打字— Part 1 评分报告

× I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the tactile feelings of touching the paper, which makes writing more pleasant, although I tend to remember information better when I try not by hand compared to typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the tactile feeling of touching the paper, which makes writing more pleasant, although I tend to remember information better when I write by hand compared to typing.

The plural noun 'feelings' is awkward; 'tactile feeling' is idiomatic. More importantly, the phrase 'when I try not by hand' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'when I write by hand' to convey the action. Use 'write' rather than 'try' for clarity and correct verb usage. Suggestion: replace 'tactile feelings' with 'tactile feeling' and 'try not by hand' with 'write by hand'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× MMM it's not useful. I just only use my laptop or umm when I have some work to to do on.

✓ I don't use a desktop; I only use my laptop when I have some work to do.

The original has redundant and misplaced adverbs 'just only' and filler words 'mmm/umm', and a fragment 'to to do on' with word order issues. Use negative 'I don't use a desktop' to answer the question, and 'only' placed before the verb phrase 'use my laptop'. Remove fillers. Suggestion: keep sentences concise and place adverbs like 'only' directly before the verb. Grammar problem type ID: 20

× I learn to type when I was six years old as primary school, uh, because our school, umm, have some uh, subjects to introduce basic computer lessons that can help children use.

✓ I learned to type when I was six years old in primary school because our school had some subjects that introduced basic computer lessons to help children learn to use computers.

Tense inconsistency: 'I learn' (present) should be past 'I learned' to match 'when I was six years old' (past). 'as primary school' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'in primary school'. Subject-verb agreement: 'our school ... have' should be 'our school had'. The clause 'subjects to introduce basic computer lessons that can help children use' is awkward and incomplete; rephrase to 'subjects that introduced basic computer lessons to help children learn to use computers.' Suggestion: match past tense forms and improve word order and clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I practice to improve my timing, I will use some website and typing the the paragraph that they that they give. It will help me typing faster.

✓ I practice to improve my timing. I use some websites and type the paragraphs that they give. They help me type faster.

Use of verb forms is inconsistent. 'I practice to improve' is acceptable but could be 'I practice to improve' or 'I practice improving'. 'I will use' is future but context suggests habitual action, so use present 'I use'. 'Typing the the paragraph' mixes '-ing' form with incorrect article and repetition; use base verb 'type' for habitual actions. 'It will help me typing faster' should be 'They help me type faster' or 'It helps me type faster' — use base verb after 'help'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and use base verb after 'help'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× MMM it's not useful. I just only use my laptop or umm when I have some work to to do on.

✓ I don't use a desktop; I only use my laptop when I have some work to do.

Article issues: the question asked 'Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?' The student's answer should reference 'a desktop' and 'my laptop' appropriately. The original omitted 'a' before 'desktop' and had unclear phrasing. Use 'a desktop' to refer to the general device, and 'my laptop' for personal device. Suggestion: include appropriate articles ('a'/'the') when mentioning countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 22