打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は主旨が明確で適切だが、文法や語順、冗長さを改善するとより自然に聞こえます。具体的には：1) 主題文を明確にし、動詞の形を整える（例: “I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient.”）。2) 冗長な表現を避け、理由を順序立てて述べる（“it corrects mistakes”ではなく“it helps correct mistakes”など）。3) 接続詞を使って文の流れを滑らかにする（“because…, and…”）。4) 不明瞭な語句（“share any”）は具体化する（“share documents or messages”）。

示例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. It also helps correct mistakes quickly, and it makes communicating online easier. For example, I can share documents or messages instantly, which saves a lot of time.

建议: 答えは直接的で理由も述べているが、語順と冠詞の使い方を改善するとより自然になります。また詳細を一つ加えると説得力が増します。具体的には：1) 冠詞を正しく使う（“a laptop keyboard”）。2) 主題文の後に理由を短く続ける。3) 具体的な機能や状況を一つ追加する（例：特定のキーやショートカットを使う）。

示例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I work on my laptop most of the time. At school I use a desktop, but for homework and online classes I prefer my laptop because I know the shortcut keys and it’s more portable.

建议: 答えの内容は分かるが、時制と語法の誤り、繰り返しが目立ちます。改善点：1) 過去形の一貫性を保つ（“I learned” と続けて “it was the first time I touched”）。2) 冗長な語句を省く（“and also a desktop”は重複）。3) 具体的な背景や感想を一文加えると良い。

示例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I moved to Thailand in 2018. It was the first time I used a desktop computer, so I had to practice a lot at school to get comfortable with the keys.

建议: 方法は示されているが、文法（動名詞・不定詞）、表現の自然さ、繰り返しを整える必要があります。改善点：1) 動名詞や目的語の扱いを正しくする（“practice typing”はOKだが“touching keyboard”は不自然→“practising typing”）。2) 具体的な頻度や目標を示す（“20 minutes a day”など）。3) 話し言葉の「uh」を避け、サイトの機能を簡潔に説明する。

示例: I improve my typing by practising on websites like monkeytype.com for about 20 minutes each day. The site records my speed and accuracy, so I can track my progress and focus on reducing mistakes.

× I would prefer typing because it is faster and making it more convenient and it also deletes some mistakes that the people make.

✓ I would prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient, and it also deletes some mistakes that people make.

The sentence contains incorrect verb form and unnecessary article use. 'making it more convenient' is a present participle phrase wrongly used; use adjective 'more convenient' instead (Present tense issue). Also 'the people' should be 'people' (Incorrect use of pronouns/definite article). Combine clauses with 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use parallel structure ('faster and more convenient') and omit 'the' before general plural nouns.

× Also typing is more convenient for when talking to people online which saves more time and it is quicker way to share any.

✓ Also, typing is more convenient for talking to people online, which saves time, and it is a quicker way to share anything.

Errors include inappropriate prepositional phrase 'for when talking' (use 'for talking' or just 'talking') and missing article before 'quicker way' (use 'a quicker way'). 'Any' is incomplete; use 'anything'. These are incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and article errors. Suggestion: simplify to 'typing is more convenient for talking to people online' and use 'a quicker way to share anything'.

× Every day I use laptop keyboard to type because I mostly use a desktop at school and since I take ICT lessons I have to know all the functions for keyboard.

✓ Every day I use a laptop keyboard to type because I mostly use a desktop at school, and since I take ICT lessons I have to know all the functions of the keyboard.

Missing articles: 'laptop keyboard' should be 'a laptop keyboard' (singular count noun) and 'functions for keyboard' should be 'functions of the keyboard'. This is a singular and plural/article issue. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns and 'of' to show possession/relationship.

× Every day I use laptop keyboard to type because I mostly use a desktop at school and since I take ICT lessons I have to know all the functions for keyboard.

✓ Every day I use a laptop keyboard to type because I mostly use a desktop at school, and since I take ICT lessons I have to know all the functions of the keyboard.

The verb tenses are acceptable, but sentence clarity improves with commas and conjunctions. Use present simple for habitual actions ('use', 'take', 'have to know'). Suggestion: add commas to separate clauses for readability.

× I learned how to type on keyboard when I came to Thailand in 2018 and this was the first time that I touch a desktop keyboard and also a desktop.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I came to Thailand in 2018, and this was the first time that I touched a desktop keyboard and a desktop computer.

Past tense issue: 'touch' should be past 'touched' to match 'learned' and 'came'. Also missing article 'a' before 'keyboard' and 'desktop computer' is clearer than just 'desktop'. Suggestion: use past simple consistently for past events and include articles for countable nouns.

× To improve my typing, I think touching keyboard and practice typing on any website is important for me.

✓ To improve my typing, I think touching the keyboard and practicing typing on websites is important for me.

Incorrect verb + -ing form and article use: after 'think' with 'I think', use gerunds in parallel ('touching' and 'practicing'), and include 'the keyboard'. Also 'any website' is awkward; use 'websites' or 'a website'. Suggestion: keep parallel gerund forms and appropriate articles.

× I will use monkeytype.com to type every day and uh, it checks the accuracy of it.

✓ I will use monkeytype.com to type every day, and it checks my accuracy.

Incorrect past participle not directly present but pronoun use and awkward phrasing: 'checks the accuracy of it' is unnatural; use 'checks my accuracy'. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use concise pronoun 'my' to show whose accuracy is checked.

× This will improve my typing skill every day.

✓ This will improve my typing skills every day.

Incorrect use of singular 'skill' vs plural 'skills'—'typing skills' is the common collocation. Also tense is future ('will improve') which matches intention. Suggestion: use 'typing skills' to sound natural.