打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix articles and verb forms.

示例: I prefer handwriting for personal things like letters because it feels more personal and thoughtful. However, when I need to produce formal documents or edit text quickly, I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to revise.

建议: Correct tense and pronoun errors and make a clear statement about current habit. Use linking words to explain reason and give one specific detail (e.g., portability, battery).

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard for my daily journal because it is more portable and I can write anywhere. It is also more convenient than a desktop, so I can type faster and save my entries immediately.

建议: Use correct past tense and combine short choppy sentences into a clear narrative. Start with when, then explain how you learned and give one concrete example of practice.

示例: I taught myself to type when I started high school. At that time I had many assignments that required typing, so I practiced daily and gradually became faster by typing essays and notes.

建议: Be specific about methods and use linking words. Mention one or two concrete techniques (timed practice, online exercises, focusing on accuracy) and keep sentences natural and grammatical.

示例: I improve my typing by writing a daily journal on my laptop and revising it afterwards, which helps with speed and accuracy. I also do short timed practice sessions using online typing tests to track my progress.

× I prefer handwriting, especially if if it's on writing a letter to someone else.

✓ I prefer handwriting, especially if it's for writing a letter to someone else.

The repeated 'if' is a typographical/conjunction error and 'on writing' is incorrect preposition use; 'for writing' correctly links the purpose to handwriting. Use a single 'if' and 'for' to express purpose. Grammar problem type ID:16

× But if it's have to be writing a document then I would prefer typing.

✓ But if it has to be a document that needs to be written, then I would prefer typing.

The original uses incorrect verb form 'have' with 'it' and awkward structure. Replace 'have' with 'has' (third person singular) and rephrase to 'needs to be written' to make the sentence grammatical and clear. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I used to type on a laptop keyboard when I write my daily journals.

✓ I used to type on a laptop keyboard when I wrote my daily journals.

Mixes past habitual 'used to' with present tense 'write'. The actions should match tense: use past 'wrote' to match 'used to'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Using a laptop was more convenient than using a desktop, so you I thought it typed more faster than usual.

✓ Using a laptop was more convenient than using a desktop, so I thought I typed faster than usual.

Contains extraneous pronoun 'you' and incorrect verb phrase 'typed more faster' (double comparative). Remove 'you' and use 'typed faster' (single comparative) and correct pronoun order 'I thought I...'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I had to taught my teach myself how to type on a keyboard.

✓ I had to teach myself how to type on a keyboard.

Incorrect verb form 'taught' and repeated noun 'teach' create error. Use base verb 'teach' after 'had to' and the reflexive pronoun 'myself' correctly: 'teach myself'. Grammar problem type ID:15

× Since I went to high school.

✓ I learned to type since I went to high school.

Fragment: 'Since I went to high school' is a subordinate clause without a main clause. Combine it with a main clause to form a complete sentence. Grammar problem type ID:26

× There were a lot of occasions that I need to type on type on, so I have to practice a lot.

✓ There were a lot of occasions when I needed to type, so I had to practice a lot.

Use 'occasions when' not 'that', and correct present 'need' to past 'needed' to match 'There were'. Remove duplicated 'type on'. Also change 'have to' to past 'had to' for tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Just writing a lot of things helped me improve.

✓ Just writing a lot helped me improve.

'A lot of things' is wordy; 'writing a lot' is natural. The original tense is acceptable but trimming improves clarity. Keep past 'helped' to match context. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Usually I write my daily journals on the on time on the keyboard, so writing my thoughts and revising them afterwards really improves my typing.

✓ Usually I write my daily journals on the keyboard on time, so writing my thoughts and revising them afterwards really improves my typing.

Original repeats 'on' and misorders 'on the on time on the keyboard'. Place 'on the keyboard' together and 'on time' after it. This fixes preposition placement and removes redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Most of all, just typing a lot increases your typing skills.

✓ Most of all, just typing a lot increases my typing skills.

Shifting perspective: the student is speaking about their own skills, so use 'my' rather than 'your' to be consistent with first person narrative. Grammar problem type ID:12