打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn cần rõ ràng trả lời trực tiếp (topic sentence), dùng câu ngắn gọn và ngắt đúng ngữ pháp; tránh từ thừa và sửa lỗi động từ/đại từ; thêm chi tiết cụ thể bằng cách giải thích khi nào và tại sao bạn thích gõ hơn viết tay. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (for example, because, so).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I usually type messages and notes on my smartphone and laptop for school and work. I often collaborate with friends and teammates online, so typing helps me share ideas quickly.

建议: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác; trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ ở 2–4 câu, dùng liên từ (so, because, for example) và tránh lẫn lộn âm từ.

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I create content for TikTok and Facebook. For example, I write captions, edit posts, and upload videos from my laptop, so I use the keyboard several times a day.

建议: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng; cần bắt đầu bằng một câu trả lời trực tiếp về thời điểm (e.g. when I was a child / at school / a few years ago), sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn cách bạn học (self-taught, classes, practice). Tránh lặp từ và những từ không liên quan.

示例: I learned to type when I was at high school about eight years ago. I practised regularly using online typing lessons and by typing homework and messages, which helped me improve over time.

建议: Cần mô tả phương pháp cải thiện rõ ràng và cụ thể (luyện tập, trò chơi gõ, khóa học trực tuyến, luyện tốc độ/độ chính xác). Dùng từ vựng chính xác (practice, improve, speed, accuracy) và nối câu bằng because/so/for example. Giữ 2–4 câu mạch lạc.

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing games and exercises to increase speed and accuracy. For example, I use a typing website for 15–20 minutes a day and occasionally take timed tests to track my progress.

× Typing in a handwriting is great and about for me.

✓ Typing and handwriting are both great for me.

The student used incorrect articles and noun forms. 'a handwriting' is incorrect; 'handwriting' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also the sentence structure is awkward. Use parallel nouns 'typing and handwriting' and the preposition 'for me'. Suggestion: use 'both' to show inclusion and avoid using 'a' with uncountable nouns. Note: Explanation in English as requested.

× I prefer typing uh, especially about in the smartphone and laptop.

✓ I prefer typing, especially on my smartphone and laptop.

The student used incorrect prepositions 'about in'. Use 'on' for devices. Also add possessive 'my' for naturalness. Suggestion: say 'on my smartphone and laptop.'

× I are typing charge with my friend, friends and our team and are looking at working at the company.

✓ I am in charge of typing with my friend, friends and our team and we are looking to work at the company.

The original uses wrong verb forms: 'I are' should be 'I am' and 'are looking at working' is incorrect; use 'we are looking to work' or 'we are looking for a job at the company.' Also 'in charge of' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct idiomatic expressions.

× I often try on laptop keyboards everyday and I start content about Tiktok and Facebook for upload in the Internet.

✓ I often use laptop keyboards every day and I create content for TikTok and Facebook to upload to the internet.

Problems: 'try on' is wrong verb here; use 'use'. 'everyday' as adjective should be 'every day' (adverb phrase). 'start content about' is incorrect; use 'create content for'. 'upload in the Internet' should be 'upload to the internet'. Suggestion: place adverbs correctly and use correct verbs and prepositions.

× So I often tie work tiger in the keypad every day.

✓ So I often type work on the keyboard every day.

Original has many word errors ('tie work tiger'). Correct structure: 'type work on the keyboard.' Ensure verb 'type' and noun 'keyboard' are used correctly. Suggestion: practice correct collocations: 'type on the keyboard.'

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: No, I don't have time. Uh, how to time keypad? I think time could keypad every everything when I like, so I try in the keyboard once I I think and a dry work in the laptop shows.

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I didn't have time to learn. I think I learned to use the keyboard by practicing whenever I wanted, so I tried on the keyboard and later used a laptop for work.

The student's reply mixes tenses and has many incorrect forms like 'how to time keypad', 'time could keypad', 'I try in the keyboard'. Use past tense 'didn't have time to learn' to answer 'when did you learn'. Use 'learned to use the keyboard by practicing' to describe process. Suggestion: match past tense questions with past tense answers and use correct verb forms like 'learned', 'tried', 'used'. Note: Explanation in English.

× As the first time my typing fly chicken, so I often learn and approve my typing.

✓ At first my typing was very slow, so I often practiced and improved my typing.

Errors: 'As the first time' should be 'At first'. 'my typing fly chicken' is nonsensical; likely means 'very slow' or 'messy'. 'learn and approve' incorrect; use 'practiced and improved'. Suggestion: use common adverb/adjective phrases and correct verbs for progress: 'practiced' and 'improved'.

× It's like a playing game in the laptop and shopping with my friend, so I approve my level.

✓ It's like playing a game on the laptop or shopping with my friend, so I improved my level.

'It's like a playing game' should be 'It's like playing a game'. Preposition 'in the laptop' should be 'on the laptop'. 'and shopping' could be 'or shopping' depending on meaning. 'approve my level' is wrong; use 'improved my level' or 'improved my skills'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and prepositions and choose conjunctions that reflect intended meaning.