打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Покращити чіткість і природність відповіді: прибрати заповнювачі (uh, umm), виправити помилки лексики/граматики і дати коротке обґрунтування. Використовуйте зв’язки (for example, however) і максимум 3–4 речення.

示例: It depends on the situation. At school I usually write by hand because the teachers require handwritten work. However, when I communicate with friends or family, I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient.

建议: Зробіть відповідь більш впевненою і структурованою, уникати заповнювачів, використовувати зв'язки (instead, usually) і точну лексику (messaging apps, smartphone). Дайте одну коротку причину.

示例: Not on a laptop—usually on my smartphone. I don't use a laptop daily, but I type on my phone every day to message friends and send notes to my family using messaging apps.

建议: Уникайте невизначених фраз і зайвих заповнювачів, замініть їх конкретними часовими маркерами і деталями — наприклад, вказати вік або тип уроків. Зв'язки (because, and) використовуйте економно.

示例: I can't recall the exact year, but I learned to type as a child, around primary school age. My parents taught me some basics at home and later we had computer lessons at school that improved my skills.

建议: Дайте конкретні методи замість невизначених заперечень. Виключіть повтори і звукові заповнювачі, опишіть один–два реальні способи тренування (тренажери, практика, коректна постава).

示例: I try to improve my typing by practising on online typing tutors and by paying attention to my posture and hand position. I also set small goals, like increasing my accuracy and speed with short daily exercises.

× Uh, it depends on the situation of my life.

✓ Uh, it depends on the situation in my life.

The preposition 'in' is correct with 'situation' to indicate context or circumstances. Use 'in my life' instead of 'of my life' for natural English. Suggestion: say 'it depends on the situation in my life' or more simply 'it depends on the situation.'

× At school I usually ride by hand because tasks are required.

✓ At school I usually write by hand because tasks are required.

The verb 'ride' is incorrect here; the intended action is 'write' and the correct expression is 'write by hand.' Suggestion: use 'write by hand' for handwriting activities.

× Umm. But when I'm talking and messaging friends, I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient and all people are used to do it.

✓ But when I'm talking to or messaging friends, I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient and everyone is used to doing it.

Several issues: 'talking and messaging friends' needs 'talking to friends' or 'talking with friends.' 'All people' is unnatural; use 'everyone.' 'used to do it' requires gerund: 'used to doing it.' Suggestion: 'talking to or messaging friends' and 'everyone is used to doing it.'

× No, because I don't use the laptop every day, but I'm often typing on my phone because it's my daily routine to chat with my friends or to write something to my mom.

✓ No, because I don't use a laptop every day, but I often type on my phone because it's my daily routine to chat with my friends or write something to my mom.

Use 'a laptop' (article) and simple present 'I often type' rather than 'I'm often typing' for habitual actions. Also omit unnecessary 'to' before 'write.' Suggestion: use simple present for routines and include appropriate articles.

× Uh, in the messengers.

✓ Uh, in messaging apps.

'In the messengers' is non-idiomatic. Native speakers say 'in messaging apps' or 'in messenger apps.' Suggestion: use 'messaging apps'.

× I don't remember it properly, but probably I learned it when I was, uh, a kid because, uh, it's an important skill in our modern time and I learned it with my parents and also at school when we had lessons on our computers.

✓ I don't remember exactly, but I probably learned it when I was a kid because it's an important skill nowadays, and I learned it with my parents and also at school when we had computer lessons.

Use 'I don't remember exactly' (more natural). 'Probably' should be placed before the verb. 'In our modern time' is better as 'nowadays.' 'lessons on our computers' is better as 'computer lessons.' Suggestion: reorder adverbs and choose idiomatic phrases: 'I probably learned it when I was a kid... nowadays... computer lessons.'

× I don't think I, I have to improve it, but there are probably there are some tips about uh, making it better, but I'm not very sure that I have to do it because I think I have good typing skills.

✓ I don't think I have to improve it, but there are probably some tips for improving it; I'm not sure I need to because I think I have good typing skills.

Remove the repeated 'I,' use 'have to' correctly, and prefer 'tips for improving it' or 'tips on how to improve it.' Combine clauses clearly and use 'need to' for necessity. Suggestion: simplify and avoid repetition: 'I don't think I have to improve it, but there are probably some tips on how to improve.'