打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は直接的で理由も述べられていますが、発言にためらいや繰り返し（uh, I don't, I don't）が多く、文法と語彙の選択に改善の余地があります。より自然で簡潔な表現にし、具体例を加えると良いです。例えば、"I prefer handwriting because I rarely use a computer; I usually use my smartphone for quick tasks, so I find handwriting better for notes and studying."のように、短めの文で要点をまとめ、言い換えや余分な繰り返しを避けてください。また接続語（because, so）を適切に使って論理を明確にしましょう。

示例: I prefer handwriting because I rarely use a computer in my daily life; I usually rely on my smartphone, so handwriting feels more comfortable for taking notes and studying.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、不自然な語順（"type keyboard"）と繰り返し（uh, when the, when I）があります。もっと自然な語順と簡潔な構成に直し、1〜2の具体例（例えばどんな課題を打つのか）を加えると良いです。文は最大5文までに収め、接続詞（because, so, therefore）で理由を簡潔につなぎましょう。

示例: Yes, I type almost every day on a laptop because I need to write essays and complete online assignments for university.

建议: 答えは時期を伝えていますが、時制や語法の誤り（"I haven't type"、語順）と冗長な表現があります。過去の出来事は過去形で明確に述べ、簡潔に理由や背景を加えると良いです。例えば、"I first learned to type at university because in high school I rarely used computers."のようにすると自然です。

示例: I first learned to type at university because I rarely used computers during high school.

建议: 改善方法を述べていますが、語順や語彙の選択（"in the computer"）が不自然で、繰り返しの音声が多いです。もっと具体的な方法（毎日どれくらい練習するか、使っている練習法やソフト）を加え、簡潔に説明しましょう。接続語（because, for example）で根拠を示すと説得力が増します。

示例: I improve my typing by completing regular university assignments on a laptop, and I also practice using online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I don't, uh, I don't use computer in the daily life.

✓ I don't use a computer in daily life.

Article errors: English requires an article before a countable singular noun. Use 'a computer' not 'computer'. Also 'in daily life' is more natural than 'in the daily life' here. Suggestions: Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'computer' and remove 'the' before 'daily life'.

× I often use smartphone than computer.

✓ I often use my smartphone more than my computer.

Preposition and comparison structure: Use 'more than' for comparisons and include possessive adjectives or articles. Also countable nouns need determiners. Suggestions: Use 'my smartphone' and 'my computer' and 'more than' for comparison.

× Yes, uh, I type keyboard almost every day because, uh, when the, when I go to the university, I need to type.

✓ Yes, I type on the keyboard almost every day because when I go to university I need to type.

Preposition and article use: Use 'type on the keyboard' or 'type on a keyboard'. 'Go to university' is more natural without 'the' in general contexts. Remove duplicate fillers. Suggestions: Use 'type on the keyboard' and 'go to university'.

× Oh, actually I learned the university because, uh, when I was a high school student, I haven't type keyboard, so it is first for me to type keyboard in the university.

✓ Oh, actually I learned it at university because when I was a high school student I hadn't typed on a keyboard, so it was my first time typing on a keyboard at university.

Tense and verb form errors: Use past perfect 'hadn't typed' to indicate an action not done before a past time. Use past simple 'was' for 'it was my first time'. Prepositions and articles: 'learned it at university' and 'typing on a keyboard' are correct collocations. Suggestions: Use 'hadn't typed', 'first time', and 'at university'.

× Uh, through the university's assignment, I can improve my typing skills because, uh, I focus on the writing assignment in the computer.

✓ Through university assignments I can improve my typing skills because I focus on writing assignments on the computer.

Preposition and article use: 'through university assignments' or 'through the university's assignments' is better; avoid singular 'assignment' when speaking generally. Use 'on the computer' rather than 'in the computer'. Suggestions: Use plural 'assignments' and 'on the computer'.