打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy, conciseness and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct comparative phrasing and verb forms, and use linking words for clarity. Be specific about reasons (speed, legibility, editing). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is often hard to read, especially when I write quickly. Also, I can type much faster and easily edit text on a computer, which makes writing more efficient. For these reasons, I usually choose typing over handwriting.

建议: Organize the response with a clear topic sentence, correct article use and word order, and avoid filler words. Use linking words to contrast and give specific reasons (comfort, key size, stability). Keep it within 3 sentences.

示例: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my workplace provides a desktop that is more comfortable to use. Compared with my laptop keyboard, the desktop keys feel more durable and the larger layout helps me type more quickly and accurately.

建议: Use correct tense and cleaner sentence structure. Begin with a direct time phrase, remove hesitations, and add a supporting detail about how you practised (formal lessons, games, typing exercises). Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

示例: I learned to type when I was a child after my parents bought me a desktop computer. I practised regularly at home and also took computer classes at school, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

建议: Provide a clear step-by-step method and use linking words to sequence actions. Fix grammar (articles, word order) and avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Be specific about tools or exercises (timed tests, online tutors, touch-typing drills). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

示例: You can improve your typing with daily practice and structured exercises. For example, start with touch-typing lessons to learn finger placement, then do timed typing tests to measure your speed, and finally practise typing short essays or emails to build accuracy and endurance.

× I prefer typing than handwriting because my handwriting is not looks very nice.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting does not look very nice.

Use 'prefer to' when comparing two activities (preposition issue). Also 'is not looks' mixes 'be' with a verb form; use 'does not look' for simple present negative.

× Some people they weren't able to understand what I have written.

✓ Some people were not able to understand what I had written.

Do not use redundant subject 'they' after 'Some people' (pronoun error). Tense sequence: use past perfect 'had written' to show writing occurred before their inability to understand; change 'weren't' to 'were not' for formality.

× Especially when I'm writing something based on the limit, it will be very messy all around.

✓ Especially when I write something under a time limit, it becomes very messy.

Replace awkward phrase 'based on the limit' with 'under a time limit' and match tense and structure: use simple present 'write' for habitual situations and 'becomes' to show result. Avoid 'all around' which is vague.

× And I have a very good at good speed for typing, so that's more.

✓ And I have a very good typing speed, so I prefer it.

Remove redundant words 'a very good at good' and correct word order: 'typing speed' is noun phrase. 'so that's more' is unclear; replace with clear clause 'so I prefer it'.

× I type on desktop keyboard every day because when I my workplace I have a desktop computer and also I have a laptop.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard every day because at my workplace I have a desktop computer and also a laptop.

Use the indefinite article 'a' with singular countable nouns (article error). Fix word order 'at my workplace' and remove extra 'when I'.

× But when compared to laptop keyboard, the desktop is more convenient and the keys are more seems more durable and uh it able to type at a quicker.

✓ But compared to a laptop keyboard, the desktop keyboard is more convenient; the keys also seem more durable, and it allows faster typing.

Add articles where needed and correct comparison structure. 'more seems more durable' is redundant; use 'seem more durable'. 'it able to type at a quicker' lacks verb and uses wrong adjective form; use 'allows faster typing'.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? / I have learned to type on keyboard since my childhood because uh, my parents bought me a desktop computer and I have started umm, practicing typing on it.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard during my childhood because my parents bought me a desktop computer and I started practicing typing on it.

Question uses past simple 'When did you learn', so answer should use past simple 'learned' not present perfect 'have learned'. Use 'during my childhood' and 'started' to keep consistent past tense. Add article 'a keyboard'.

× Uh, and also when I when during my school hours I had a computer classes as well.

✓ And also during my school years I had computer classes as well.

Remove redundant words and use correct article: 'computer classes' is plural so no article needed; 'school years' is more natural than 'school hours'.

× It is possible to improve the typing if you have a good practice every day.

✓ It is possible to improve your typing if you practice regularly every day.

'Have a good practice' is nonnative; use verb 'practice' with adverb 'regularly' and possessive 'your typing'. Use gerund 'improve your typing' structure.

× First you start with typing from from a text, whatever is written over there, and try to think about a topic and type yourself so that you can understand how.

✓ First, start by typing from a text—whatever is written there—and then think of a topic and type it yourself so that you can understand your speed.

Clean up repetition 'from from', improve connectors 'start by', replace vague 'over there' with 'there', clarify purpose 'understand your speed' to complete the sentence meaningfully.

× What's your actual speed?

✓ What is your actual typing speed?

Make the question explicit by adding 'typing' and use full form 'What is' for clarity; 'actual speed' is okay but specifying 'typing speed' matches context.