打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, correct common errors (e.g. 'electronic devices', 'handwriting is', 'waste of paper'), avoid redundancy, and give one concise reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting. Because typing is faster and more convenient, I can edit texts easily and save documents without wasting paper.

建议: Improve accuracy and clarity: use the correct job title ('sales assistant'), avoid vague phrases ('every kind of electronic device'), and link ideas with a reason. Keep it concise and include a short detail about what you type.

示例: Yes, I type every day at work. I work as a sales assistant, so I type customer orders and emails on a laptop and sometimes use my phone for quick messages.

建议: Organize chronologically and fix grammar: use past tense ('I learned'), remove fillers ('like'), and clarify school subject name ('typing' or 'ICT'). Provide two brief, specific details linked by a connecting word.

示例: I learned to type when I was six, with my dad teaching me on our first home computer. Later, at school we had an ICT class where we practised typing and used simple programs like Paint.

建议: Be specific and grammatically correct: say which activities help you improve (typing practice, messaging, typing games), use linking words ('for example', 'also'), and avoid repetition. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly, for example by messaging friends and using typing games to increase speed and accuracy. I also try to type essays and emails to build practical skills.

× I really like typing and using computer and electronical device.

✓ I really like typing and using computers and electronic devices.

Plural nouns and correct adjective form are needed: 'computer' and 'electronical device' should be plural because general preference refers to devices in general, and 'electronical' is incorrect — use the adjective 'electronic'. Use 'computers and electronic devices'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general categories and correct adjective forms.

× I feel that handwriting it's so much slower and waste of paper.

✓ I feel that handwriting is much slower and wastes paper.

Remove the contraction 'handwriting it's' (redundant) and correct verb forms: 'is' not 'it's' after noun, and 'waste' must agree with singular subject 'handwriting', so use 'wastes'. Also 'so much' can be simplified to 'much'. Suggestion: use 'handwriting is' and ensure verb agrees with subject.

× So if I would be able to type for me would be always the better choice.

✓ So if I were able to type, it would always be the better choice for me.

This is a conditional sentence requiring subjunctive: use 'if I were' not 'if I would be'. Also include the subject 'it' for the main clause and place 'for me' at the end. 'Would' goes in the main clause, not in the 'if' clause. Suggestion: use correct second conditional structure: 'If I were ..., it would ...'.

× Yeah, actually I do it for work.

✓ Yes, I actually do it for work.

Word order and register: 'Yeah' is informal; use 'Yes' in formal answers. Also 'do it for work' is acceptable but placing 'actually' after 'I' is more natural. Suggestion: prefer 'Yes, I actually do it for work.' in test context.

× I work as a sale assistant and I have to type every day for a bunch of clients and I also use phone to call and every kind of electronical device.

✓ I work as a sales assistant and I have to type every day for many clients, and I also use a phone and other kinds of electronic devices.

Use correct noun form 'sales assistant' not 'sale assistant'; 'a phone' requires an article; 'bunch of clients' is informal—use 'many clients'; 'every kind of electronical device' should be 'other kinds of electronic devices'. Suggestion: use correct job title, articles, plural forms and more formal quantifiers.

× I learn when my dad when I was 6 by the 1st computer and I was allowed to use it just one hour a day.

✓ I learned from my dad when I was six on the family's first computer, and I was allowed to use it for just one hour a day.

Use past tense 'learned' for a past event. 'When my dad' is redundant; use 'from my dad'. '1st' should be written as 'first' and add possession 'family's' if intended. Use 'for just one hour a day' for duration. Suggestion: use past tense verbs and clearer phrasing for time and possession.

× Then also in school we had like one subject called tap technology and during this hour we were allowed to use paint and other app on computer and.

✓ Also at school we had a subject called 'typing technology', and during that hour we were allowed to use Paint and other apps on the computer.

Use 'at school' not 'in school' (both acceptable, but 'at school' is natural here), avoid filler 'like', use article 'a subject', correct subject name 'typing technology' (assuming intended), capitalize software names 'Paint', use plural 'apps', and finish the sentence—remove trailing 'and'. Suggestion: remove fillers, use correct nouns and complete the sentence.

× I learn when my dad when I was 6 by the 1st computer and I was allowed to use it just one hour a day.

✓ I learned from my dad when I was six on the family's first computer, and I was allowed to use it for just one hour a day.

Duplicate of earlier: ensure past tense 'learned' for past events and consistent number words ('six', 'first'). Suggestion: use past tense and spell out small numbers in speaking transcripts.

× I improve my typing by trying to be faster and mail my friends and write on a message on Apple App on WhatsApp and using like games and every kind of activity that's allowed me to.

✓ I improve my typing by trying to type faster, emailing my friends, writing messages on apps like WhatsApp, and using games and other activities that help me.

Use parallel gerund forms: 'typing faster, emailing, writing' etc. 'Mail my friends' should be 'emailing my friends'; 'write on a message' is incorrect—use 'writing messages'; 'Apple App on WhatsApp' is awkward—use 'apps like WhatsApp'. 'That's allowed me to' is incorrect; use 'that help me' or 'that allow me to practice'. Suggestion: keep parallel structure with verbs in -ing form and use correct collocations like 'email someone', 'write messages', 'apps like WhatsApp'.