打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid repeating phrases and correct grammar (e.g., "my handwriting isn't very good").

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting isn’t very neat. For example, when I type reports they are much faster to produce and easier for others to read.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two coherent supporting details. Remove stuttering and repetition, fix grammar and use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "so").

示例: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I work for TCS and the office uses desktop computers. As a result, I’m most familiar with full-size keyboards and use them for emails and coding.

建议: Start with a concise time reference, then give one specific detail about the learning context. Fix tense and article errors and avoid repeating the same point.

示例: I learned to type when I was a child at school. Our computer teacher taught the whole class basic typing skills during computer lessons, and we practiced using simple exercises.

建议: Provide a direct topic sentence about your methods, then give one or two concrete examples of practice methods. Use varied vocabulary and concise phrasing, avoid repetition.

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly in my free time using online typing tests and exercises. For instance, I do 15-minute accuracy drills each evening and track my words-per-minute to measure progress.

× I prefer typing because my handwriting is not really well.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is not very good.

The adverb 'well' is incorrectly used to modify the noun 'handwriting'. Use the adjective 'good' to describe handwriting. Also prefer 'not very good' for a natural negative degree.

× So I would say typing is better than handwriting.

✓ So I would say that typing is better than handwriting.

The sentence is understandable but sounds more natural with the conjunction 'that' after 'say' to introduce the clause. This improves sentence structure and fluency.

× Every day I type on a desktop keyboard because I I'm working in TCS there there we have to work on a desktop, so I use that type of keyboard for my working.

✓ Every day I type on a desktop keyboard because I work at TCS and we have to use desktop computers there, so I use that kind of keyboard for my work.

Multiple issues: redundant words ('I I'm', repeated 'there'), incorrect tense and phrasing ('I'm working' should be simple present 'I work' for habitual actions), awkward phrase 'for my working' should be 'for my work' or 'when I work'. The corrections fix redundancy, use the simple present for routines, and use natural prepositions ('at TCS').

× When I was child in our school, one of our computer teacher used to teach taught us how to use computer and also she taught us how to type on keyboard.

✓ When I was a child at our school, one of our computer teachers taught us how to use the computer and how to type on the keyboard.

Errors include missing article 'a' before 'child', wrong preposition 'in' should be 'at' for school, noun-number agreement 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' or keep singular with 'one of our teachers', and redundant combination 'used to teach taught' — use simple past 'taught' for a completed action. Also add articles 'the' before 'computer' and 'the keyboard'.

× That time we all learn how to type on keyboard.

✓ At that time we all learned how to type on the keyboard.

The time reference 'That time' is more natural as 'At that time'. The verb should be past tense 'learned' to match 'taught' and the completed past event. Add the article 'the' before 'keyboard'.

× Whenever I get free time, I practice a lot for typing and also whenever I got my leisure time, that time I think how to improve my typing and also afterward I use that idea.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I practice typing a lot, and when I have leisure time I think about how to improve my typing and then I use those ideas.

Use 'have' instead of 'get' for natural expression of free time. 'Practice a lot for typing' is incorrect; use 'practice typing a lot'. 'Whenever I got' mixes past and present; use present 'have' for habitual actions. 'Think how to' should be 'think about how to'. 'Afterward I use that idea' is awkward; 'then I use those ideas' is clearer. Also pluralize 'idea' to match 'ideas' if multiple improvements are applied.