打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer clearer and more natural by stating a direct topic sentence, then briefly giving specific reasons. Reduce filler words (uh, um) and correct unclear phrases (e.g. "Kashu writing", "ANU"). Use one or two specific reasons and a linking word to connect them.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because typed text is neater and easier to edit. For example, when I type I can quickly correct spelling mistakes and reformat sentences, so my work looks more professional.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating the same point. Use one linking word to add a reason and one detail to support it. Remove trailing words like "Although."

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I do most of my work on my laptop. For instance, it is more convenient to carry and saves time since I can work anywhere.

建议: Give a concise, well-structured answer: a clear time reference followed by a short supporting detail. Use correct tenses and simpler phrases (e.g. "second grade", "computer class"). Avoid filler words.

示例: I learned to type about 12 to 15 years ago when I was in second grade. At that time I had a computer class and my teacher showed us basic typing techniques, which helped me build my skills early.

建议: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give one or two specific methods and their effects. Avoid repetition and fillers. Mention concrete activities (e.g. online typing exercises, timed tests) to show clarity and specificity.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing exercises and timed tests. This helps increase my speed, reduce spelling mistakes, and become more familiar with keyboard shortcuts.

× Most of the time, uh, I prefer typing over the handwriting because, uh, I wrote, I always revert in Kashu writing, so there will be a uh, a mistake in ANU to differentiate. But in typing, uh, then maybe a uh, not chance.

✓ Most of the time I prefer typing to handwriting because when I write in Kashu script I often make mistakes distinguishing letters. But when typing, there is less chance of mistakes.

Error type 22: Article errors and general sentence structure problems. The original uses 'the handwriting' and 'a uh, a mistake in ANU' incorrectly; articles are unnecessary or wrong. Also sentence structure is unclear. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles before uncountable nouns (handwriting), use 'prefer X to Y' not 'over the handwriting', and replace vague fragments with clear clauses (e.g., 'when I write in Kashu script I often make mistakes'). Use 'less chance of mistakes' or 'there is less chance of mistakes' for clarity.

× I usually prefer a laptop keyboard every day uh, for typing because uh, I do my work uh, usually on laptop and using the laptop is feel more convenient uh, and time saving. Although.

✓ I usually prefer a laptop keyboard for typing every day because I usually do my work on a laptop, and using it feels more convenient and saves time.

Error type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and related article errors. 'On laptop' should be 'on a laptop'. 'A laptop keyboard every day for typing' ordering improved to 'for typing every day'. Also 'using the laptop is feel more convenient and time saving' is incorrect: use 'feels' (subject-verb agreement) and 'saves time' instead of 'time saving'. Remove the trailing 'Although.' Suggestion: use 'on a laptop' and correct verb form 'feels' and concise phrasing 'saves time'.

× I learned how to type on keyboard before, uh, like, uh, 12 to 15 years ago when I was in second standard. Uh, I have my computer class, uh, during that days. So my computer teacher teach me how to type, uh, on a computer keyboard and from that.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard about 12 to 15 years ago when I was in second grade. I had computer class during those days, so my computer teacher taught me how to type on a computer keyboard.

Error type 5: Past tense issue and article use. Use 'on the keyboard' or 'on a keyboard' and 'about 12 to 15 years ago' rather than 'before'. 'Second standard' should be 'second grade'. 'I have my computer class during that days' should be past tense 'I had computer class during those days'. 'My computer teacher teach me' should be 'taught me'. Also remove the fragment 'and from that'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent in past narrative and use correct past forms ('had', 'taught').

× Usually uh, for the improvement of my typing, I usually uh, do practice by my own uh, it enhance the speed and it enhance the speed and uh uh, help me to correct my spelling mistake as well as as well as the use of different uh, key controls.

✓ To improve my typing, I usually practice on my own; it enhances my speed and helps me correct spelling mistakes as well as learn different key controls.

Error type 26: Sentence structure errors and redundancy. Phrases like 'for the improvement of my typing' are awkward; 'practice by my own' should be 'practice on my own'. Repetition 'it enhance the speed and it enhance the speed' is redundant and verb form incorrect: use 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Help me to correct my spelling mistake' should be 'helps me correct spelling mistakes'. Suggestion: simplify structure ('To improve my typing, I practice on my own'), fix subject-verb agreement, remove duplication, and pluralize 'mistakes' for generality.

× Although.

✓ (Remove fragment)

Error type 27: Sentence structure/fragment; 'Although' is a subordinating conjunction requiring a main clause. As it stands it's a sentence without a verb and must be attached to the previous sentence or completed. Suggestion: remove the fragment or complete the thought (e.g., 'Although it can be slower, handwriting has benefits.').