding 'my' before 'accuracy' improves clarity and parallelism. Alternatively: 'This helps me memorize the key positions and to increase both my speed and accuracy.'