打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (tenses, articles) and reduce filler words (e.g., “you know”, “like”). Aim for 2–3 sentences, each clear and natural.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit notes easily on my phone or laptop, and I can share them with classmates quickly.

建议: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific detail. Improve grammar (use articles, correct word order) and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to connect the reason.

示例: Yes, I type every day because I work for a design company and prepare many reports. As a result, I use both my desktop at the office and my laptop at home to finish tasks.

建议: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence with a brief supporting detail (when and how). Remove fillers like “uh” and correct plural/singular and article use. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

示例: I learned to type at school when I was about twelve, during a dedicated computer class. My teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practiced regularly.

建议: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence describing a specific method, then give one concise detail about duration or results. Remove hesitations and unclear phrases; use correct verb forms and time expressions.

示例: I improved my typing by using a typing app for two months, which offered daily exercises and progress tracking. As a result, my speed increased and my accuracy improved noticeably.

× I do say I like typing.

✓ I would say I like typing.

The original uses 'I do say' which is unnatural in this context. Use 'I would say' to express a personal preference politely in present tense. Suggestion: use modal 'would' for soft statements of opinion.

× When I was at school that time, I was like in writing.

✓ When I was at school, I liked writing.

The phrase 'that time' is redundant and 'was like in writing' is incorrect. Use simple past 'liked' to describe past preference. Remove filler 'like' and unnecessary 'that time'.

× But now in the smartphone era, you know everywhere you have a technology in your hand.

✓ But now in the smartphone era, we have technology in our hands everywhere.

Word order and pronoun use are awkward. Use 'we' and plural 'hands' and place 'everywhere' appropriately. 'Have technology in our hands' is a clearer present-tense statement.

× So I mostly like typing.

✓ So I mostly prefer typing.

'Like' is acceptable but 'prefer' better matches question about preference. Use present simple 'prefer' for habitual preference.

× Yes I do work in ID company so I have to make so many reports for my daily work.

✓ Yes, I work in an ID company, so I have to write many reports for my daily work.

Omit unnecessary 'do' in present simple; use article 'an' before 'ID company' and use 'write' for reports. 'So many' is acceptable but 'many' is more natural here.

× So I do lot of typing in my desktop and my laptop.

✓ So I do a lot of typing on my desktop and my laptop.

Insert article 'a' for 'a lot of' and use preposition 'on' with 'desktop/laptop'. 'Do a lot of typing' is correct.

× Uh, I did learn typing when I was in a school so we had a special period for a typing lessons and I learned it from my teacher.

✓ I learned typing when I was at school; we had a special period for typing lessons, and I learned it from my teacher.

Use simple past 'learned' (no 'did' auxiliary). 'At school' is correct preposition. Remove extra article 'a' before 'typing lessons' and keep plural 'lessons'.

× Like when I started learning typing that I'm I was not too much good in it but then I have seen advertise of app it says it improves your typing.

✓ When I started learning typing, I was not very good at it, but then I saw an advertisement for an app that said it would improve my typing.

Use past simple 'saw' not 'have seen' for past event. Use 'was not very good at' for ability. 'Advertisement' needs article 'an' and preposition 'for'. Reported speech: 'said it would improve' is appropriate.

× So I subscribed it for like 2 months and that thing played up in I think in.

✓ So I subscribed to it for about two months, and then it stopped working, I think.

Use 'subscribed to' (correct verb + preposition), 'about' instead of 'like' for approximation. 'Played up' is informal British English meaning 'stopped working'—make clearer. Remove fragmented 'in I think in' and use 'I think' at end.