打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unfinished fragments. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "I don't have the habit of handwriting" → "I'm not used to handwriting").

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit and save documents on my phone or computer, which saves time. Therefore I rarely write by hand unless necessary.

建议: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and a brief supporting detail. Avoid vague phrases and correct grammar (e.g., "I spend most of my time at work"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" properly.

示例: I usually type on a desktop at work because my employer provides a desktop for writing incident reports. As a security guard I spend long shifts at the office desk, so I don't often use a laptop.

建议: Give a precise time reference and avoid repetition. Use linking words to list examples and be specific about what you learned. Fix incomplete sentences and plural agreement ("different kinds of lessons").

示例: I learned to type during my school days in computer class. My teacher showed us basic skills, such as using Ctrl+C to copy, Ctrl+V to paste, and touch-typing techniques to improve speed.

建议: Start with a clear statement about your current practice and intention. Avoid contradictory sentences: either you improve or you don't. Give a specific plan with linking words (e.g., "however"). Correct grammar ("a lot of practice", "I would not like to improve" → "I don't want to improve").

示例: I would improve my typing by practicing for about two hours each day using online typing lessons and timed tests. However, right now I don't feel the need to practice much because my job only requires basic typing.

× Nowadays I usually prefer typing because from my perspective typing is very easy.

✓ Nowadays I usually prefer typing because, from my perspective, typing is very easy.

The original sentence needed commas for clarity and natural flow; this is a punctuation/word order improvement to match present-tense opinion statements. Add commas around the phrase 'from my perspective' to set it off as a parenthetical expression.

× It also saves my time.

✓ It also saves me time.

The phrase 'saves my time' is unnatural in English. Use the object pronoun 'me' after 'saves' to indicate who benefits. This corrects sentence structure and makes it idiomatic.

× Nowadays I do not have much habit to write anything by handwriting because I need pen and paper, I have to write and it's.

✓ Nowadays I do not have much of a habit of writing by hand because I need a pen and paper and I have to write; that's inconvenient.

Multiple issues: 'have much habit' is incorrect; use 'have much of a habit' or 'do not have the habit' (quantifier/adjective problem categorized as present tense usage here). 'to write anything by handwriting' is unidiomatic—use 'writing by hand'. Missing articles: 'a pen and paper'. The clause 'it's' is incomplete; replace with 'that's inconvenient' to complete the thought. The corrected sentence keeps present-tense meaning and improves grammar and clarity.

× Nowadays I'm working as a security guard with BB protection in Toronto, so that time I have to make any kind of reports on the desktop because I usually spend my more time during at work, so I do not have much time to use a laptop.

✓ Nowadays I work as a security guard with BB Protection in Toronto, so I have to make various reports on a desktop because I usually spend most of my time at work and do not have much time to use a laptop.

Use simple present 'I work' for current occupation. 'That time' is incorrect; use 'so I'. 'Any kind of reports' is awkward—use 'various reports'. 'On the desktop' should be 'on a desktop'. 'Spend my more time during at work' is incorrect word order and determiners; use 'spend most of my time at work'. This revision fixes tense, articles, word order, and phrasing to be natural.

× During my school days, my teacher always taught me how to write on a desktop with the help of keyboard.

✓ During my school days, my teacher always taught me how to type on a computer keyboard.

'Write on a desktop' is incorrect for typing; use 'type on a computer keyboard' or 'type on a desktop computer'. Also add the article 'a' before 'keyboard' if used. This corrects vocabulary and collocation for past habitual action (past tense appropriate).

× They also gave us different kind of.

✓ They also gave us different kinds of exercises/materials.

The fragment 'different kind of' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Use plural 'kinds of' plus the noun (e.g., 'exercises' or 'materials') to complete the thought.

× They also taught us different kind of lessons like how to use the control C for copy, control V for paste and so many other things as well.

✓ They also taught us different kinds of lessons, such as how to use Control+C to copy, Control+V to paste, and many other things.

Use 'different kinds of lessons' (plural) and 'such as' for examples. Use conventional notation 'Control+C' and 'Control+V' and infinitive 'to copy'/'to paste' for clarity. Remove redundant phrases like 'and so many other things as well.'

× From my perspective, I have to do lot of practice if I want to improve my typing.

✓ From my perspective, I have to do a lot of practice if I want to improve my typing.

Missing article 'a' before 'lot'. Use present tense modal structure 'have to' + base verb is fine. Adding 'a' fixes the quantifier error.

× I have to spend 2 hours daily for improving my typing.

✓ I have to spend 2 hours daily improving my typing.

Use 'spend time doing something' not 'for improving'. Remove 'for' and use the gerund 'improving' to express purpose. This corrects preposition/verb pattern.

× But I would not like to improve my typing because I do not have much need so.

✓ But I would not like to improve my typing because I do not really need to.

'Do not have much need so' is ungrammatical and awkward. Use 'do not really need to' to express lack of necessity. Keep conditional/modal 'would not like to' if expressing preference; simplification improves clarity.