打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence saying your preference, then give one specific reason and a brief contrasting example. Avoid filler phrases and incorrect words (e.g., “data thin”). Use linking words like “because” and “however” correctly.

示例: I generally prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. However, when I need to send a message quickly or type a long informal letter, I choose typing because it is faster and easier to edit.

建议: Improve sentence accuracy and cohesion. Begin with a direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like “because” or “so”. Replace vague phrases (e.g., “move any new places”) with precise expressions such as “travel” or “work remotely”.

示例: I usually type on my laptop because it is portable and convenient when I travel. At home I sometimes use a desktop for heavy tasks like video editing since it has a more powerful keyboard and larger screen.

建议: Correct tense and repetition errors, and give a clearer time reference. Start with a direct time expression, then add a short supporting detail about how you practiced or used typing. Avoid repeating words.

示例: I learned to type about 15 years ago when I bought my first desktop computer. Since then I have practised daily at work, which helped me become more comfortable and faster on the keyboard.

建议: Be specific about the methods you used to improve and organize your answer: state the method, explain briefly how it helped, and give a result. Fix grammatical errors and use clear linking words such as “so” or “as a result.”

示例: I improved my typing by using a typing-training software that focuses on accuracy and speed. After practising for 15–20 minutes daily, my words-per-minute increased and my errors decreased, so I can type much more efficiently at work now.

× I prefer handwriting, data thin typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting, data than typing.

The sentence contains a typo 'data thin' which should be 'than' to compare two options. This is not a pluralization issue but fits as a singular correction for comparison wording. Suggestion: use 'than' for comparisons and proofread for typos.

× Actually it depends on the situation when I need to keep record and I have no time to for typing, in that case I prefer handwriting.

✓ Actually it depends on the situation: when I need to keep a record and I have no time to type, in that case I prefer handwriting.

Errors: missing article before 'record' and incorrect infinitive form 'to for typing'. Use 'a record' and the verb 'to type'. Also adding a colon or comma improves clarity. Suggestion: use 'a record' for countable noun and 'to' + base verb (to type).

× However when I want to write informal letter then I choose typing.

✓ However, when I want to write an informal letter, I choose typing.

Missing article 'an' before 'informal letter' and punctuation for clarity. Use 'an' because 'informal letter' is a singular countable noun. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and commas.

× Generally I use laptop for typing purposes in most of the time.

✓ Generally I use a laptop for typing purposes most of the time.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop' and redundant preposition 'in'. Use 'most of the time' or 'usually'. Suggestion: include 'a' for singular countable nouns and avoid extra prepositions.

× However, I have a desktop also at my home.

✓ However, I also have a desktop at my home.

Word order is awkward. Place 'also' before the main verb phrase 'have' or before 'a desktop'. Suggestion: use natural word order 'I also have' or 'I have a desktop as well'.

× When I have to do heavy work then I use my desktop.

✓ When I have to do heavy work, I use my desktop.

Unnecessary 'then' in English condition clauses; comma before main clause improves clarity. Suggestion: use 'When..., I...' structure without 'then'.

× Otherwise when I move any new places then I carry my laptop as it is portable.

✓ Otherwise, when I move to a new place, I carry my laptop because it is portable.

Errors: incorrect verb 'move any new places' and awkward 'then'. Use 'move to a new place' or 'travel to new places'. Replace 'then' with comma and 'because' for reason. Suggestion: use 'move to' + singular or 'move to new places'.

× It was about 15 years ago when I bought desktop computer, then from that time I learnt how to type on keyboard and still now I have to write every day on keyboard keyboard.

✓ It was about 15 years ago when I bought a desktop computer; from that time I learned how to type on the keyboard, and I still have to write every day on the keyboard.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'desktop computer', British vs American past tense 'learnt' is acceptable but use consistency; missing 'the' before 'keyboard', repeated word 'keyboard keyboard', and awkward phrasing 'still now I have to'. Suggestion: include articles ('a', 'the'), remove duplicate words, and use consistent past tense ('learned' or 'learnt').

× Typing is a very important task on my job and I have to type every day for my job purpose.

✓ Typing is a very important task in my job and I have to type every day for my job.

Preposition should be 'in my job' not 'on my job'; 'for my job purpose' is awkward — use 'for my job' or 'for work'. Suggestion: use 'in' for roles and simpler phrases like 'for my job' or 'for work'.

× At the beginning of my job my speed was not so good, but when I used to I start to use a new software then my typing speed is increased.

✓ At the beginning of my job my speed was not very good, but when I started to use new software my typing speed increased.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'used to I start to use' is incorrect — use simple past 'started to use'. 'is increased' should be simple past 'increased' to match past timeline. Remove 'then' and 'a' before 'new software' if speaking generally. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when describing past events: 'started' and 'increased'.