打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は明確ですが、文法ミス、繰り返し、具体例の欠如があります。まず簡潔なトピック文を使い、その後に理由と具体例を付け加えてください。また「check my mistake」ではなく「check my mistakes」など複数形や冠詞を正しく使い、同じ語句の重複を避けましょう。接続詞（because, so, for example）を自然に使うとより論理的になります。

示例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient for work and study. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly correct mistakes with spellcheck and editing tools, which saves time and improves accuracy.

建议: 答えは不十分で文法や語順の誤りが多く、具体性が低いです。まずはどちらを使っているかを明確に述べ、次に理由と一つの具体的な例を付け加えてください。前置詞（onlineではなく online）や動詞の形（I am doing / I take online classes）に注意してください。

示例: I usually use a desktop computer for studying because it has a large screen that helps me follow online English lessons. For example, I take live English classes twice a week and the desktop makes it easier to view the teacher and slides.

建议: 回答はおおむね意味が通じますが、時制や語法、語の重複（technology technology）に注意が必要です。最初に時期を述べ、その後にどのような授業かやどんなスキルを身につけたかを具体的に説明しましょう。過去形を一貫して使うことも大切です。

示例: I learned to type when I was in junior high school. I took a technology class where we practiced touch-typing, and by the end of the course I could type accurately using all my fingers.

建议: 回答が質問に適切に答えておらず、意味があいまいで繰り返し（when when）があります。改善方法を具体的に述べてください（練習方法、アプリ、時間配分や目標）。現在形で習慣を説明し、接続語で理由や結果をつなげましょう。

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing programs for 15–20 minutes a day. I also focus on accuracy first, then speed, and track my progress with weekly typing tests to set clear goals.

× For example I doing online English.

✓ For example, I do online English lessons.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'doing' without an auxiliary verb. After 'I', the base verb 'do' should be used for habitual actions. Use a comma after 'For example' and specify 'lessons' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple present 'I do' for routines: 'I do online English lessons.'

× What I prefer is typing because it is efficient for work and study and I can I can check my mistake easily.

✓ What I prefer is typing because it is efficient for work and study and I can check my mistakes easily.

There is a duplicated phrase 'I can I can' and 'mistake' should be plural when referring to errors in general. Use simple present for general preferences and remove the duplicate. Also pluralize 'mistake' to 'mistakes'. Add a comma if needed for readability.

× Yes, I use UH desktop for study because I can study English on online to speak English.

✓ Yes, I use a desktop for studying because I can learn English online to practice speaking.

Problems: 'UH' seems unintended; 'a desktop' needs the article; 'for study' should be 'for studying' (gerund after preposition); 'on online' is incorrect — use 'online' without 'on'; 'to speak English' better as 'to practice speaking'. Use consistent verb forms and correct preposition use.

× When I was junior high school student, I took a class for technology technology.

✓ When I was a junior high school student, I took a technology class.

Missing article 'a' before 'junior high school student'. Repetition 'technology technology' should be one 'technology'. 'A technology class' is natural word order. Past tense 'took' is correct.

× So I think I get a skills for typing at that time.

✓ So I think I gained typing skills at that time.

'Get a skills' is ungrammatical: use 'gained' or 'acquired' and plural 'skills' without 'a'. 'For typing' can be simplified to 'typing skills'. Use past tense 'gained' to match 'at that time'.

× I suppose it is important to use a laptop when when I do walk or study.

✓ I suppose it is important to use a laptop when I walk or study.

Duplicate 'when when' should be a single 'when'. 'Do walk' is unnecessary; use simple present 'walk'. The meaning may be unclear—if you mean 'while walking' use 'when I walk' or 'while walking'. Remove the extra auxiliary 'do'.