打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing like "modify typing." Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "edit," "organize").

示例: I prefer typing. Firstly, digital notes are easy to organize and search, which saves time when I need to find information. Secondly, as a software engineer, I often need to revise documents, so typing makes editing much faster and neater.

建议: Make the response fluent and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct sentence, then add specific details with linking words. Remove fillers like "uh" and correct grammar ("documentation" plural/uncountable, tense agreement).

示例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because my job involves coding and preparing documentation. As a result, I spend several hours typing daily, mostly in code editors and collaborative documents.

建议: Combine the two sentences into a clear timeline and include specific details about how practice improved your skills. Fix grammar and finish the final sentence. Use linking words like "however" or "since then."

示例: I learned to type in high school, but my speed and accuracy improved significantly after I became a software engineer. Since then, daily coding and writing tasks have helped me build much faster typing habits.

建议: Answer directly and include specific practice methods and results. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrasing like "the website that can" — name the activity (typing tests, practice drills) and mention measurable improvements.

示例: I improve my typing by regularly using online typing tests and practice drills that measure speed and accuracy. By comparing my results with other users and tracking progress over time, I've increased my words-per-minute and reduced my error rate.

× I prefer typing because typed information is stored on devices so it's easy to locate and edit.

✓ I prefer typing because typed information is stored on devices so it is easy to locate and edit.

The original used the contraction "it's" which is acceptable conversationally, but to be consistent and formal with written responses, expand to "it is". This is not strictly a grammatical error but improves clarity and formality. Suggestion: use full forms in formal answers. Note: No change needed for present participle form itself; sentence otherwise grammatically correct.

× I'm a software engineer so I have a lot of opportunity to modify typing.

✓ I'm a software engineer so I have a lot of opportunities to modify how I type.

The noun 'opportunity' should be plural ('opportunities') when referring to many chances. Also 'modify typing' is awkward; use 'modify how I type' or 'improve my typing'. Suggestion: check countable nouns and use plural when referring to multiple instances.

× Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work as software engineer.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work as a software engineer.

The job title requires an article 'a' before 'software engineer'. Omitting the article is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'a' or 'an' with singular, countable job titles.

× So uh, I work on coding and writing documentations and it have been continued.

✓ So, I work on coding and writing documentation and it has continued.

Errors: 'documentations' is incorrect—'documentation' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also 'it have been continued' has wrong verb form and subject-verb agreement; use present perfect 'has continued' for ongoing action. Suggestion: use uncountable nouns correctly and match auxiliary verbs to singular subjects.

× I started to type on a keyboard when I was a high school student.

✓ I started typing on a keyboard when I was a high school student.

After 'start', the gerund form 'typing' is more natural than 'to type' in this context. Both are grammatically possible, but 'started typing' is preferred for past habitual actions. Suggestion: prefer gerund after 'start' when describing activity.

× But I improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer.

✓ But I improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer.

Sentence is correct. No change needed. Present participle issue not applicable; keeping original form.

× The daily work have.

✓ My daily work does.

Original sentence is fragmentary and ungrammatical: 'The daily work have' lacks a clear verb agreement and object. If the speaker means 'My daily work does (that)', use 'My daily work does' or better: 'My daily work does.' For clarity: 'My daily work involves typing every day.' Suggestion: provide a complete clause with subject and appropriate verb and agree in number.

× After I became a software engineer, I used the website that can measure my typing accuracy and speed and also we can compare the results with other users.

✓ After I became a software engineer, I used a website that can measure my typing accuracy and speed, and I can also compare the results with other users.

Problems: 'used the website' suggests a specific site—use 'a website' if unspecified. Mixing past 'used' with present 'can compare' creates tense inconsistency; choose one: if still using it, say 'I used a website... and I can also compare' or 'I used a website... and could also compare'. Also avoid combining 'that can measure' with 'we can compare'—make subject consistent ('I'). Suggestion: keep subjects consistent and maintain appropriate articles.

× It helps me a lot.

✓ It helps me a lot.

Sentence is correct. No change needed.