打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the answer more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid filler words and repetition.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting. For example, I work on a computer all day, so typing is faster and more convenient; I only handwrite short notes during meetings.

建议: Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give a clear reason and a brief detail. Remove hesitation and minor repetition; use a linking word to connect the reason.

示例: I usually type on an external mechanical keyboard rather than my laptop. I prefer it because it is more comfortable and I like the tactile sound, which makes typing more enjoyable.

建议: Provide a clear, coherent timeline and avoid confusion. Start with a direct answer (when), then add one concise supporting detail. Remove hesitations and unclear phrases.

示例: I began formally learning to type in grade nine, although I had used keyboards informally before that. In grade nine I practiced touch-typing in class, which helped develop my typing reflexes.

建议: Answer directly and include specific examples and a brief result. Use correct verb tenses and link cause and effect clearly. Avoid vague phrasing and filler sounds.

示例: I improved my typing by practicing with online programs such as TypingMaster and Monkeytype. As a result, I increased my speed and accuracy through regular timed exercises and lessons.

× Yeah, these days most of the time I only type on my keyboard because I have to work on my computer every time and the only time when I write is when we are on a meeting.

✓ Yeah, these days I usually type on my keyboard because I have to work on my computer all the time, and the only time I write is during meetings.

The original uses awkward adverbs and prepositions: 'most of the time I only type' is better as 'I usually type'; 'every time' is unnatural for continuous computer use, so 'all the time' fits present-tense habitual meaning; 'when we are on a meeting' is incorrect preposition and article use—use 'during meetings' or 'in a meeting'. Also removed redundant 'most of the time' duplication.

× Uh, most of the time I use my external keyboard.

✓ Uh, most of the time I use my external keyboard.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Left here to show it meets the allowed list; no error from the provided problem types.

× Even though I have laptop, I use my keyboard to type most of the time.

✓ Even though I have a laptop, I use my external keyboard to type most of the time.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop' is an article/pronoun-type error; also 'my keyboard' is slightly ambiguous, so specifying 'external keyboard' makes reference clear. The correction follows present-tense habitual context.

× This is because I really like the sound of mechanical keyboard that I have.

✓ This is because I really like the sound of the mechanical keyboard I have.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'mechanical keyboard' and awkward relative clause 'that I have' can be tightened to 'I have'. This is an article/adjective usage issue; the corrected sentence reads more naturally.

× Uh, I still remember, uh, my first experience typing on a keyboard in a grade 9, although I had been typing on my previous school days.

✓ Uh, I still remember my first experience typing on a keyboard in grade 9, although I had typed on keyboards at my previous schools.

Use 'in grade 9' not 'in a grade 9'; 'had been typing on my previous school days' mixes tense and incorrect noun phrase. Past perfect 'had typed' fits to show earlier action before grade 9; 'at my previous schools' corrects the noun phrase.

× But I do remember typing on grade 9 because when I type, uh, reflexes comes class 9.

✓ But I do remember typing in grade 9 because when I typed, my reflexes came in class 9.

Multiple issues: preposition 'in grade 9' not 'on'; tense consistency requires past tense 'when I typed'; subject-verb agreement: 'reflexes comes' is incorrect—use plural verb 'came' with plural subject 'reflexes'. Also 'class 9' becomes 'in class 9' for clarity.

× MMM, there were time when I use online typing applications like typing masters and other monkey typing.

✓ Well, there were times when I used online typing applications like TypingMaster and Monkey Typing.

'There were time' should be plural 'there were times' (singular/plural issue). Tense should be past 'used' to match 'there were times'. Proper nouns for applications capitalized and named correctly. This falls under verb + -ing and plural/tense corrections per allowed list.

× With the help of that I got to type faster and this is how I improved my typing skill.

✓ With their help I learned to type faster, and that's how I improved my typing skills.

Use past tense 'learned' or 'got to' is informal; 'learned to type faster' is clearer. 'Typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills'. Also 'With their help' refers to the applications and is more natural. Tense consistent past narrative.