打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Reduce minor grammar mistakes and tighten phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail with a linking phrase. Correct subject-verb and plurality errors and avoid redundancy.

示例: I prefer typing. For example, when I write essays I can type much faster and use the spell-checker to correct mistakes quickly, which saves time.

建议: Improve accuracy and fluency: fix vocabulary and grammar errors, remove filler words, and use linking words to explain exceptions. Keep sentences concise and correct noun/verb forms.

示例: Not usually. I mainly type on my phone for messaging and social media, but I use my computer when I need to write long emails.

建议: Clarify time reference and correct grammar. Use a clear topic sentence with one or two specific supporting details and appropriate linking words. Fix word choice (elementary, speed, accuracy) and punctuation.

示例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. In our computer class the teacher showed us proper technique, and we practiced with typing games that improved my speed and accuracy.

建议: Use correct verbs and avoid awkward phrases. Provide one specific routine and a linking word to show sequence. Correct tense and word choice (practice, keep a diary daily).

示例: I practice typing by chatting with friends on my laptop, which helps me type more naturally and quickly. I also keep a daily diary to improve my accuracy and increase my speed over time.

× It is much faster and more convenient when I'm writing essays or assignments, and it is easy to correct mistakes on my laptop which save time.

✓ It is much faster and more convenient when I'm writing essays or assignments, and it is easy to correct mistakes on my laptop, which saves time.

Subject-verb agreement error: the relative clause 'which save time' refers to 'correcting mistakes' or 'it' and requires singular verb 'saves'. Also added a comma before 'which' to correctly introduce the non-defining relative clause. Suggestion: ensure the verb agrees with the clause subject and punctuate non-defining clauses with a comma.

× No, I don't usually type on the desktop or laptop keyboard. I many type of my phone because I do most of my messaging and social media there and sometime I'm using umm my computer when I need to write a long emails.

✓ No, I don't usually type on a desktop or laptop keyboard. I mostly type on my phone because I do most of my messaging and social media there, and sometimes I use my computer when I need to write long emails.

Multiple errors: 'many type of my phone' is ungrammatical and should be 'mostly type on my phone' (adverb and correct preposition). 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'I'm using umm my computer' should be 'I use my computer' to match simple present for habitual action. 'a long emails' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'emails' so remove 'a' or make singular. Suggestion: use appropriate adverbs (mostly, sometimes), correct prepositions ('on my phone'), use simple present for habits, and match articles with singular/plural nouns.

× I learned the time when I was in element school.

✓ I learned it when I was in elementary school.

Awkward phrasing: 'learned the time' is incorrect. Use 'learned it' or 'learned how to type' depending on meaning; here 'it' (how to type) fits. Also 'element school' is incorrect form; correct adjective is 'elementary'. Suggestion: use 'learned it' or 'learned how to type' and correct noun forms like 'elementary school'.

× We had a computer class where the teacher taught us typing and we practiced with full typing games That helped me improve my speedy and accuracy.

✓ We had a computer class where the teacher taught us typing and we practiced with full typing games. That helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

Several issues: missing period between clauses; 'full typing games' is awkward but left as is (could be 'typing games'); 'speedy' is an adjective but context needs noun 'speed'. 'accuracy' is correct noun. Suggestion: use the noun 'speed' instead of 'speedy', add appropriate punctuation, and consider clearer phrasing such as 'typing games' or 'typing practice exercises'.

× I protest typing with my laptop by chatting online with friends, which helps me type more naturally and quickly.

✓ I practise typing on my laptop by chatting online with friends, which helps me type more naturally and quickly.

'Protest' is the wrong verb; likely intended 'practise' (British) or 'practice' (US noun; verb 'practice' in US). Also preposition 'with my laptop' is less natural than 'on my laptop'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'practise/practice' depending on variety and use 'on' with devices.

× Also, I can keep a diary daily to build accuracy and increase my typing speed over time.

✓ Also, I keep a daily diary to build accuracy and increase my typing speed over time.

Using 'can keep' suggests ability rather than habitual action; the question asks how you improve typing, so simple present 'I keep' is more appropriate for routine. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual practices and collocate 'daily diary' or 'keep a diary daily'.