打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Correct small grammar and word choice errors, remove redundancy, and structure into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make reasoning clear.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting for my studies because most assignments are completed on a computer. For example, typing makes it easy to edit my essays and share them with classmates, so I can get feedback quickly.

建议: Avoid repeating the same idea twice and combine related points using linking words. Keep it concise—one topic sentence and one supporting detail is enough.

示例: I use my laptop keyboard every day, mainly for study-related tasks. Because most assignments are digital, typing on my laptop makes it simple to edit documents and share them with classmates.

建议: Fix informal word choices (e.g. 'tap' -> 'type') and tighten the timeline with linking words (first, then, later). Add a specific detail about timing or method to strengthen the answer.

示例: I learned to type in middle school during computer classes where we practiced basic typing skills. After that, I improved my speed by typing homework and chatting with friends, which gave me regular practice.

建议: Use correct word choices and avoid informal verbs like 'tap'. Be specific about practice methods and mention measurable progress or tools. Link cause and effect with words like 'by' or 'so'.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly—typing coursework, emails and chatting online. By practicing daily and using online typing drills, I have become both faster and more accurate.

× I definitely prefer typing mailing for my studies.

✓ I definitely prefer typing for my studies.

The word 'mailing' is incorrect in this context and makes the sentence ungrammatical. The speaker means 'typing' in general, not 'mailing'. Remove 'mailing' to correct word choice and make the sentence clear: 'I definitely prefer typing for my studies.' Suggestion: Use the simple noun or verb 'typing' alone when referring to the act of entering text on a keyboard.

× Most of my assignments and papers are done on the computer and I and it really easy to edit and share my work with others which is important for my studies.

✓ Most of my assignments and papers are done on the computer, and it is really easy to edit and share my work with others, which is important for my studies.

This sentence has word order and missing verb problems. 'I and it really easy' is ungrammatical. The intended idea is that using a computer makes editing and sharing easy. The correction inserts the verb 'is' after 'it' and adds commas to join clauses and the relative clause 'which is important for my studies.' Suggestion: Keep a clear subject and verb for each clause (e.g., 'it is really easy'), and use commas before 'and' when joining independent clauses and before 'which' for a nonrestrictive clause.

× I use my laptop keyboard every single day, mainly for my studies.

✓ I use my laptop keyboard every single day, mainly for my studies.

This sentence is correct. No article or grammar change needed. (No action required.)

× Most of my assignments and papers are done on a computer.

✓ Most of my assignments and papers are done on a computer.

Sentence is grammatically correct. 'Assignments and papers' (plural) match 'are done'. No correction needed.

× I learned to tap on a keyboard in my middle school.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard in middle school.

The verb 'tap' is a less appropriate word choice for learning typing; 'type' is standard. Also, 'in my middle school' is acceptable but more natural is 'in middle school' unless specifying a particular school. Suggestion: Use 'learned to type' and 'in middle school' for natural phrasing.

× We had computer classes where we practiced the basic typing skills.

✓ We had computer classes where we practiced basic typing skills.

The article 'the' before 'basic typing skills' is unnecessary. Removing 'the' makes the noun phrase natural. Suggestion: Omit definite article when referring to skills in general.

× After that I picked up naturally by using computer for my homework and chatting with my friends.

✓ After that, I picked it up naturally by using the computer for my homework and by chatting with my friends.

The original is missing an object ('it') after 'picked up' and lacks articles and parallel prepositions. 'Picked up' requires an object (e.g., 'it' meaning 'typing'). Also include 'the' before 'computer' and parallel 'by' before both activities. Suggestion: Use 'picked it up naturally' and maintain parallel structure: 'by using... and by chatting...'. Also add commas after introductory phrases.

× Chatting with my friends really helped me improve my speed.

✓ Chatting with my friends really helped me improve my typing speed.

The sentence is grammatical, but adding 'typing' specifies the kind of speed improved and clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Include the noun 'typing' if you want to be specific about what speed improved.

× I improve my typing mailing through practicing regularly, whether it's work, study or chatting online.

✓ I improve my typing through regular practice, whether it's for work, study, or chatting online.

'Mailing' is incorrect and should be removed; 'practicing' as a noun is better as 'practice' here. Also use parallel prepositions: 'for work, study, or chatting online.' Suggestion: Use 'improve my typing through regular practice' and maintain parallel structure.

× And I have noticed that the more I tap, the faster and the more accurate I become without thinking about it.

✓ I have noticed that the more I type, the faster and more accurate I become without thinking about it.

'Tap' is an odd choice—'type' is better. Remove the extra 'the' before 'more accurate' to make the comparative parallel: 'the more I type, the faster and more accurate I become.' Also start sentence without a coordinating conjunction for formality. Suggestion: Use 'type' and keep the comparative structure parallel.