打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is natural and addresses the question with a clear preference and a contrast. To improve, make the structure clearer by using a concise topic sentence, a linking word for contrast, and one brief specific detail. Avoid informal fillers like "chit chatting" and unnecessary emphasis words such as "of course."

示例: I prefer typing for casual messages, but I choose handwriting for special occasions. For example, I usually text friends because it’s fast and convenient, whereas I write a handwritten letter for my husband on our anniversary to make it more personal.

建议: Good content and specific reasons are given, but there are grammar and accuracy issues and one incorrect statement (laptops require battery or electricity). Improve by a clearer topic sentence, correct grammar, and one or two precise reasons using linking words. Avoid incorrect claims.

示例: I usually type on a laptop because I am a newborn photographer and I often edit photos in Photoshop. Consequently, I need a portable device I can use in a café or at home, and the laptop’s battery lets me work without being tied to a power outlet for short periods.

建议: You answer the question, but there are awkward phrases and a grammar mistake. Make a concise topic sentence stating when, then add one clear supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition.

示例: I learned to type in primary school when I took my first computer class. I enjoyed practicing at home after class, which helped me improve my speed early on.

建议: Your answer gives a method and frequency, which is good, but it has grammatical errors, vague phrases, and an incomplete final sentence. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, using specific activities, correct grammar, and a result with a linking word.

示例: I improve my typing by practising for about 15 minutes every day using typing exercises and transcribing short passages from books. As a result, my accuracy and speed have steadily improved.

× If I am texting with my friend or chit chatting, I really prefer typing, but if I'm writing in a fancy letter for my husband during anniversary, of course handwriting is awesome and a good choice.

✓ If I am texting with my friend or chit-chatting, I really prefer typing, but if I'm writing a fancy letter for my husband on our anniversary, of course handwriting is better and a good choice.

Errors: 'chit chatting' should be hyphenated as 'chit-chatting' (compound verb); 'in a fancy letter' is awkward — use 'writing a fancy letter'; 'during anniversary' needs a determiner and preposition: 'on our anniversary'; 'handwriting is awesome and a good choice' uses style/adverb choice — 'better' compares appropriately to typing. Suggestion: use correct compound forms, proper prepositions with events, and comparative wording when contrasting options.

× I usually use a laptop due to the fact that I am new born photographer.

✓ I usually use a laptop because I am a newborn photographer.

Errors: 'due to the fact that' is wordy; 'new born' should be one word 'newborn' as an adjective and needs an article: 'a newborn photographer.' Suggestion: use concise conjunctions like 'because' and correct adjectival forms with articles.

× I use Photoshop a lot, that's why I use a laptop.

✓ I use Photoshop a lot, so I use a laptop.

Errors: 'that's why' is conversationally acceptable but the clause structure after a comma is better with a coordinating conjunction 'so' to show cause-effect in one sentence. Suggestion: join clauses with appropriate conjunctions for clarity.

× It's portable, easy to handle wherever I want in the cafe or in the house.

✓ It's portable and easy to handle wherever I am, whether in a cafe or at home.

Errors: 'wherever I want in the cafe or in the house' is ungrammatical: 'wherever I am' fits; use 'a cafe' (indefinite) and 'at home' not 'in the house' for general statement. Also use 'and' instead of comma to join adjectives. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and natural place expressions.

× Moreover, it can work without electricity.

✓ Moreover, it can run on battery power.

Errors: 'work without electricity' is understandable but unnatural; laptops 'run on battery power' or 'work without being plugged in.' Suggestion: prefer idiomatic expressions for devices.

× During my childhood, we took a computer lesson in our primary school.

✓ During my childhood, we took a computer class at our primary school.

Errors: 'computer lesson' is not idiomatic in this context — 'computer class' is better; 'in our primary school' should be 'at our primary school.' Suggestion: use 'class' for regular instruction and correct preposition 'at' for institutions.

× Although it was something new, I loved it at the time and got exercise exercised on typing by myself.

✓ Although it was something new, I loved it at the time and practiced typing by myself.

Errors: 'got exercise exercised on typing' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'practiced typing' (verb + -ed for past) to show repeated action in the past. Suggestion: replace awkward phrases with common verbs like 'practice'.

× In order to improve my typing, I type for about 15 minutes a day, typing either texts from a textbook or writing some poem and like that stuff by continuously.

✓ In order to improve my typing, I type for about 15 minutes a day, either copying texts from a textbook or writing poems, and do this consistently.

Errors: 'typing either texts from a textbook or writing some poem and like that stuff by continuously' has several issues: 'some poem' should be plural 'poems' or 'a poem'; 'like that stuff' is informal and vague; 'by continuously' is incorrect adverb placement — use 'consistently' or 'continually.' Suggestion: use clear parallel structure 'either A or B', correct noun forms, and place adverbs properly.

× By using consistency and resilience, my typing is become very.

✓ By being consistent and persistent, my typing has improved a lot.

Errors: 'By using consistency and resilience' is awkward; use adjectival forms 'being consistent and persistent.' 'my typing is become very' is ungrammatical — correct present perfect 'has improved' and complete the modification 'a lot' or 'greatly.' Suggestion: use natural collocations and correct verb forms for change over time.