打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise, address the question directly with a clear topic sentence, and avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct grammar (comparative forms, articles, and prepositions) and limit your answer to up to 4–5 sentences. Add one or two specific reasons or examples to support your preference using linking words (e.g., because, however, for example).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write reports at work I can copy, paste and correct errors quickly. However, handwriting feels more personal and I sometimes use it for quick notes. Overall, typing is more practical in professional contexts.

建议: Answer directly, correct word choice and grammar, and organize with a topic sentence plus supporting detail. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., 'Taiwan desktop') and avoid long run-on sentences. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to contrast daily casual typing with professional typing.

示例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day. I usually type on my phone for messaging and social media, such as WhatsApp and Instagram. However, I rarely use a computer for professional writing because I am often too busy. When I need to type long documents, I prefer a laptop.

建议: Start with a clear time marker, use correct tense and remove fillers. Keep it to 2–3 sentences: state when you learned and give a specific brief detail about how you learned or what made it difficult, with a linking word (e.g., because, so, but).

示例: I learned to type when I was ten, after I received a computer for a school project. At first it was difficult because I had never used a keyboard before, but with practice I became comfortable using it.

建议: Answer directly with a short clear method and specific examples. Avoid clichés and unnecessary repetition. Describe one or two concrete actions you used to improve (e.g., timed exercises, typing software, regular practice schedule) and use linking words to show sequence (e.g., first, then, finally).

示例: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice. First, I used a simple typing tutor and completed daily 20-minute exercises to build speed and accuracy. Then I practiced by typing school essays and online chats, which helped me become faster and make fewer mistakes.

× Personally I prefer typing as it is much more progressive than handwriting, but handwriting is much more easier as we all are used to of age since our childhood, but in professional life we are we should use typing so we have to type thing. Uh, that's it.

✓ Personally, I prefer typing as it is much more convenient than handwriting, but handwriting is much easier because we are used to it from childhood; however, in professional life we should use typing, so we have to type things.

The sentence uses incorrect comparative forms and awkward adjective/adverb choices: 'much more progressive' is inappropriate (use 'more convenient'), and 'much more easier' is redundant ('easier' alone). Also 'used to of age since our childhood' is ungrammatical; correct is 'used to it from childhood'. Suggestions: use appropriate adjectives (convenient, easy), avoid double comparatives ('more easier'), and simplify phrases for clarity. (grammar_problem_type_id:13)

× No I don't. I don't get enough time to Taiwan desktop or laptop. I usually type on phone specially on WhatsApp while using Instagram like social media platform but hardly get time to type something professionally.

✓ No, I don't. I don't get enough time to use a desktop or laptop. I usually type on my phone, especially on WhatsApp and social media platforms like Instagram, but I hardly get time to type professionally.

The original contains word order and missing-word issues: 'get enough time to Taiwan desktop or laptop' is nonsensical; needed verb 'use' and correct nouns. 'specially' should be 'especially'. Missing possessive 'my phone' and plural 'platforms' help clarity. Suggestions: include necessary verbs, use correct adverbs, and add possessive pronouns where needed. (grammar_problem_type_id:26)

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 10 when I got a project computer project in which I had to do presenting something. Uh, so that was at that time it was quite difficult for me as that was something new to me, but now I am used to of it.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 10, when I received a computer project in which I had to present something. At that time it was quite difficult for me because it was new, but now I am used to it.

Problems: repetition 'project computer project' should be 'computer project'; 'got' is acceptable but 'received' or 'had' is clearer. 'had to do presenting something' is ungrammatical; correct is 'had to present something'. 'I am used to of it' is wrong; correct phrase is 'used to it'. Suggestions: simplify past-tense narration, remove repetitions, and use proper verb forms for 'present'. (grammar_problem_type_id:5)

× At that time it was quite difficult for me to type something as that was something new to me. But then I realized practice, uh, and uh, one thing was in my mind that practice makes a man perfect. So I start practicing it on keyboard and all the time, day and night, and then I got to know how to type things.

✓ At that time it was quite difficult for me to type because it was new. Then I realized that practice is important, and I believed that practice makes a person perfect. So I started practicing on the keyboard all the time, day and night, and then I learned how to type.

Tense inconsistency: the narration begins in past tense ('was') but switches incorrectly to present ('I start practicing'). Use past tense 'started' and 'learned' to maintain consistency. 'practice makes a man perfect' is idiomatic but non-inclusive; use 'person'. Also remove filler words. Suggestions: maintain consistent past tense in storytelling, use clear verbs (start->started, got to know->learned), and prefer neutral phrasing. (grammar_problem_type_id:6)