打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons with clear linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical errors (e.g., 'work relays tasks', 'They state fewer people', 'her handwriting note'). Use correct pronouns and verb forms.

示例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient. For example, I can send messages to friends instantly and edit work documents quickly. However, some people still prefer handwriting because it feels more personal.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence and fix grammar and word choice. Use linking words to connect reasons (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Be specific about situations where you use the laptop keyboard daily.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop at home and my workplace provides laptops. As a result, I am very familiar with the laptop layout and use it for emails and reports.

建议: Provide a direct statement of timing, correct verb tenses, and add one specific detail about the course or learning method. Keep it concise and natural.

示例: I learned to type in elementary school when we had computer classes. Our teacher taught us basic typing and mouse skills through simple exercises and games.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms, and give a specific routine or method with linking words. Mention measurable goals if possible (e.g., practicing for 20 minutes a day or using typing software).

示例: I improve my typing in my free time by practicing for about 20 minutes each day. For instance, I type notes and short articles and sometimes use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy, which helps me prepare for report writing and emails.

× I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient for communicating with friends and doing work relays tasks.

✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient for communicating with friends and doing work-related tasks.

The phrase 'work relays tasks' is incorrect and unclear. Use the adjective 'work-related' to modify 'tasks'. Also 'for communicating with friends and doing work-related tasks' uses parallel gerunds correctly. Suggestion: use compound adjectives with a hyphen when two words modify a noun (work-related).

× They state fewer people and write apart from some other people who still like the personal touch of her handwriting note.

✓ There are fewer people who write by hand now, apart from some people who still like the personal touch of handwritten notes.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and word order: 'They state' is incorrect. Use 'There are' to state existence and 'fewer people who write by hand' is clearer. 'Her handwriting note' is wrong pronoun and noun form; use 'handwritten notes'. This fixes pronoun reference and noun forms.

× I always type on laptop keyboard because I don't have desktop at my home and in my workplace we usually using laptop, so laptop keyboard is more familiar to me.

✓ I always type on a laptop keyboard because I don't have a desktop at home and at work we usually use laptops, so laptop keyboards are more familiar to me.

Errors include missing articles ('a laptop keyboard', 'a desktop'), incorrect verb form 'using' should be 'use' for third person plural or present simple, and number agreement: 'laptop keyboard is' should match plural 'laptops' -> 'laptop keyboards are'. Also 'at my home' is unnatural; use 'at home'.

× I think I learned how to type on the keyboard in my elementary school because we have computer courses and teacher will teach us how to using keyboard and mouse.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard in elementary school because we had computer classes and the teacher taught us how to use the keyboard and mouse.

Tense consistency: the action happened in the past, so use past simple ('learned', 'had', 'taught'). 'Teacher will teach us' mixes future with past; change to past. 'How to using' is ungrammatical; use the infinitive 'how to use'. Also 'computer courses' -> 'computer classes' is more natural.

× I improve my typing in my free time. I will typing a note or a novel to practice my speed of typing because I think it's very important for working especially reports, e-mail or writing note.

✓ I improve my typing in my free time. I type notes or a novel to practice my typing speed because I think it's very important for work, especially for reports, emails, or note writing.

'I will typing' mixes future auxiliary with -ing; use simple present 'I type' for habitual action. 'Speed of typing' is better as 'typing speed'. 'Working' should be 'work'. Use plural 'emails' and parallel nouns: 'reports, emails, or note writing'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent for habits and use correct noun forms.