打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and incorrect phrases ("handwriting may be disappeared").

示例: I prefer handwriting because I find it faster for taking notes and it helps me remember information better. However, typing is important too, since technology is advancing and many tasks require digital skills.

建议: Open with a direct answer, then give specific reasons with clear linking words. Correct grammatical errors ("I'm my major is"). Reduce repetition and fillers.

示例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. I use it for writing essays and for coding because I'm a computer science student, so I spend several hours daily programming and typing on my laptop.

建议: Give a clear time reference and a brief sequence of events. Fix tense and clarity issues ("firstly I couldn't type normally, but then I got used to it"). Avoid repetition like "it was a it was" and fillers.

示例: I learned to type about a year ago when my parents bought me a new laptop for studying. At first I couldn't type quickly, but after practicing regularly I became comfortable with the keyboard.

建议: Structure your answer: start with a direct statement of how you improve, then list specific methods using linking words. Correct vocabulary ("imply" -> "improve"), grammar ("everyday" -> "every day"), and verb forms.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing every day and using online typing tutors. For example, I use typing websites that provide exercises and track my speed, and I also practice coding regularly to build accuracy.

× But typing is also vital because technology is regularly developing now and, uh, in the future we everybody should know typing and, uh, handwriting may be disappeared.

✓ But typing is also vital because technology is developing rapidly now and in the future everyone should know how to type, and handwriting may disappear.

Original uses 'we everybody' which is incorrect pronoun order and form; 'everybody' or 'everyone' should be used alone. Also 'we everybody' is redundant. 'Know typing' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'know how to type.' 'Handwriting may be disappeared' misuses passive with 'may' and past participle; use 'may disappear.' Also 'regularly developing' is odd for technology; 'developing rapidly' is more natural.

× Every day I'm typing on my laptop keyboard because I'm working some essays on my laptop and uh, actually I'm my major is computer science, so I'm, uh, coding every day.

✓ Every day I type on my laptop keyboard because I work on some essays on my laptop and, actually, my major is computer science, so I code every day.

Original mixes present continuous and simple present inappropriately: 'I'm typing' and 'I'm working some essays' are unnatural when describing habitual actions; use simple present 'I type' and 'I work on some essays.' 'I'm my major is' is ungrammatical; use 'my major is.' 'Coding every day' should be 'I code every day.' Subject-verb forms adjusted for habitual actions.

× Actually, I learned to type on a keyboard when my parents bought me a new laptop. It was a it was a year ago and uh, they bought my laptop for studying and then when I opened, firstly I can't type normally, but then I used to.

✓ Actually, I learned to type on a keyboard when my parents bought me a new laptop. It was a year ago and they bought the laptop for my studies. At first I couldn't type normally, but then I got used to it.

Errors: 'It was a it was a year ago' repetition removed. 'They bought my laptop for studying' is awkward; use 'bought the laptop for my studies.' 'When I opened' is unclear and likely unnecessary. 'Firstly I can't type normally' mixes past context with present 'can't'; use past 'couldn't.' 'But then I used to' is incomplete; the correct phrase is 'got used to it.' This uses correct past participle and idiomatic expression.

× Umm, actually there are lots of methods to imply typing.

✓ Umm, actually there are lots of methods to improve typing.

'Imply' is the wrong verb here; the correct verb is 'improve.' 'Methods to imply typing' is incorrect collocation; use 'methods to improve typing' or 'methods for improving typing.' This is a preposition/verb choice issue.

× If you just, uh, if you merely will type everyday, you typing will improve.

✓ If you simply type every day, your typing will improve.

Conditional sentence: do not use 'will' in the if-clause for a real conditional. Use simple present 'if you type' and future 'your typing will improve.' Also 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial), and 'you typing' should be 'your typing.'

× Also, uh, in the Internet there are lots of sites that uh trains typing.

✓ Also, on the Internet there are lots of sites that train typing.

Use 'on the Internet' rather than 'in the Internet.' 'Sites that trains' has subject-verb agreement error; 'sites that train' is correct because 'sites' is plural. 'Train typing' is acceptable though 'teach typing' or 'help you practice typing' could be more natural.

× I trained myself from that kind of sites.

✓ I trained myself using those kinds of sites.

'From that kind of sites' is ungrammatical preposition and singular/plural mismatch. Use 'using those kinds of sites' or 'on those kinds of sites.' Also 'trained myself' is acceptable but 'practiced on those sites' is more natural.