打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g., "when writing emails or not"), and use specific supporting detail. Use linking words correctly and check article and noun forms.

示例: I prefer typing because it's faster and easier to organize and edit my work. For example, when I write emails or reports, I can quickly revise text, save versions, and search documents, which is much harder with handwriting.

建议: Good short answer with clear reasons and an example. Improve slightly by removing filler words ("Yeah") in formal test context and link reasons more smoothly with a linking phrase.

示例: I type on a laptop every day because it's portable and convenient for moving between rooms. For instance, I draft emails and complete assignments on my laptop, which is faster and more comfortable than using a smartphone.

建议: Organize into clearer sentences and fix word order and grammar. Start with the direct answer, then add a linked supportive explanation using linking words like "because" or "after". Be specific about what helped you improve.

示例: I learned to type when I was about ten at primary school. My teacher introduced basic computer classes, and afterwards I practised at home with typing games and exercises, which helped me improve both speed and accuracy.

建议: Correct vocabulary and grammar errors and make the answer more coherent. Use precise verbs (reduce, time myself periodically) and limit to maximum five sentences. Add a clear linking word to show sequence or purpose.

示例: I improve my typing by practising with typing software and online exercises to build speed and accuracy. I focus on touch-typing techniques and maintain proper finger placement and posture to reduce errors and fatigue. I also time myself periodically to track progress and set goals.

× For example, when writing emails or not, I can quickly revise and search through documents where it's handwriting is slowed and harder to retrieve.

✓ For example, when writing emails or notes, I can quickly revise and search through documents, whereas handwriting is slower and harder to retrieve.

The sentence misuses pronouns and contains incorrect relative clause structure. 'or not' seems to be a typo for 'or notes'. 'where it's handwriting is slowed' is ungrammatical: 'it's' (it is) is incorrect and the clause should contrast methods, so use 'whereas handwriting is slower and harder to retrieve'. Also change 'slowed' (past participle) to comparative adjective 'slower'. Suggestions: replace 'or not' with 'or notes', remove 'it's', use 'whereas', and use 'slower'.

× At primary school where we had a basic computer classes my teacher introduced was typing.

✓ At primary school, where we had basic computer classes, my teacher introduced typing.

This sentence has subject-verb and article problems and incorrect word order. 'a basic computer classes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'classes' and is ungrammatical. The verb 'introduced was typing' is incorrect order; the correct structure is 'my teacher introduced typing'. Suggestions: remove the article 'a', make 'classes' plural if intended, add commas to set the clause off, and place 'introduced' directly before the object 'typing'.

× Exercise and practicing regularly at home with typing games helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ Exercising and practicing regularly at home with typing games helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

Parallelism error between 'Exercise' (noun) and 'practicing' (gerund). To keep parallel structure use either two gerunds or two nouns. 'Exercising and practicing' (both gerunds) is correct. Alternatively, use 'Exercise and practice' (both nouns). Suggestions: maintain consistent grammatical forms in coordinated elements.

× I also pay attention to proper finger placement and posture, which deduce error and fatigue, and hyperodically time myself with typing text to.

✓ I also pay attention to proper finger placement and posture, which reduces errors and fatigue, and periodically time myself by typing texts.

Multiple issues: 'which deduce error and fatigue' is incorrect — 'deduce' is wrong verb; correct is 'reduces errors and fatigue' where 'which' refers to paying attention, or better rewrite to clarify. 'hyperodically' is not a word; intended 'periodically'. 'time myself with typing text to' has wrong preposition and infinitive; use 'time myself by typing texts' or 'time myself when typing'. Suggestions: use appropriate verbs ('reduce'), correct adverb ('periodically'), and use correct preposition ('by').

× It's portable and convenient for moving between rooms.

✓ It is portable and convenient for moving between rooms.

Contraction 'It's' is acceptable in speaking, but since other sentences use 'I' and full forms, this is stylistic. Not a grammar error per se; however ensure consistency: use 'It is' for formal speech. No tense change needed; sentence is present simple describing a general truth. Suggestion: use 'It is' in formal answers.