打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and fluent: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, like), and give one specific example with a brief explanation. Use linking words (for example, so) correctly and limit to 3–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing on my mobile because it is more convenient and saves time. For example, when I go to the gym I record my workouts and sets in a notes app, so I can easily track progress. This also makes the information portable and searchable.

建议: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting reasons. Remove hesitations and repetitive phrasing. Use linking words to show cause and result (because, so) and be specific about frequency.

示例: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because I work in the stock business and need to record transactions frequently. I often check prices and update my records every few minutes during trading hours, so using a laptop is most practical.

建议: Give a clear direct answer (time or age) and then a concise supporting detail. Avoid vague wording and repetition; use past tense consistently and linking words (for example, because) to explain how you learned.

示例: I learned to type informally when I was a child, around the time I started playing games on my family's phone. Because I used the device often and experimented with apps like Paint, I gradually got comfortable with the keyboard.

建议: Answer directly with practical, specific methods and avoid filler words. Provide 2–3 clear improvement techniques and link them with reasons (because, so) to show effect.

示例: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice and using online typing exercises. For example, I use typing tutor websites to practice accuracy and also send messages frequently to build speed, which helps me type faster and with fewer errors.

× I prefer having uh, all the information in my mobile because, uh, this thing is more convenient and time saving.

✓ I prefer having all the information on my mobile because it is more convenient and time-saving.

Use of preposition: say 'on my mobile' not 'in my mobile' for content on a device. Also 'time-saving' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun or left as 'it saves time'. Remove filler words for clarity.

× For example, like in gym, if I want to like record my all workout and sets, so I always make them make them in the notes so it will be easy for me to carry.

✓ For example, at the gym, if I want to record all my workouts and sets, I always put them in the notes so they are easy for me to carry.

Preposition and word order: use 'at the gym'. Quantifier and noun order: 'all my workouts' not 'my all workout'. Remove repeated phrases and 'like' and 'so' redundancy. Use plural 'workouts' and pronoun agreement 'they are' for 'workouts and sets'.

× I think it's daily for me, even not a daily after every like minute or every 10 minutes.

✓ I think I use it daily; in fact, I use it many times a day, sometimes every few minutes or every ten minutes.

Tense and expression: 'it's daily for me' is awkward. Use present simple 'I use it daily'. Clarify frequency with 'many times a day' and avoid 'a daily' which is incorrect.

× I used to like try something on my keyboard because I, I am like in the stocking business.

✓ I used to try things on my keyboard because I am in the stock trading business.

Word choice: 'stocking business' is incorrect; 'stock trading' or 'stock market' is correct. Remove filler 'like' and use plural 'things' for general actions.

× I buy stock and sell them.

✓ I buy stocks and sell them.

Count noun usage: 'stock' as countable plural is 'stocks' when referring to individual shares. Use plural to match 'them'.

× So I, I have to like make a record. So I just always like use my laptop for that.

✓ So I have to keep a record, so I always use my laptop for that.

Verb choice and redundancy: 'make a record' is acceptable but 'keep a record' is more natural. Remove filler 'like' and repeated 'I' for clarity.

× I don't know like there is any specific time when when I learn this thing.

✓ I don't know if there was any specific time when I learned this.

Use of tense and connector: 'if there was' fits backreference, and past tense 'learned' is correct for a past event. Remove duplicate 'when'.

× But I the thing I remember is like it will usually start from like playing a games on the mobile.

✓ But what I remember is that it usually started from playing games on the mobile.

Tense and article: use past 'started' to match past context. Use 'playing games' (no 'a' before plural 'games') and 'on the mobile' -> 'on mobile' or 'on my mobile'; here 'on the mobile' is acceptable but 'on my mobile' is clearer.

× Like I remember when my father bought a game. So I just have to always have his phone and play the game and on the same time I start making a painting on the paint app.

✓ I remember when my father bought a game, I would always have his phone and play the game, and at the same time I started making drawings in the Paint app.

Tense consistency: use past habitual 'would' or past simple 'started'. Word choice: 'painting' -> 'drawings' or 'paintings' but 'in the Paint app' is clearer. Use 'at the same time' rather than 'on the same time'.

× So I think that this time.

✓ So I think that was the time.

Tense: refer to past event with past tense 'was the time' rather than present.

× I don't know, like, how can I improve, but the, the simple things that I can browse about how, how we can improve our typing is, uh, just like, practice it and, uh, do it again and again on the keyboard and also try to like, uh, do a text messages and by which you can increase your typing speed.

✓ I don't know exactly how to improve, but simple things I found when browsing about improving typing are: practice it repeatedly on the keyboard and try sending text messages, which can increase your typing speed.

Grammar and style: Change question-like 'how can I improve' to infinitive 'how to improve' within the sentence. Use plural agreement 'things are' and remove filler words. 'Do a text messages' is incorrect; use 'send text messages'. Clarify clause 'which can increase your typing speed'.