打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific, well-linked reasons with an example. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., “correct mistakes” not “justify your mistakes”). Keep under five sentences.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly edit sentences and use spell-check to correct mistakes, which saves time and improves accuracy.

建议: Provide a direct topic sentence and specific supporting details with better grammar and linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea. Use plural/singular correctly and add one example of typical tasks.

示例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and meets my study needs. For example, I often search for research articles and chat with friends on my laptop, so I find the laptop keyboard most convenient.

建议: Give a clear time statement and a specific brief reason. Improve word choice (use “type” rather than “tap,” and “phone” rather than “cell”). Keep to two to three sentences and use a linking word if needed.

示例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school because my parents gave me my first phone. Since then I have practiced daily by chatting with friends, which helped me improve quickly.

建议: Structure your answer: state a method, give a specific example, and use correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unclear comparisons and tense errors. Mention a concrete practice (e.g., timed tests, online exercises) and result.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing with friends and using online typing tests. For example, we challenge each other with timed exercises, which helped me increase my speed until I can now type faster than my father.

× I prefer typing actually, because it is fast and convenient and it won't have the wrong words because the system will justify your your mistakes and.

✓ I prefer typing, actually, because it is fast and convenient and it won't produce wrong words because the system will correct your mistakes.

Repeated and incorrect pronoun use: 'your your' is a typo; 'won't have the wrong words' is unnatural. 'Produce' or 'show' is correct for generating words, and 'correct your mistakes' is the appropriate collocation. Also remove the extra conjunction at the end. Suggestion: proofread for duplicate words and use collocations like 'correct mistakes.'

× I type on the laptop keyboard every day because laptop is my starting tools and I usually use it to search for my study information and chat with my friend. So I usually use the laptop keyboard.

✓ I type on the laptop keyboard every day because the laptop is my main tool and I usually use it to search for study information and to chat with my friends. So I usually use the laptop keyboard.

Missing definite article: 'the laptop' refers to a specific device so use 'the.' 'Starting tools' is incorrect choice; 'main tool' fits. 'Study information' is fine but 'my study information' is awkward; 'to chat with my friends' requires plural 'friends' if referring generally. Also add 'to' before 'chat' for parallel infinitive structure.

× I learned how to tap on the keyboard when I was in elementary school because my parents gave me my first cell to get in touch with them and I use it every day for chatting with my friends.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in elementary school because my parents gave me my first cell phone to keep in touch with them, and I used it every day to chat with my friends.

Word choice and tense: 'tap on the keyboard' is odd; 'type' is appropriate. 'Cell' should be 'cell phone.' Maintain past tense for actions in the past: learning and daily use then should be 'used' and 'to chat' fits better than 'for chatting.' Suggestion: use consistent past tense when describing past events and standard vocabulary 'type' and 'cell phone.'

× I improve my typing with my friends who types quick and when I was young my dad times faster than me and so that I improve my typing speed and now faster than him.

✓ I improved my typing with my friends who type quickly, and when I was young my dad typed faster than I did, so I practiced to improve my typing speed and now I am faster than him.

Multiple issues: tense consistency (use past tense for past events), subject-verb agreement ('friends who type' not 'types'), adverb form ('quickly' not 'quick'), and comparative structure ('faster than I did' or 'faster than him' but with correct verb forms). Also 'so that I improve' is awkward; use 'so I practiced to improve.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use adverbs for manner, and correct subject-verb agreement.