打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and directly answer the question with one clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices. Focus on relevant vocabulary (e.g. convenient, faster, editable, cost-effective) and correct grammar for comparisons.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, typing lets me edit my work easily and save documents on my computer, which reduces the need to buy notebooks and pens.

建议: Give a clear direct answer (desktop or laptop) followed by a brief reason. Avoid hesitation and repeated words. Use simple comparative language correctly (e.g. 'because it is cheaper' or 'because I find the desktop more comfortable').

示例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard because it is more comfortable and cheaper to maintain than a laptop. Also, the desktop has a larger screen, which makes long typing sessions easier.

建议: State the time clearly and give one short supporting detail. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Use correct past tense and simple connectors (e.g. 'when I was seven' and 'because').

示例: I learned to type when I was seven years old because my parents encouraged me to use the keyboard early on. They said it would be useful for schoolwork and future studies.

建议: Give a specific method or two, explained briefly and logically. Use clear verbs (practice, use online courses, typing games) and linking words (for example, also). Avoid vague phrases and filler words.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and games. For example, I use a typing website to practice accuracy for 15 minutes and then review my errors to get faster and make fewer mistakes.

× In my perspective, I think the type I I would prefer the typing and instead of handwriting.

✓ From my perspective, I would prefer typing instead of handwriting.

The original sentence has redundancy ('In my perspective, I think') and word order problems ('the type I I would prefer the typing and instead of handwriting'). Combine ideas concisely and correct word order: use 'From my perspective' or 'In my opinion', then 'I would prefer typing instead of handwriting'. This removes repetition and fixes sentence structure.

× In my opinion, typing is more convenient, fosters and and you can waste lots of money because of handwriting.

✓ In my opinion, typing is more convenient and you can waste less money compared with handwriting.

The original mixes unrelated words ('fosters') and has a double 'and and' and incorrect logical comparison ('you can waste lots of money because of handwriting'). Replace 'fosters' (unclear) and change the comparison to 'you can waste less money compared with handwriting' to convey the intended meaning. Ensure conjunctions are used correctly and remove duplicate words.

× You need to buy many books and a pencil that's.

✓ You need to buy many notebooks and pencils for handwriting.

The phrase 'a pencil that's' is incomplete and awkward. Use plural nouns to match 'many' and choose appropriate word 'notebooks' rather than 'books' if referring to writing materials. The corrected sentence completes the thought and fixes structure.

× And I I prefer I'm mostly I would type on the desktop because the desktop because the laptop keyboard is is expensive and the desktop maybe cheaper.

✓ I mostly prefer to type on a desktop because laptop keyboards can be expensive while desktops may be cheaper.

The original has repetition ('And I I prefer I'm mostly I would'), duplicated clause ('because the desktop because'), and incorrect modal/verb forms. Streamline to 'I mostly prefer to type on a desktop' and use 'can be expensive' and 'may be cheaper' for possibility. Remove redundant words and correct verb forms.

× I learned how to type only people when I was seven years old.

✓ I learned how to type when I was seven years old.

The fragment 'only people' is incorrect and unclear in this context. The intended meaning is simply that the speaker learned to type at age seven, so remove the extraneous words and keep past tense 'learned' which matches the time reference.

× My parents told me that and they told me. They told me the keyboard is very useful and imper imperative when when when I was out.

✓ My parents told me that the keyboard is very useful and important when I was young.

The original repeats 'they told me' and contains 'imper imperative' and 'when when when I was out' which are errors. Replace repeated pronouns with a single clause, use the correct adjective 'important', and 'when I was young' fits context better than 'out'. This fixes pronoun redundancy and word choice.

× Just predicts more and you can uh, you can search many inform info.

✓ Just practice more, and you can search for a lot of information online.

'Predicts' is the wrong verb; the speaker means 'practice' (verb with -ing form if continuing: 'practicing more'). Also 'search many inform info' is ungrammatical. Use 'search for a lot of information' and include 'online' for clarity. Correct verb choice and noun phrase structure.

× You can search Informa information Gloria in the online that you can accurate to learn how to improve typing.

✓ You can search for information online that can help you learn how to improve your typing accurately.

Original has misplaced words and incorrect prepositions ('in the online', 'search Informa information Gloria'). Use 'search for information online' and rephrase to 'that can help you learn how to improve your typing accurately'. This corrects preposition use and improves sentence clarity.

× I have many methods and alternatives to.

✓ I have many methods and alternatives for improving my typing.

The original ends abruptly with 'to' and lacks an object. Complete the sentence by specifying the purpose: 'for improving my typing'. This fixes sentence fragment issue and clarifies meaning.