打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and fluency: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct tense and pronoun use, and keep within 3–4 sentences. Add a linking word when switching reasons and give a specific example. For example, say you prefer typing for tasks requiring speed and editing, but handwriting for personal notes or poems because it feels more expressive.

示例: I usually prefer typing for most work and study tasks because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, when I'm writing reports or studying notes I type since I can organize information quickly. However, I prefer handwriting for personal things like journaling or poems because it feels more personal and expressive.

建议: Make the response concise and grammatical: open with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler, and give one brief supporting detail with a linking word. Clarify routine and purpose with specific words (e.g., 'daily', 'for work and study').

示例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I use it for both work and study. As a result, it has become part of my daily routine and I spend several hours each day typing code and writing documents.

建议: Reduce hesitation and correct grammar: begin with a clear timeframe and avoid unclear pronouns. Use linking words to explain context (e.g., 'when' and 'because'). Give a concise reason and a specific age or period if possible.

示例: I learned to type when I was a child, shortly after my family got our first desktop computer. I practised typing because I enjoyed playing computer games and watching movies, so I picked up the keyboard skills early.

建议: Organize into a clear topic sentence and supporting detail: state the method you use to improve typing, then give a specific daily practice or tool. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to show purpose and avoid repetition.

示例: I improve my typing by practising daily while I code, because programming requires fast and accurate typing. For instance, I do timed typing exercises for 15 minutes each morning and use online tools to track my speed and accuracy.

× It depends on what am I doing.

✓ It depends on what I am doing.

The sentence uses an incorrect question word order in a subordinate clause. In reported or embedded clauses (not direct questions), use statement word order: subject before verb. Change 'what am I doing' to 'what I am doing' to form a correct present continuous subordinate clause.

× I prefer typing when I when I'm at work and I'm working on something, especially if it comes to studying something.

✓ I prefer typing when I'm at work and working on something, especially if it involves studying.

Redundant words and incorrect repetition ('when I when') disrupt sentence flow. Use the present continuous 'I'm working' and the gerund 'studying' correctly. Replace 'if it comes to studying something' with 'if it involves studying' for natural phrasing.

× When I have to write essays and I love handwriting when it comes to expressing your emotions.

✓ When I have to write essays, I prefer handwriting when it comes to expressing my emotions.

The original mixes pronouns ('I' and 'your') incorrectly and has missing punctuation. Use consistent first-person pronoun 'my' because the speaker refers to their own emotions. Also add a comma and restructure to show contrast between contexts.

× Writing poems because it's beautiful.

✓ I write poems by hand because it's beautiful.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking a clear subject and verb. Completing the sentence with 'I write poems by hand' provides a subject and verb and clarifies meaning; 'because it's beautiful' explains the reason.

× I do IT stuff on my laptop keyboard every day because I have to work and I have to study and that's the one of my it becomes my routine of the day that I have to work with that.

✓ I do IT work on my laptop keyboard every day because I have to work and study, and it has become part of my daily routine.

Original contains wordiness, incorrect article use ('the one of my'), and awkward phrasing. Use 'IT work' or 'IT tasks' and simplify the clause to 'it has become part of my daily routine.' Also ensure subject-verb agreement 'it has become.'

× I think he was when I was a kid and when we, for when we got the, uh, desktop for the first time in our life and I had, I got to learn how to type it, type on it because I really loved the play games and watch movies.

✓ I think it was when I was a kid, when we got a desktop for the first time, and I learned to type because I loved playing games and watching movies.

Original mixes pronouns ('he'), uses awkward fillers and incorrect verb forms. Use past tense 'learned' for a past event. Replace 'the play games and watch movies' with gerunds 'playing games and watching movies.' Remove unnecessary words and use 'a desktop' not 'the' for first mention.

× Umm, currently I'm learning how to program and it become, and typing become my number one skill, uh, and I'm, and I have to improve it every day to, uh, to. To match the speed of my programming.

✓ Currently I'm learning to program and typing has become my number one skill, so I have to improve it every day to match the speed required for programming.

Use 'learning to program' or 'learning how to program' (both acceptable) and the present perfect 'has become' to indicate a change up to now. 'Become' without correct tense is wrong. Use 'to match the speed required for programming' to complete the idea and avoid sentence fragments.