打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较自然且信息充分，但有重复（如“not very good at typing on computer keyboard”与后文类似表达），句子较长。建议用更直接的主题句，随后用一两句具体说明理由，避免冗词，并加入连接词使逻辑更清晰。可补充具体例子（例如写笔记时的场景）以增加细节。

示例: I prefer handwriting. It helps me organize my thoughts and retain information better, especially when I take class notes or work through exercises by myself. For example, when I prepare for exams I make handwritten summaries, which make it easier to review later.

建议: 回答重复前一题的内容且有语法小问题（例如“run things by hand”不自然），缺乏直接回应“desktop or laptop”的对比。建议先直接回答（Yes/No），然后简短说明原因并明确指出是桌面还是笔记本或都不常用，避免重复并用更地道表达。

示例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I rarely use a computer for study tasks; instead I write most things by hand. If I do use a computer, it's usually a laptop for quick emails or research.

建议: 回答直接但不够具体，口语中有赘词（例如“like how to type”）。建议使用更清晰的时间表达并给出简短细节（例如课程内容或感受），同时用连接词改善流畅性。

示例: I don't remember the exact year, but I learned basic typing during secondary school in a computer class. The teacher showed us proper finger positions and we practiced with simple exercises.

建议: 回答包含有效方法，但有语法和用词错误（如“ask advices for others”应为“ask others for advice”；时态选择也可更自然）。建议先概述方法，然后列举1–2个具体做法并说明效果，使用连接词使结构清晰。

示例: I improved my typing by asking others for advice and practicing every day. For instance, I followed online tutorials to learn correct finger placement and used typing games to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing on computer keyboard, so when I do my homework or practice exercises, I usually write by hand, which helps me think more clearly and remember information better.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing on a computer keyboard, so when I do my homework or practice exercises, I usually write by hand, which helps me think more clearly and remember information better.

介词短语中缺少冠词“a”。在英语中，表示“一台电脑的键盘”应使用不定冠词“a”。建议将“on computer keyboard”改为“on a computer keyboard”。

× Not really, because I'm not very good at typing on computer keyboard, so when I need to do my homework or practice exercises, I usually run things by hand, which helps me think more clearly and remember information better.

✓ Not really, because I'm not very good at typing on a computer keyboard, so when I need to do my homework or practice exercises, I usually do things by hand, which helps me think more clearly and remember information better.

原句中“run things by hand”是错误搭配，语义不通。正确表达应为“do things by hand”表示“亲手做”。同时同样缺少“a”在“computer keyboard”前。建议将“run things by hand”改为“do things by hand”，并在“computer keyboard”前加“a”。

× I don't remember the specific time, maybe in the senior school there was a computer course and the teacher would teach us like how to type.

✓ I don't remember the specific time; maybe in senior school there was a computer course and the teacher taught us how to type.

句中使用“would teach”不符合简单过去的上下文，应使用过去式“taught”来说明过去发生的事实；同时“like”在此多余且口语化，应删除。建议把“would teach us like how to type”改为“taught us how to type”。

× Initially, I would ask advices for others. In addition, I would also practice day by day and even find some typing games to improve my typing speed.

✓ Initially, I would ask for advice from others. In addition, I would also practice day by day and even find some typing games to improve my typing speed.

“advices”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应使用“advice”。此外，短语“ask advices for others”结构不正确，正确表达是“ask for advice from others”。建议改为“ask for advice from others”。