打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct informal contractions and minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea (fixing mistakes) twice.

示例: I prefer typing because it’s easier to edit mistakes quickly. Moreover, my handwriting is quite messy, so typing produces cleaner and more readable work.

建议: Correct grammar, word choice and reduce redundancy. Use one clear topic sentence and then briefly explain where and why you use each device. Use linking words like "because" or "so" properly.

示例: I type on both a laptop and a desktop every day. I use a laptop at school for classes and a desktop at my part-time job, so I’m comfortable with both keyboards.

建议: Fix tense, article use and clarity. Give a clear time reference, reason, and one specific detail about the learning process. Avoid irrelevant or incorrect words (e.g., "pasta").

示例: I learned to type in high school because I had to write very long reports. At first I was slow, so I practised regularly to improve my speed and accuracy.

建议: Use correct verb forms and clearer descriptions. Start with a topic sentence about the method, then give specific details about how the exercises help and recommend frequency. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" to connect ideas.

示例: I improve my typing by doing online typing exercises that teach proper finger placement and key patterns. For example, I practise daily with lessons that focus on accuracy and speed, which has noticeably reduced my errors.

× I prefer typing 'cause you can go back and change the mistakes you made.

✓ I prefer typing because you can go back and change the mistakes you make.

The sentence mixes past (you made) with a general statement about what you can do when typing. Use the present simple 'you make' for general facts/habits. Also expand 'cause to 'because' for formal correctness.

× If you handwrite things, it's harder to fix things that you have mistaken.

✓ If you handwrite things, it's harder to fix mistakes you have made.

'Things that you have mistaken' is unnatural. Use the noun 'mistakes' with the present perfect 'have made' to indicate errors already made. Also avoid repeating 'things'.

× Also, my handwriting is terrible, which is why I stick to typing.

✓ Also, my handwriting is terrible, which is why I stick to typing.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. (Present simple 'is' and 'stick' correctly describe a general situation.)

× I tie type on laptop keyboard and desktop keyboards every day 'cause because at my part time job there is desktop and at my school there is a laptop that is why it is typing in each devices.

✓ I type on both laptop and desktop keyboards every day because there is a desktop at my part-time job and a laptop at my school, so I use both devices.

Multiple issues: 'tie type' is a typo — use 'type'. 'Laptop keyboard and desktop keyboards' should be simplified to 'laptop and desktop keyboards' or 'both laptop and desktop keyboards'. Remove redundant 'cause because' and use 'because'. Use 'part-time' with a hyphen. 'There is desktop' needs an article: 'a desktop'. Use parallel structure 'a desktop at my part-time job and a laptop at my school'. 'It is typing in each devices' is ungrammatical; replace with 'so I use both devices'.

× I learned how to type a keyboard when I was in high school because I need to write long very long report and I was really slow so I just needed to have to type more pasta.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in high school because I needed to write very long reports and I was really slow, so I had to type more quickly.

Use 'learned' (past) with 'when I was in high school'—keep verbs in past tense: 'needed' not 'need'. Use the preposition 'on' with 'type on a keyboard'. 'Long very long report' should be 'very long reports' (plural and correct adjective order). 'Needed to have to' is redundant—use 'had to'. 'Type more pasta' seems to be a typo; likely 'more quickly' or 'faster' is intended.

× I improved my typing by using typing exercises that are in online.

✓ I improved my typing by using typing exercises that are online.

'In online' is incorrect preposition use; say 'online' (adverb/adjective) or 'on the internet'. The gerund structure 'by using' is fine. Remove unnecessary 'in'.

× They teaches you where to apply this your hand and which letter is need to be pressed by which finger.

✓ They teach you where to place your hands and which letter needs to be pressed by which finger.

'They teaches' is incorrect; use 'they teach' (subject-verb agreement). 'Apply this your hand' is ungrammatical; use 'place your hands' or 'put your hands'. 'Which letter is need to be pressed' should be 'which letter needs to be pressed' (singular verb 'needs' agrees with 'which letter'). Also prefer active/clear phrasing.

× I think it is really good exercise if you do it daily.

✓ I think it is a really good exercise if you do it daily.

Missing article 'a' before 'really good exercise'. The present tense is appropriate here; add the article to correct noun phrase.