打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid contradictory or unclear phrases like “very old fashioned chic style.”

示例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and expressive. However, I type every day for work, so I rarely write by hand nowadays.

建议: Start with a direct answer, then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid trailing or incomplete sentences.

示例: I type on a laptop every day. My company issues laptops to all staff, so I use mine for both work tasks and personal activities like email and browsing.

建议: Give a clear time reference and one concise reason with a linking word. Remove repeated phrases and avoid filler words like “I think” repeated twice.

示例: I learned to type at about seven years old. Because I grew up with many siblings, they helped teach me reading and typing at an early age.

建议: Answer directly, then give a clear reason and one specific example of practice. Avoid repeating the same point and keep it to two or three sentences.

示例: I don't follow a formal practice routine; I improve simply by using my keyboard daily. For example, I type emails for work and chat on social media, which keeps my speed and accuracy sharp.

× I prefer handwriting because it seems more personal and very old fashioned chic style.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it seems more personal and has a very old-fashioned, chic style.

The original sentence mixes noun phrases and adjectives awkwardly. 'Old fashioned' should be hyphenated as 'old-fashioned' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Also 'style' needs a linking verb 'has' to connect 'handwriting' with 'a very old-fashioned, chic style'. Adding a comma between 'old-fashioned' and 'chic' clarifies that both adjectives modify 'style'. Suggestion: use a linking verb and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns.

× But because of my lifestyle I type every day and I rarely do handwriting because I work at office, all I do is type.

✓ But because of my lifestyle I type every day and I rarely handwrite because I work at the office; all I do is type.

'Do handwriting' is incorrect; the verb is 'handwrite'. Also 'work at office' needs the definite article 'the office'. A semicolon or separate sentence improves clarity. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'handwrite' and include articles where needed.

× My job provides a laptop for every employee, so I use that for my everyday stuff and also doing my work and.

✓ My job provides a laptop for every employee, so I use it for my everyday tasks and for my work.

The original sentence ends with an incomplete clause 'and' and mixes gerund 'doing' awkwardly after 'and'. Replace 'that' with 'it' to refer to 'a laptop', change 'everyday stuff' to the more formal 'everyday tasks', and make parallel structure with 'for my work'. Suggestion: complete the sentence, maintain parallel structure, and avoid trailing conjunctions.

× I think I was around at the age of seven maybe.

✓ I think I was around seven years old.

'Was around at the age of seven maybe' is wordy and contains unnecessary prepositions. The idiomatic expression is 'around seven years old' or 'about seven'. Remove 'at the age of' and 'maybe' (or place 'maybe' appropriately) for clarity. Suggestion: use concise, idiomatic age expressions.

× I think I learned to type on a keyboard quite early because I had a lot of siblings and they all taught me about how to read, how to type and everything.

✓ I think I learned to type on a keyboard quite early because I had many siblings who taught me how to read, how to type, and other things.

'A lot of siblings' is colloquial; 'many siblings' is preferable. 'They all taught me about how to read' is wordy—use 'who taught me how to read'. 'And everything' is vague; replace with 'and other things' or specify. Suggestion: use 'who' for people and streamline the list items.

× I don't really do much to improve my typing.

✓ I don't really do much to improve my typing.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the present tense context; no change needed.

× I'm a pretty fast typer because I do it every day.

✓ I'm a pretty fast typist because I practice every day.

'Typer' is informal; 'typist' or 'fast at typing' is more natural. 'Do it every day' is vague; 'practice every day' is clearer and matches habitual action. Suggestion: use more precise noun and verb.

× I write emails to my clients and I also chat with my friends a lot on social media.

✓ I write emails to my clients and also chat with my friends a lot on social media.

The original is grammatically acceptable; minor stylistic improvement removes the redundant 'I'. Keeping one subject for coordinated verbs is more concise. No tense change required.

× So there's not a specific thing that I do to improve my typing.

✓ So there isn't any specific thing I do to improve my typing.

'There's not a specific thing that I do' is understandable but slightly informal. Use 'there isn't any specific thing I do' or 'I don't do anything specific' for smoother phrasing. Suggestion: prefer 'there isn't' and omit unnecessary relative clauses.

× I just use it every day.

✓ I just use it every day.

This sentence is correct in present simple to describe habitual action; no change needed.

× I think that's why I'm good at it.

✓ I think that's why I'm good at it.

This sentence is grammatically correct and appropriate; no change needed.