打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 명확한 주제문으로 시작하고 문법 오류와 중복 표현을 줄이세요. 비교 표현에서 ‘more easier’ 같은 중복 비교를 피하고, 이유를 연결할 때 접속사를 자연스럽게 사용해 보세요. 예를 들어 한두 문장으로 핵심 이유를 말하고, 추가로 간단한 예시나 상황을 덧붙이면 더 자연스럽습니다.

示例: I prefer typing on a computer because it is faster and more convenient than handwriting. For example, I can edit documents quickly and use spellcheck, which saves me time when I’m studying.

建议: 문장 구조를 간결하게 만들고 반복 표현을 제거하세요. ‘desktop or laptop’ 대신 ‘either a desktop or a laptop’ 같은 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, 목적(영어 실력 향상)을 간단히 설명하세요. 또한 단어 선택과 관사 사용을 체크하세요(‘one of the favorable way’ → ‘one of the best ways’).

示例: Yes, I usually use either a desktop or a laptop because I practise writing in English every day. Writing helps me improve grammar and vocabulary more effectively.

建议: 연령을 말할 때는 ‘like’ 같은 구어체를 줄이고 정확한 표현을 쓰세요. 또한 이유 설명을 더 간결히 하고 반복을 피하세요. ‘somebody’ 대신 ‘me’ 등 구체적 대상 사용, 그리고 문장 연결을 위해 접속사를 활용하세요.

示例: I learned to type when I was about eight years old, which was earlier than most of my classmates. My mother, who was a teacher, taught me, so I had regular practice and guidance.

建议: 중복과 불필요한 어구를 제거하고 구체적인 연습 방법을 제시하세요. 예를 들어 얼마나 자주 연습하는지, 어떤 연습(타자 연습 사이트, 게임, 문장 암기 등)을 하는지 말하면 점수가 올라갑니다. 문법 시제도 일관되게 사용하세요.

示例: I practise typing every day for about 30 minutes using online typing tests and drills. For instance, I repeat commonly used sentences and use speed tests to track my progress.

× I prefer typing on computer because it is more easier and faster than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing on a computer because it is easier and faster than handwriting.

Use 'a computer' with the article 'a' before singular countable nouns (article error). 'More easier' is redundant: 'easier' is the comparative form of 'easy', so do not add 'more'. Combine corrections: 'on a computer' and 'easier' improve naturalness and grammar. Suggestion: Use the article 'a' for singular countable nouns and form comparatives correctly (easy -> easier).

× I usually try not to only use the typing on computer.

✓ I usually try not to only use typing on the computer.

The phrase 'use the typing' is unnatural: 'typing' is a gerund and shouldn't need 'the' here. Also word order 'not to only use' is awkward; better 'not only to use' or 'not to only use' repositioned. Added 'the' before 'computer' because a specific device is implied. Suggestion: Use gerunds without unnecessary articles and place adverbs/negations ('only') closer to the word they modify: 'not only to use typing on the computer' or simpler 'not to only use the computer for typing.'

× However, it always makes me use computer because it is more convenient than handwriting.

✓ However, it always makes me use the computer because it is more convenient than handwriting.

Missing article before 'computer' (use 'the computer'). Also sentence structure 'it always makes me use the computer' is acceptable but awkward; consider 'I always end up using the computer' for naturalness. Suggestion: Add 'the' and consider rephrasing to a more natural structure: 'I always end up using the computer because it is more convenient.'

× Yes, I usually use desktop or laptop keyboard in my daily life because I'm trying to improve my English skills and writing English is one of the favorable way for me to improve my English skill.

✓ Yes, I usually use a desktop or laptop keyboard in my daily life because I'm trying to improve my English skills, and writing in English is one of the best ways for me to improve.

Missing articles: 'a desktop or laptop keyboard' needs 'a'. Preposition 'writing English' should be 'writing in English'. 'One of the favorable way' is wrong: use plural 'ways' and 'favorable' is awkward—'best' or 'most effective' is better. Removed repeated 'English skill'. Suggestion: Use correct articles, use 'in' with languages for 'writing in English', and match noun number ('ways').

× I learned how to use a typing when I was like 8 years old and I think it is really quite earlier than others.

✓ I learned how to type when I was about eight years old, and I think that was earlier than for others.

'Use a typing' is incorrect: 'type' is the verb. Use 'about eight years old' instead of 'like 8 years old' in formal speech. 'It is really quite earlier than others' has tense and comparative problems: refer to the past 'that was earlier than for others.' Suggestion: Use correct verb 'type', avoid 'like' for ages in formal contexts, and keep tense consistent when comparing past events.

× I learned it from my mom because she was a teacher and she was very good at teaching somebody because of her job and I was able to learn.

✓ I learned it from my mom because she was a teacher and very good at teaching, so I was able to learn from her.

'Teaching somebody because of her job' is redundant and awkward. Better to say 'good at teaching' and connect cause and result with 'so'. Repeated 'teach' and 'learn' phrasing tightened. Use 'from her' to clarify source. Suggestion: Remove redundancy and use clearer connectors: 'she was a teacher and very good at teaching, so I was able to learn from her.'

× To improve my typing, I try to, I try to practice very often.

✓ To improve my typing, I try to practice very often.

Redundant repetition 'I try to, I try to' should be a single phrase. Present simple 'try' is correct for habitual action. Suggestion: Remove repeated phrases for clarity and fluency.

× Like I tried, I tried typing same sentence very many times and also I tried, I did exercise.

✓ For example, I tried typing the same sentence many times, and I also did typing exercises.

'Typing same sentence' needs 'the same sentence' and 'many times' instead of 'very many times'. 'I tried, I did exercise' is awkward; 'did typing exercises' clarifies the activity. Use 'for example' rather than 'like' in more formal response. Suggestion: Use definite article with 'same', replace informal 'like' with 'for example', and use plural 'exercises' for repeated practice.