打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện: Giảm lặp từ và nói rõ lý do bằng câu chủ đề mạch lạc; bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: cảm xúc, tốc độ suy nghĩ, phong cách cá nhân). Sử dụng nối để làm câu trôi chảy hơn và giữ độ dài dưới 4-5 câu. Ví dụ thực hành: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, nêu 1–2 lý do kèm dẫn chứng.

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me express my thoughts and emotions more personally. For example, when I write poetry or notes, I can choose handwriting styles and add small drawings that reflect my mood. Also, writing by hand slows me down and helps me organize my ideas more clearly.

建议: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề rồi thêm thông tin chi tiết cụ thể (mục đích, tần suất, ví dụ công việc). Tránh tiếng ừ, lặp từ; dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g., because, so, therefore).

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for homework and work tasks. For instance, I prepare PowerPoint presentations and collaborate on documents in Google Drive, so typing is essential for completing these tasks quickly.

建议: Cải thiện: Trình bày thứ tự thời gian rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp thì quá khứ, giảm lặp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ai dạy, phương pháp học, kĩ năng đạt được). Dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., when, so, because).

示例: I learned to type when I was seven, in third grade at school. In Vietnam, computer classes taught basic typing skills, so from that age I practiced touch-typing, which helped me become faster and more accurate later on.

建议: Cải thiện: Nói rõ phương pháp cụ thể để cải thiện (thực hành nhanh, dùng phần mềm, bài tập đánh máy), nêu kết quả hoặc tiến bộ cụ thể. Tránh lặp và sửa thì (present simple for routine).

示例: I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day on my laptop for homework and messages. Additionally, I use online typing exercises and set a daily target of 20 minutes to increase my speed and reduce errors, which has noticeably improved my accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I really like literature.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I really like literature.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Keep using 'I' consistently when referring to yourself.

× So I want to, I want to show my idea, my love and my, my, my idea through writing.

✓ So I want to show my ideas and my love through writing.

Original has repetition and awkward word order. Remove repeated fragments and pluralize 'idea' to 'ideas' for general meaning. Suggestion: plan the message before speaking to avoid repeats.

× Uh, because I think it is more I, I, I can control what, what I, what I write.

✓ Uh, because I think I can control better what I write.

Original contains repetition and incorrect word order. Move 'better' after 'control' and remove repeated fillers. Practice forming concise clauses: subject + verb + object.

× Because of my homework and uh, my work.

✓ I type because of my homework and my work.

Fragment lacks main verb. Make it a full sentence by adding 'I type' to match the question context.

× So I umm, have to uh, type on laptop keyboard every day, uh, to do and to complete my, my work on work or PowerPoint or Google Drive.

✓ So I have to type on a laptop keyboard every day to complete my work, such as PowerPoint or Google Drive.

Use 'a laptop keyboard' with article and simplify phrase 'to do and to complete' to 'to complete'. Remove repetition. Use examples after a comma.

× I learned how to type on the keyboard and when I was 7 years old and in a, in a third grade in Vietnamese umm, and in Vietnamese education, we have to learn how to type on keyboard, uh, on keyboard laptop, uh, when we was very young.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 7 years old and in third grade in Vietnam. In Vietnamese education, we have to learn how to type on a laptop keyboard when we are very young.

Use past tense 'learned' for the first clause and present tense 'we have to' or 'we are' for general facts. Fix subject-verb agreement: 'when we are' not 'when we was'. Use articles 'a' and correct word order.

× And this also prepare for our future.

✓ And this also prepares us for our future.

Subject-verb agreement: 'this' is singular so verb should be 'prepares'. Include object 'us' for clarity.

× I improved my typing through typing to do my homework everyday on laptop keyboard.

✓ I improve my typing by doing my homework every day on a laptop keyboard.

Use present tense 'improve' to match habitual action and use gerund 'doing' after 'by'. Add articles and correct spelling 'every day' as two words for adverbial use.

× I also have to do it everyday to text my friend and my family and I think in my daily life I I typing every day and usually so it is a way I practice to.

✓ I also text my friends and family every day, and I think I type daily, so this is one way I practice.

Fix pronouns/plurals ('friends'), verb forms ('text' and 'type'), and word order. Remove repeated fillers and unnecessary 'to' at end. Use commas to separate clauses.