打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, phát âm từ vựng và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Sử dụng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp: nêu rõ bạn ưu tiên gì (‘I prefer typing’). (2) Sửa lỗi động từ và danh từ (ví dụ: typing thay cho ‘tapping/temping’, handwriting). (3) Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ (because, so, therefore) để giải thích ngắn gọn. (4) Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, tránh lặp từ và ngôn ngữ không chính xác.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient. For example, when I study or do homework I can type notes quickly and organize them on my laptop. Therefore, I usually type most of my school work.

建议: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thì động từ, đại từ phản thân), phát âm từ vựng và trật tự từ. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn: ‘I usually use my laptop’. (2) Dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen. (3) Tránh cấu trúc lộn xộn; nêu hai hoạt động cụ thể (homework, watching videos) với liên từ ‘and’. (4) Giữ câu gọn, tránh các từ thừa như ‘to be honest’ quá nhiều.

示例: I usually use my laptop keyboard every day. I type homework and notes for my classes, and sometimes I watch funny videos on it in my free time.

建议: Cải thiện chia thì và phát âm tên thời gian, cùng việc sắp xếp ý rõ ràng. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng thì quá khứ để nói về quá khứ: ‘I learned’. (2) Nói rõ thời điểm (e.g. ‘in primary school’ or ‘when I was nine’). (3) Tránh lặp từ (my teacher, my schools). (4) Giải thích ngắn gọn lý do với liên từ ‘because’ hoặc ‘so’ và giữ tối đa 3 câu.

示例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My teacher taught us basic typing skills during computer lessons, which was very helpful because typing is important for my studies.

建议: Cải thiện phát âm, ngữ pháp và rõ ràng trong diễn đạt kế hoạch cải thiện. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề + phương pháp + ví dụ. (2) Sử dụng động từ đúng (practice, improve) và sửa từ sai (typing, tablet?). (3) Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về hoạt động luyện tập (typing tests, online games, lessons). (4) Tránh tiếng lấp, từ thừa và giữ 2–3 câu.

示例: I improve my typing by practising every day. For example, I do online typing exercises and chat with friends, which helps me increase speed and accuracy.

× Well, actually I'm a person who's like tapping modern in writing because temping is more convenient.

✓ Well, actually I'm a person who prefers typing nowadays because typing is more convenient.

The student used incorrect words 'tapping' and 'temping' instead of 'typing', and 'modern in writing' is awkward. Use 'who prefers typing nowadays' for clarity and correct word choice. Also change 'is more convenient' to refer to 'typing' (subject-verb agreement is fine). Suggestion: learn common verb 'type' and the adverb 'nowadays'. ID: (not in list exactly) treat as 8/13.

× It is not spend a lot of my time to handwriting and I can do more work by tapping like for school, for study.

✓ It does not take up a lot of my time to handwrite, and I can do more work by typing for school and studying.

Incorrect structure 'It is not spend a lot of my time' should be 'It does not take up a lot of my time'. Use gerund 'handwrite' or 'handwriting' with appropriate structure. 'Tapping' should be 'typing'. Use parallel forms 'for school and studying'. ID: 26

× Well to be honest I usually tap on my laptop keyboard every day.

✓ Well, to be honest I usually type on my laptop keyboard every day.

Use the correct present habitual verb 'type' instead of 'tap'. The present simple 'usually type' is appropriate for habitual actions. ID: 6

× I always do it when I do my homework in my schools and sometimes I watching me funny movies in that laptop.

✓ I always do it when I do my homework at school, and sometimes I watch funny movies on my laptop.

Use 'at school' not 'in my schools' and singular 'school' is natural. 'Watching me funny movies' is ungrammatical — use 'I watch funny movies'. Use 'on my laptop' for media device. Correct verb form 'watch' for present simple. ID: 11

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: Well, actually I learn how to type in keyboard in my in when I'm in Ray one.

✓ Well, actually I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in Year one.

Question asks past: use past tense 'learned' (or 'learnt'). Use 'on a keyboard' not 'in keyboard'. 'When I was in Year One' requires past tense 'was'. Also correct 'Ray one' to 'Year One'. ID: 5

× My teacher, my teacher and my schools have to help me to learn how to do that because it's really beneficial for my future when I study.

✓ My teachers and my school helped me learn that because it was really beneficial for my future education.

Use plural 'teachers' if referring to more than one, and 'school' as singular institution. For past context, use past tense 'helped' and 'learn' without 'to' optionally. 'When I study' should be 'for my future education' or 'when I study in the future'. ID: 12

× Well, I think the only way to help me improve my table is do it every day by studying or chatting with my friend.

✓ Well, I think the only way to help me improve my typing is to do it every day by studying or chatting with my friends.

'Table' is incorrect word; should be 'typing' or 'typing skill'. Use infinitive 'to do it every day'. 'Friend' likely plural 'friends'. ID: 13

× That's him. I'm, uh, develop my skill tapping.

✓ That's it. I'm, uh, developing my typing skills.

'That's him' is wrong reference; use 'That's it' meaning concluding. Use present continuous 'I'm developing' for ongoing action and plural 'skills' or 'skill' plus 'typing' as noun. Use 'typing' not 'tapping'. ID: 26}]}{