打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and directly answer the question first. Reduce fillers ("umm") and correct phrasing. Use one clear topic sentence (I prefer typing/handwriting) then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it under 4–5 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing now because most of my work is done on a computer. Moreover, typing is faster and easier to edit than handwriting, so it saves me time when I have many documents to prepare.

建议: Start with a direct answer (desktop or laptop) and avoid repetition. Remove hesitations and use a linking phrase to explain why. Give a brief specific detail about frequency or purpose.

示例: I type on a laptop every day because my job requires me to write emails and reports. As a result, I usually type for about six hours during a typical workday.

建议: Provide a clear time reference and one specific detail about what you learned. Remove hesitations and correct minor grammar ("explained to me"). Use linking words to connect clauses.

示例: I learned to type in secondary school during a computer programming class. My teacher explained proper finger placement and taught exercises to increase speed, which helped me a lot.

建议: Answer directly with current actions you take to improve. Use present tense for ongoing activities and be specific about methods and results. Remove unnecessary fillers and make it concise.

示例: To improve my typing, I regularly practice with online typing tests and lessons. After a few weeks of daily 20-minute practice sessions, my speed increased and my error rate decreased.

× When I was a kid, I used to love UMM writing with my hands because that was one of my daily activities in my school.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to love writing by hand because it was one of my daily activities at school.

The sentence has awkward wording and incorrect preposition and word choice. 'UMM' is an interjection and should be removed. 'Writing with my hands' is better expressed as 'writing by hand.' Use 'at school' not 'in my school' for regular activities. Also replace 'that was' with 'it was' to refer to the activity.

× But when I started working then I started umm doing typing and I did like a lot in comparison to handwriting.

✓ But when I started working, I began typing, and I did it much more than handwriting.

Redundant and informal fillers 'umm' and 'then' should be removed or reduced. Use 'began typing' instead of 'started doing typing.' 'I did like a lot' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I did it much more' to compare frequency.

× I do type on a computer every day because that's one of the part of my umm job task because I've like all my work is dependent on computers so I type a lot every day.

✓ I type on a computer every day because it's part of my job; almost all my work depends on computers, so I type a lot every day.

Multiple issues: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' is not needed for affirmative present simple. 'One of the part' is incorrect; use 'part' or 'one part' or 'part of my job.' 'I've like all my work is dependent' is incorrect structure; use 'almost all my work depends on computers.' Use semicolon or split into sentences for clarity.

× When I was in school I had a subject called computer programming.

✓ When I was in school, I had a subject called Computer Programming.

This sentence is mostly correct but needs a comma after the introductory clause for clarity; capitalize the subject name as a course title. No tense change required.

× In that subject my teacher taught me how to type and she also, umm explained me the tricks and tactics of typing fast.

✓ In that subject, my teacher taught me how to type and she also explained the tricks and tactics for typing quickly.

'Explained me' is incorrect; English uses 'explain something to someone,' so here use 'explained the tricks to me' or 'explained the tricks.' Also change 'typing fast' to 'typing quickly' (adverb). Remove 'umm' and add comma after introductory phrase.

× When I started typing, well, I was at work then I did realize that I'm not very fast in typing so I did take some online test which helps me to improve my typing speed.

✓ When I started typing at work, I realized that I wasn't very fast, so I took some online tests that helped me improve my typing speed.

Tense consistency errors: mix of past and present. Use past tense throughout ('realized', 'wasn't', 'took', 'helped'). 'I did take' is emphatic and unnecessary; use 'I took.' 'Some online test' should be plural 'tests.' 'Which helps me to improve' should be 'that helped me improve' to match past time. Also remove filler 'well' and 'then' or reposition them properly.