打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện sự tự nhiên và ngữ pháp: Tránh dùng từ không đúng (ví dụ “tapping” thay vì “typing”), sửa cấu trúc câu để trực tiếp trả lời, dùng liên từ hợp lý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn. Ví dụ sửa lỗi thì: dùng “I prefer typing” làm câu chủ đề, giải thích lý do (bắt đầu sớm, chữ viết tay xấu) và kết lại ngắn gọn.

示例: I prefer typing. I learned to use a keyboard early, so I'm more comfortable and faster with typing. Also, my handwriting is quite poor, so typing helps me produce clearer work.

建议: Cải thiện độ chính xác và rõ ràng: Tránh dùng từ sai (“tap” → “type”), trả lời trực tiếp kèm tần suất, nêu rõ thiết bị thường dùng và hoàn cảnh cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và tránh câu lủng củng.

示例: Not every day. I usually type on a laptop when I prepare presentations or reports. For routine tasks I often use my phone, but for serious work I prefer a laptop.

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác: Sử dụng thì thích hợp (past simple) và động từ đúng (“learned to type”), nêu thời điểm cụ thể và mô tả ngắn về cách học. Tránh cấu trúc dịch thô từ tiếng Việt.

示例: I learned to type when I was in first or second grade. There was a basic computer class at school that taught us how to use keyboards and simple typing exercises.

建议: Cải thiện sự rõ ràng, từ vựng và mạch lạc: Dùng từ chính xác (“typing practice/sessions”), trình bày các phương pháp cụ thể và mục tiêu từng phương pháp. Dùng liên từ để liệt kê ví dụ và tránh lặp từ.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I type essays for work, use online typing exercises, and prepare presentations on platforms like Canva to increase speed and accuracy.

× I prefer tapping because I'm approached with tapping on the keyboard very early and moreover I'm not a meticulous person so I just refer to tapping, not handwriting, because my letter is really bad.

✓ I prefer typing because I was introduced to typing on the keyboard very early, and moreover I'm not a meticulous person so I just stick to typing, not handwriting, because my handwriting is really bad.

The student used incorrect words and adjective forms: 'tapping' should be 'typing' (word choice), 'approached with tapping' is incorrect — use 'was introduced to typing' (passive with correct verbs), 'refer to tapping' is wrong — use 'stick to typing', and 'my letter' should be 'my handwriting' (noun choice). Suggestion: learn correct vocabulary pairings (type/typing, handwriting) and common expressions (introduced to, stick to).

× It's not every day I just tap on a desktop or laptop when I have a presentation and I must do inter interpretation.

✓ I don't tap on a desktop or laptop every day; I only do so when I have a presentation and I must do interpretation.

The original mixes negative and adverb placement incorrectly ('It's not every day I just tap' is awkward). Use simple present negative 'I don't tap... every day' and correct word choice 'interpretation' (not 'inter interpretation'). Suggestion: place frequency adverbs correctly and use the correct noun form for 'interpretation'.

× I'm assured that learn to tap on the keyboard very early when I was in grade one or grade 2.

✓ I'm sure that I learned to type on the keyboard very early when I was in grade one or grade two.

Errors: 'I'm assured that learn' is ungrammatical — use 'I'm sure that I learned' (past tense 'learned' for a past event) and 'type' instead of 'tap'. Also use 'grade two' rather than 'grade 2' for consistency. Suggestion: use past tense for completed actions and include the subject 'I' before the verb 'learned'.

× The program has touched me how to tap on the laptop.

✓ The program taught me how to type on the laptop.

Incorrect verb and preposition: 'has touched me how to' is wrong. Use 'taught me how to' (simple past or present perfect depending on context). Also 'type' is correct word. Suggestion: use 'teach someone how to do something' or 'taught me how to' for past instruction.

× There are many tips to enhance my tapping skill.

✓ There are many tips to enhance my typing skills.

Word choice: 'tapping' should be 'typing' and 'skill' usually plural 'skills' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and pluralize when referring to general abilities.

× For example, I usually tap tapping the essays on my work or using the canvas to do my presentation if it's helped me to improve my tap and skill.

✓ For example, I usually type essays for my work or use Canvas to prepare my presentations because it helps me improve my typing and skills.

Multiple errors: avoid double gerund 'tap tapping' — use 'type essays'; 'using the canvas to do my presentation' -> 'use Canvas to prepare my presentations' (Canvas is a proper noun for the platform); tense/verb agreement 'if it's helped me' is wrong — use 'because it helps me' (present simple for habitual actions). 'my tap and skill' should be 'my typing and skills'. Suggestion: simplify sentence structure, use consistent present simple for habits, and correct vocabulary.