打字— Part 1 评分报告

× I'm prefer typing because it's more convenient.

✓ I prefer typing because it's more convenient.

Incorrect use of 'am' with the verb 'prefer'. In simple present tense, use the base verb for first person: 'I prefer'. Suggestion: remove 'am' and say 'I prefer'.

× Typing is so also faster than handwriting through.

✓ Typing is also much faster than handwriting.

Awkward adverb order and incorrect adverb 'through'. Use 'also' before adjective and 'much' to intensify: 'also much faster'. Remove 'through'. Suggestion: place adverbs in natural order: 'also much faster'.

× Sometimes I write by hand when I want to remember something better.

✓ Sometimes I write by hand when I want to remember something better.

Sentence is grammatically correct and fits present habits. No change needed.

× Yeah, it is because now we, uh, use the laptop keyboard every day to work or study.

✓ Yes, because now we use laptop keyboards every day for work and study.

Small issues: replace filler 'uh' and use plural 'keyboards' for general statement (or 'the laptop keyboard' if referring to one). Use 'for' not 'to' with 'work and study'. Suggestion: streamline: 'we use laptop keyboards every day for work and study.'

× So, uh, we need to do more typing in on there.

✓ So we need to do more typing on them.

Incorrect combination 'in on there'. Use 'on' with devices and match plural 'them' for 'laptops'. Suggestion: 'do more typing on them' or 'do more typing on our laptops'.

× When I have the first on my laptop when I was eight grade 8, my mom bought me for a study online because of the COVID 12 COVID-19 and we need to study at home by such as Google Meet or Zoom, so I learn.

✓ I first learned to type on my laptop when I was in eighth grade; my mom bought it for me so I could study online during COVID-19 using platforms such as Google Meet or Zoom.

Multiple sentence structure and tense problems: use past simple 'learned' for a completed action, correct word order 'first learned to type', use 'in eighth grade', correct object order 'bought it for me', use 'so I could study online during COVID-19', and give examples with 'such as'. Suggestion: break into clear clauses and use past simple throughout.

× I don't need to improve my typing because it's very I'm I'm right.

✓ I don't need to improve my typing because it's already very good.

Awkward phrasing and filler repetition. Replace 'very I'm I'm right' with 'already very good'. 'Don't need to' is a modal-like negation; ensure clarity. Suggestion: 'I don't need to improve my typing because it's already very good.'

× I'm typing the perfect.

✓ My typing is perfect.

Incorrect word order and article use: 'typing' as a noun needs a verb 'is' and 'perfect' as adjective. Use 'My typing is perfect.' Suggestion: use noun + linking verb + adjective for descriptions.

× I learn when I grade 8.

✓ I learned when I was in eighth grade.

Tense and structure error: use past simple 'learned' for past event and correct expression 'in eighth grade'. Suggestion: 'I learned when I was in eighth grade.'

× So I'm very con con confident on typing.

✓ So I'm very confident at typing.

Repetition 'con con' and wrong preposition 'on'. Use 'confident at/in' with an activity; 'confident at typing' or 'confident in my typing'. Suggestion: 'I'm very confident at typing.'

× Yeah, especially, especially like that is very, very easy to typing.

✓ Yes, especially since it is very easy to type.

Wrong infinitive 'to typing' should be 'to type' or 'easy to type'. Remove repeated 'especially' and awkward 'like that'. Suggestion: 'it is very easy to type.'