打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar (verb forms, articles) and fluency: use correct verb tenses and subject-verb agreement, avoid repetitions, and keep answers within 3–4 clear sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, so).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and less tiring. For example, when I have to write long reports or emails, typing lets me work much more quickly and my handwriting doesn’t get sore. Therefore I use a laptop for most of my writing tasks.

建议: Reduce hesitations and repetition, and improve vocabulary and sentence structure. Combine short sentences into a fluent response, avoid filler words (umm), and use precise adjectives (useful, essential). Provide one specific example of daily use to support your answer.

示例: I type on my old laptop every day for work and study because it’s convenient and portable. For instance, I use it to write reports, send emails, and chat with friends on social media, which makes it an essential tool in my daily life.

建议: Make chronology clear and correct grammar: use past simple consistently and avoid unnecessary background information that is vague. Give a concise timeline and one specific detail about learning (how or what you practiced).

示例: I learned to type about 20 years ago at university when I got my first personal computer. At that time PCs were just becoming common in Vietnam, so I spent evenings practising typing and learned basic word-processing skills.

建议: Improve clarity and accuracy: correct grammatical errors (helped me, I practised), remove filler words, and give a clear, complete description of methods with specific details (which exercises, resources, or goals). Keep answer to 3–4 sentences.

示例: My teacher showed me the basic finger positions at first, and then I practised at home every day for about an hour. I used online typing exercises and copied texts to build speed, and after six months I became much more accurate and faster.

× I extremely prefer typing.

✓ I strongly prefer typing.

'Extremely' is an adverb used to modify adjectives or adverbs (e.g., extremely difficult). With 'prefer' we normally use adverbs like 'strongly' or simply say 'I prefer typing a lot.' Use 'strongly' to express a strong preference. Suggestion: Replace 'extremely' with 'strongly' or rephrase as 'I prefer typing a lot.'

× I used to be good at writing when I were a student.

✓ I used to be good at writing when I was a student.

The subject 'I' requires the singular past form 'was' not 'were.' 'Were' is used with plural subjects or in subjunctive mood. Use 'was' for past factual statements about yourself.

× However, in the modern life when I need to write a lot, it's very hard for my hands.

✓ However, in modern life when I need to write a lot, it is very hard on my hands.

'In the modern life' is unidiomatic; use 'in modern life.' Also 'hard for my hands' is awkward; the idiomatic preposition is 'hard on my hands.' This corrects preposition and phrasing to sound natural.

× So I prefer typing because I can type as much as possible I don't need to pay attention to.

✓ So I prefer typing because I can type as much as I need without having to pay too much attention.

The original sentence runs together and is ungrammatical. 'As much as possible' plus 'I don't need to pay attention to' is awkward. Rephrase to 'as much as I need' and use 'without having to pay too much attention' to convey meaning clearly and grammatically.

× I have my old laptop.

✓ I have an old laptop.

'My old laptop' implies a specific laptop already known; while acceptable, 'I have an old laptop' is more natural here. Also 'my old laptop' could suggest ownership but in answer to the question it's more common to say 'an old laptop.' Change the article to 'an' for naturalness.

× Sometimes I can use it for sending emails or connect with my friends in social media.

✓ Sometimes I use it to send emails or connect with my friends on social media.

Use parallel verb forms: 'use it to send' rather than 'use it for sending' and 'connect on social media' is the idiomatic preposition. Maintain infinitive 'to send' to match 'connect.'

× It's really easy to use and I believe that it's one of the most, umm, intelligent thing that I that I have in life.

✓ It's really easy to use and I believe it's one of the most useful devices I have in my life.

'Intelligent thing' is unnatural; 'useful device' or 'useful things' is clearer. Also correct noun number: 'one of the most ... things' requires plural 'things' or better 'devices.' Remove repeated 'that I' and add 'in my life.' This fixes word choice and sentence structure.

× It was about 20 years ago when I was in the university, I had got my first PC.

✓ It was about 20 years ago when I was at university; I got my first PC then.

Use 'at university' (idiomatic) and the simple past 'I got' not 'I had got' since this is a single past event. 'Had got' (past perfect) is unnecessary unless comparing two past events. Also split into clearer clauses.

× It means a personal computer, and it works very new in Vietnam about 20 years ago, when my country was in a undeveloped position.

✓ It means a personal computer, and it was very new in Vietnam about 20 years ago, when my country was less developed.

Use past-tense 'was' for 'very new.' 'Works very new' is incorrect. 'Undeveloped position' is awkward; use 'less developed' to describe the country's state. This corrects verb tense and choice of adjective phrase.

× And I really love this one because it's very helpful.

✓ And I really loved it because it was very helpful.

Since the speaker is referring to a past situation (20 years ago), use past tense 'loved' and 'it' rather than 'this one.' Match pronoun and tense to the context.

× When I first tried the keyboard, my teacher helped me how to use it.

✓ When I first tried the keyboard, my teacher showed me how to use it.

'Helped me how to use it' is ungrammatical. Use 'showed me how to use it' or 'helped me to learn how to use it.' This corrects verb selection and structure.

× After that I practiced at home many times.

✓ After that I practiced at home many times.

Sentence is grammatical; however native speakers might say 'I practiced a lot at home' for naturalness. No grammar-type correction required per list, so keep meaning but suggest natural wording: 'I practiced a lot at home.'

× Every day I spent about one hour to play with the keyboard on the keyboard and after umm half a year I got frequent with the keyboard and when I were in the.

✓ Every day I spent about one hour practicing on the keyboard, and after about half a year I became familiar with it.

'Spent about one hour to play with the keyboard on the keyboard' is ungrammatical. Use 'spent about one hour practicing on the keyboard.' 'Got frequent with the keyboard' is incorrect; use 'became familiar with it.' Also correct past tense 'were' to 'was' or omit incomplete clause. This fixes verb forms, quantifier usage and general sentence structure.