打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more concise and natural: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing (e.g. "because due to"). Use varied vocabulary like "communicate", "search for information" and a brief example.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use digital devices for most communication. For example, I message friends and search for information online several times a day, so typing is faster and more convenient.

建议: Start with a direct topic sentence and remove filler words. Use one linking phrase to add a specific reason and include a short example of tasks you do when typing. Replace "encounter" with a clearer verb like "teach" or "meet".

示例: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I teach language lessons online. For example, during Zoom classes I type comments, prepare lesson materials, and respond to students' questions.

建议: Give a clearer time reference and avoid vague phrases. Use a simple past statement followed by a specific reason and an example. Improve grammar ("interest in using computers").

示例: I learned to type when I was a child because I was very interested in computers. For instance, by age ten I was regularly using a laptop to chat with friends and practise typing.

建议: Provide a more specific and varied description of methods, use linking words and avoid hesitation. Mention frequency and other techniques (practice apps, lessons) to show range.

示例: I improve my typing by taking timed typing tests and practising with online lessons. For example, I use a typing app twice a week to track my speed and also practise touch-typing exercises to reduce errors.

× I personally prefer typing because due to a huge number of developed technologies nowadays I need to type a lot to communicate with my friends to look up some information, so I do it very often.

✓ I personally prefer typing because, due to the large number of technologies developed nowadays, I need to type a lot to communicate with my friends and to look up information, so I do it very often.

The phrase 'because due to' is redundant; use either 'because' or 'due to'. 'a huge number of developed technologies' is awkward — 'the large number of technologies developed nowadays' is clearer. Use 'and' to connect two purposes ('to communicate' and 'to look up information'). Remove the article before 'information' since it is uncountable here. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: choose one causal connector ('because' or 'due to') and place commas around the 'due to' phrase when it modifies the clause.

× Yes, I do type a lot on a desktop keyboard every day because I organize language lessons and, uh, I encounter my students via Zoom, for example, very often, so I need to type a lot.

✓ Yes, I type a lot on a desktop keyboard every day because I organize language lessons and I meet my students via Zoom, for example, very often, so I need to type a lot.

The original 'I do type' is grammatically possible but unnecessarily emphatic; simple present 'I type' is more natural. 'I encounter my students' is awkward for routine meetings; use 'I meet my students' for scheduled or regular interactions. Remove filler 'uh' in writing. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and choose natural verbs ('meet' instead of 'encounter').

× I think it happened back in my childhood because I expressed a huge interest to using computer, so that's why I tried to use a laptop very often to communicate with my friends via typing.

✓ I think it happened back in my childhood because I showed a great interest in using computers, so I used a laptop very often to communicate with my friends by typing.

Use 'showed' or 'had' rather than 'expressed' for developing interest in the past. The verb 'interest' collocates with the preposition 'in' (interest in something), not 'to'. Use plural 'computers' or 'computer use'. 'Tried to use a laptop very often' is contradictory; use past habitual 'I used a laptop very often'. Use 'by typing' to indicate the method. Suggestion: use correct verb tense for past habitual actions and correct preposition with 'interest'.

× Sometimes I run a test where I can type with my eyes closed to check my speed, uh, and improve my typing skills.

✓ Sometimes I run a test in which I type with my eyes closed to check my speed and improve my typing skills.

Use 'in which' or 'where' is acceptable but 'in which' is more formal and precise for a test. 'I can type' suggests possibility rather than habitual action; 'I type' is better if describing what happens during the test. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use consistent verb forms to describe habitual actions ('I type' rather than 'I can type') and avoid filler words in written form.