打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Also correct small grammar errors (e.g., "much easier" not "much more easier", "nowadays people" rather than "everyone from nowadays").

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I can type on my phone or laptop when I'm commuting, and it's easier to edit documents quickly.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence then add a specific detail; reduce hesitations and correct phrasing ("I'm actually an expert"; "I do it a lot"). Use a linking word to connect reason and result.

示例: Yes, I type every day on my laptop, desktop and sometimes my phone. Because I practise so often, I'm quite fast and accurate, which makes typing my preferred way to write.

建议: Give a single clear answer with one or two supporting details and avoid repeating the same point. Correct sentence structure and be specific about timing and method. Use a linking word (e.g., "because").

示例: I learned to type when I was a child, mostly by practising on my family's computer. Because I used phones and computers a lot, I taught myself through regular use and online typing games.

建议: Answer directly and give a concrete method or example of practice. Reduce repetition and hesitations, correct phrasing ("become an expert"), and use linking words (e.g., "so", "for example").

示例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice: for example, I use online typing tests and practise touch-typing exercises for 15 minutes a day, which has helped me become much faster and more accurate.

× I prefer uh, typing because I think it's much more easier so, and everyone from nowadays using computers, mobile phones or iPads, tablets, everything else.

✓ I prefer typing because I think it's much easier, and nowadays everyone uses computers, mobile phones, iPads, tablets, and so on.

Use of 'much more easier' is incorrect: 'easier' is a comparative adjective so it should not be preceded by 'more'; use 'much easier' or 'far easier'. Also 'everyone from nowadays using' is ungrammatical; change to 'nowadays everyone uses' with correct verb form and word order.

× So I think uh, typing is much more easier and everyone could use.

✓ So I think typing is much easier and everyone can use it.

Subject-verb agreement and modal choice: 'everyone could use' is awkward and missing object; use 'can' for present ability and include 'it' as the object. Also remove 'much more' as explained earlier.

× I type on on the desktop or laptop or even my phone, uh, every day.

✓ I type on a desktop or laptop or even on my phone every day.

Use consistent articles and prepositions with singular countable nouns: 'on on the desktop' is repeated and wrong. Use 'a desktop or laptop' or 'the desktop or the laptop' depending on context; here 'a' is more natural. Also include 'on' before 'my phone' for parallel structure.

× So that's why, umm, I prefer typing and I, I'm actually expert in typing right now because of doing it lots of time every day.

✓ That's why I prefer typing, and I'm actually experienced at typing now because I do it many times every day.

Incorrect adjective 'expert' used without article and wrong phrase 'because of doing it lots of time'; use 'experienced at' or 'an expert at' and 'many times every day' to express frequency. Maintain present simple for habitual action: 'I do it'.

× When I was a kid, I learned how to type. Uh, I mean, no one taught me how to type, but I did it myself. I learned it.

✓ When I was a kid, I learned how to type. No one taught me; I taught myself.

Repetition 'I learned it' and phrasing 'I did it myself' is informal and slightly awkward. Use 'I taught myself' to express that nobody taught you. Past tense 'learned' is correct, but concise phrasing improves clarity.

× Everyone learned it by themselves.

✓ Everyone learned it by themselves.

The original sentence is acceptable in informal spoken English, but 'by themselves' may be replaced with 'on their own' to avoid singular/plural pronoun issues. If strict agreement required, 'Everyone learned it on their own' is preferred. No grammatical change required here, so original kept.

× We're currently from the kids using phones to the older people who are who have to use their comp.

✓ Currently, people range from kids using phones to older people who have to use computers.

Original sentence has poor structure and extra words 'we're' and duplicated 'who are who have'. Rephrase to 'people range from... to...' and use 'computers' instead of truncated 'comp'.

× I believe just by doing it as much as you can, then you will be expert, a pro professional person in typing.

✓ I believe that by practicing as much as you can, you will become an expert, a professional typist.

Tense and word choice: use 'practicing' for the activity, 'you will become' for future result, and correct noun phrases: 'an expert' and 'a professional typist'. 'Pro professional person' is redundant.

× Like, uh, even if you want to type with your 10 fingers, you should do it.

✓ For example, if you want to type with all ten fingers, you should practice it.

'10' should be written 'ten' in formal text; better verb 'practice' fits intention. Use 'all ten fingers' for clarity. The structure is acceptable but improved by using '-ing' form 'practicing' earlier; here 'practice it' is natural.

× And uh, I don't think lessons on this topic will help you a lot 'cause it's a skill you have.

✓ I don't think lessons on this topic will help much because it's a skill you develop by practice.

'Cause' is informal; use 'because'. Phrase 'it's a skill you have' is unclear—skills are developed. Modal 'will help you a lot' is acceptable but 'help much' is more natural with 'don't think'. Clarify that practice develops the skill.