打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: ปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติและสมบูรณ์ โดยแก้ไวยากรณ์ เติมรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจน และหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อน ควรใช้ linking words เล็กน้อยและจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 4–5 ประโยค ตัวอย่างข้อผิดพลาดที่ต้องแก้ เช่น 'make it easy to be distracted' → 'it's easy to get distracted', เติมตัวอย่างที่สมบูรณ์ เช่น 'when I review my notes'

示例: I prefer handwriting because it's easy to get distracted by notifications when I use an iPad or computer. Handwriting helps me focus more on my ideas and the details I'm writing. For example, when I review my notes after class, I can remember information better because I wrote it by hand.

建议: แก้ไวยากรณ์พื้นฐานและโครงสร้างประโยค ให้ตอบตรงคำถามทันทีตามด้วยรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ จัดเรียงความคิดให้ชัดเจน ใช้ linking words เช่น 'but' หรือ 'however' และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำ เช่น 'novel' ที่ถูกใช้อย่างซ้ำซ้อน

示例: No, I don't usually type every day. I mainly use a laptop keyboard when I'm writing for my hobby, such as working on a novel. However, for studying or reviewing notes I prefer handwriting, so I don't type that often.

建议: ประโยคมีข้อผิดพลาดด้านคำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์มาก ต้องแก้คำผิดและเรียงประโยคใหม่ให้ชัดเจน เริ่มต้นด้วยประโยคหัวข้อที่ตรงคำถามระบุช่วงเวลา ใช้รายละเอียดสนับสนุน เช่น 'at primary school' และเชื่อมด้วย linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล

示例: I learned to type at primary school during computer classes when I was about eight or nine. The teacher showed us how to place our hands on the keyboard and practice regular drills, which made me more fluent. I still use those skills today when I write emails or study online.

建议: แก้คำผิดและความสอดคล้องของประโยค ระบุวิธีการพัฒนาที่ชัดเจนและเป็นรูปธรรม เช่น จำนวนครั้งหรือเวลาที่ฝึก ใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผลกับผลลัพธ์ และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ชัดเจน ('forget untouched tapping')

示例: I improve my typing by writing regularly on my laptop since my hobby is writing. I do short typing drills every day for about 15 minutes to increase speed and accuracy. As a result, I remember the keyboard layout better and make fewer mistakes.

× I prefer handwriting because tapping on an iPad or computer make it easy to be distracted by notifications and other apps.

✓ I prefer handwriting because tapping on an iPad or computer makes it easy to be distracted by notifications and other apps.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'tapping' functions as a singular noun (gerund) so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Use singular verb with singular subject. Suggestion: match verb to the gerund subject (tapping -> makes).

× Handwriting helps me concentrate more on what I'm writing and on my thoughts.

✓ Handwriting helps me concentrate more on what I am writing and on my thoughts.

Tense consistency: 'I'm' is acceptable but in formal speech 'I am' keeps consistency. No grammatical error besides style; corrected to match present continuous form. Suggestion: use 'I am' or 'I'm' consistently in spoken or written contexts.

× For example, when I review my note of the.

✓ For example, when I review my notes.

Sentence fragment and word choice: 'note of the' is incomplete and unclear. 'Notes' (plural) is the typical collocation. Suggestion: complete the phrase and use 'notes' if referring to multiple items or general note-taking.

× No, I'm not usually use it.

✓ No, I don't usually use it.

Incorrect auxiliary verb and word order: Use do-support for negative present simple ('do not/does not'). 'I'm not usually use' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'I don't usually use it.'

× Umm I'm used to keyboard laptop or desktop and I want to write a novel because my hobby is reading and writing novel but when I am study or review my note I'm not usually use a keyboard.

✓ I'm used to using a laptop or desktop keyboard, and I want to write a novel because my hobby is reading and writing novels, but when I study or review my notes I don't usually use a keyboard.

Multiple errors: 'used to' requires gerund ('used to using'), word order for 'laptop or desktop keyboard', plural 'novels' and 'notes', incorrect do-support in negative ('don't usually use'), and tense consistency ('study' not 'am study'). Suggestion: use gerunds after 'used to', plural nouns where general, and proper negative construction 'do not'. Keep verbs in simple present for habitual actions.

× I love to writing.

✓ I love writing.

Verb form error: after 'love' use the gerund ('writing') or the infinitive ('to write'), but not 'to writing'. Suggestion: use 'I love writing' or 'I love to write.'

× When I was a shy we had computer cars at school and the T-shirt told us how to plate our hand on the keyboard and tap regular packet during those lesson.

✓ When I was young we had computer classes at school and the teacher told us how to place our hands on the keyboard and tap regularly during those lessons.

Multiple errors: 'shy' is wrong word choice for age ('young'), 'computer cars' should be 'computer classes', 'T-shirt' is wrong for person ('teacher'), 'plate' -> 'place', 'our hand' -> 'our hands', 'tap regular packet' -> 'tap regularly', 'those lesson' -> 'those lessons'. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary, match singular/plural, and use adverb forms for verbs ('regularly').

× Made me more fluent and I still use those skill when I write e-mail or study online.

✓ It made me more fluent and I still use those skills when I write e-mails or study online.

Missing subject 'It' for past clause, 'skill' should be plural 'skills', and 'e-mail' pluralized to 'e-mails' for general activities. Verb 'made' in past is fine; keep consistency by adding subject. Suggestion: include explicit subject for past tense clauses and match noun number.

× Because my hobby is reading and writing, I often write novel on my laptop, so I practice typing regularly.

✓ Because my hobbies are reading and writing, I often write novels on my laptop, so I practice typing regularly.

Number agreement and article/word choice: 'hobby' better as plural if two activities, or adjust to 'a hobby'. 'write novel' needs plural 'novels' or 'a novel'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general activities or add appropriate articles ('a novel').

× I try to do short typing drill everyday and forget untouched tapping to improve my speed and accuracy, which help me remember the keyboard layout.

✓ I try to do short typing drills every day and practice touch-typing to improve my speed and accuracy, which helps me remember the keyboard layout.

Multiple issues: 'drill' should be plural 'drills', 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb), 'forget untouched tapping' is unclear; likely 'touch-typing' (the skill of typing without looking). Subject-verb agreement: 'which helps' not 'help'. Suggestion: use correct collocations 'typing drills', 'touch-typing', separate 'every day', and ensure verb agrees with singular 'accuracy'.