打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer conveys preference but is long, repetitive and has grammar issues. 建議：直接以一句主題句回答，再補充1–2具體原因，每句不超過5個子句；注意時態與連接詞使用，避免重複字詞（如 “write” 多次）。例如把 “I prefer handwriting because…” 當主句，用 “because” 或 “so” 連接理由，並用一個具體例子支持。

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think more carefully when composing ideas. For example, when I journal, writing by hand lets me pause and reflect, which improves the quality of my thoughts.

建议: Answer is understandable but has word choice issues (“tap”/“Tab”) and is slightly redundant. 建議：先用簡短主句回答（Desktop），再用一兩個清晰的細節說明原因或頻率，避免不必要的重複，注意單字大小寫與準確性（desktop, laptop, Tab 鍵）。

示例: I type on a desktop every day because my office computer is a desktop and I use it for work. As a result, I’m very familiar with desktop shortcuts like the Tab key.

建议: Good basic structure but grammar and clarity need improvement. 建議：使用正確時態與更清晰的連接詞，避免不必要的代詞（e.g. “type it”）。可以說明具體年級或活動來增加細節，例如 “third grade” 或 “typing class” 並用過去式描述練習經歷。

示例: I learned to type in elementary school, around third grade, during our computer class. After that I practised regularly at home and gradually improved my speed and accuracy.

建议: Your idea is clear but sentence is long, ungrammatical and vague. 建議：以主句開始（I improve my typing by...），用具體方法分項說明（daily drills, online tests, touch-typing, varied tasks），並用連接詞使條理清楚。避免口語填充詞（like, you know）。

示例: I improve my typing by practising every day with online typing tests to increase speed and accuracy. I also do touch-typing exercises and type different kinds of texts, such as emails and articles, to build experience.

× I prefer writing on my own because I think while I use pencil or pens to write about it, I can keep on thinking about what I'm going to express and the handwriting is more wonderful, so I also like to write.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I use a pencil or pen to write, I can keep thinking about what I want to express, and the handwriting looks nicer, so I also like to write by hand.

The student mixed singular and plural pronouns and used awkward phrasing ('on my own', 'write about it'). Use 'a pencil or pen' (singular) to match 'a' and avoid plural conflict. Replace 'while' with 'when' for time context. 'What I'm going to express' is simplified to 'what I want to express' for natural speech. 'The handwriting is more wonderful' is unnatural; use 'looks nicer' or 'is nicer'. Suggestion: choose consistent singular/plural forms and simpler, natural phrases. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I tap on a desktop every day because I have to work and I have a desktop in my office so I usually work on it and so I'm familiar with Tab.

✓ I use a desktop every day because I have one in my office, so I usually work on it and am familiar with the keyboard and the Tab key.

'Tap on a desktop' is not idiomatic; use 'use a desktop'. Repeating 'I have a desktop' is redundant; replace with 'one'. 'So I'm familiar with Tab' is vague—specify 'the keyboard and the Tab key'. Quantifier/word choice errors cause awkward redundancy. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use precise terms. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school. There was a computer lessons so I learned how to type it and like practice more often when I grow up.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school. There were computer lessons, so I learned how to type and practiced more often as I grew up.

Incorrect use of 'There was a computer lessons' — the subject and verb do not agree and article use is wrong. Use 'There were computer lessons' or better, 'We had computer lessons'. 'Learned how to type it' incorrectly uses 'it' — remove it. Tense consistency: 'like practice more often when I grow up' should be past tense 'practiced more often as I grew up'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement for 'there is/are', remove unnecessary pronouns, and keep tenses consistent. Grammar problem type ID:3

× I will say that practice makes perfect, so I practice every day to increase the accuracy and the speed when I'm tapping and like type on different tasks also give me a lot.

✓ I would say that practice makes perfect, so I practice every day to increase my accuracy and speed when typing, and doing different tasks gives me a lot of practice.

'I will say' is odd here; 'I would say' or simply 'I say' is more natural. 'The accuracy and the speed' should be 'my accuracy and speed'. 'When I'm tapping and like type' mixes forms; use 'when typing'. The final clause is ungrammatical: 'doing different tasks gives me a lot of practice' is clearer and maintains subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use appropriate modal ('would'), correct noun phrases, and consistent verb forms. Grammar problem type ID:7}]}