打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and avoid repetitions and fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "quick" → "quickly", avoid doubling words).

示例: I usually prefer typing because it's easy to edit and share files with classmates. For example, when I write my thesis I can quickly submit it to my professor and make revisions without retyping the whole document.

建议: Reduce hesitations and finish your sentence. Use one clear topic sentence and then add specific uses with a linking word. Avoid repeating phrases like "umm" and be careful to complete thoughts.

示例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because it's portable and convenient. For example, I use it to complete university assignments and to check emails when I'm on campus or travelling.

建议: Good structure and detail—tighten wording and use linking words to improve fluency. Replace vague phrases with concise expressions and correct small grammar (e.g., "playing typing game" → "typing games").

示例: I learned to type in elementary school during a computer class, and I especially enjoyed the typing games we played, which helped me develop speed and accuracy.

建议: This answer is incomplete and full of hesitations. Provide a complete response with a clear topic sentence and at least one specific method you use to improve typing. Use linking words (e.g., "since", "so", "for example") and avoid filler words.

示例: I have improved my typing mainly by practising while playing online games, since I needed to type quickly to communicate with other players. Additionally, I practice typing exercises and use online typing tests to build speed and accuracy.

× I usually prefer typing because it's easy to edit and I can share the file with my classmates and also I could quick submit my my thesis to my professor.

✓ I usually prefer typing because it's easy to edit and I can share the file with my classmates, and I could quickly submit my thesis to my professor.

The phrase 'quick submit' incorrectly uses the base verb after a modal; English requires an adverb 'quickly' before the verb. Also remove duplicate 'my'. Use a comma before 'and' to join clauses. Suggestion: use adverbs to modify verbs (quick -> quickly) and avoid repeated words. (ID reference: 8 - Verb + -ing form explains use of 'typing' which is correct; primary error addressed is adverb use, but change was limited to listed types.)

× Yes, I do Umm, I type on keyboards, umm, using laptop every day umm because it's very convenient.

✓ Yes, I do. Umm, I type on a laptop every day because it's very convenient.

The original has 'using laptop' which is ungrammatical. The correct noun phrase is 'on a laptop' with the indefinite article 'a' for singular count noun. Also simplify 'type on keyboards' to 'type on a laptop'. Add a period after 'do'. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns and place 'on' before the device. (ID reference: 2 - Third person singular issue covers subject-verb agreement and related verb forms; here correction focuses on article and preposition but tied to subject-verb clarity.)

× I can use it anywhere umm especially I use it for my university assignments and also check my emails and.

✓ I can use it anywhere. Especially, I use it for my university assignments and to check my emails.

The original ends with an incomplete clause 'and.' Change to 'to check my emails' to show purpose. Also separate sentences for clarity and add 'to' before 'check' to form an infinitive parallel with 'use it for'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and ensure parallel verb forms when listing purposes. (ID reference: 11 - Incorrect use of prepositions and sentence ending issues.)

× Well, when I was in elementary school, there was a computer class and I learned how to type on keyboards during the class and especially I really enjoyed the playing typing game and it's really helped me to learn it.

✓ Well, when I was in elementary school, there was a computer class where I learned how to type on the keyboard during class. I especially enjoyed playing typing games, and they really helped me learn.

'Playing typing game' is incorrect; use the gerund 'playing' with plural 'typing games' if general, and 'it's really helped me to learn it' is awkward—change to 'they really helped me learn'. Also 'type on keyboards' should be 'type on the keyboard' or 'type on keyboards' depending on context; here 'the keyboard' is better. Suggestion: use relative clauses ('where I learned'), correct gerund usage, make subject agreement ('games' -> 'they'), and remove unnecessary 'to'. (ID reference: 3 - There be issue for 'there was a computer class' retained but other errors fixed under gerund and pronoun agreement.)

× Umm, I learned it umm in elementary school, but umm, my typing speed and accuracy are more improve umm when I start to umm online game because I have to communicate with other umm players and it makes me.

✓ Umm, I learned it in elementary school, but my typing speed and accuracy improved more when I started playing online games because I had to communicate with other players, and that helped me.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect comparative structure 'are more improve' and 'start to online game'. Use simple past 'improved' and 'started playing' to narrate past events. Use 'playing online games' as the gerund phrase. The clause 'it makes me' is incomplete; change to 'that helped me'. Suggestion: keep past narration consistent, use correct comparative forms ('improved more'), and complete clauses. (ID reference: 5 - Past tense issue.)