打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundant or unclear phrases and keep it under 5 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, typing is faster for me, so I can finish tasks quickly. Secondly, typed text is easier to read and edit, which helps me avoid mistakes.

建议: Answer briefly and accurately, then add a clear supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., but, however, because). Use correct verb forms and articles.

示例: I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day; instead, I usually type on my mobile phone. Because I am often on the move, my phone is more convenient for quick messages and notes.

建议: Provide a clear past-tense statement with one specific detail about when or why. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense forms.

示例: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old. I started practising after my parents bought a new computer, and I used online tutorials to improve.

建议: Give a concise answer describing specific methods you use to improve, with a linking word and correct grammar. Mention concrete activities (practice, courses, tools) and their effect.

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly on typing websites and doing timed exercises. As a result, my speed and accuracy have increased, and I make fewer mistakes.

× I prefer typing because I'm writing this must be so I great to understand and typing is a understood able.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is hard to read, and typing is easier to understand.

The original sentence uses incorrect adjectives/adverbs and awkward phrasing ('I'm writing this must be so I great to understand' and 'a understood able'). Replace with clear comparative adjectives: 'hard to read' and 'easier to understand'. Also restructure the sentence for clarity and correct word order.

× No, I not type on text trouble laptop keyboard everyday, but I type on the mobile keyboard.

✓ No, I do not type on a laptop keyboard every day, but I type on my mobile keyboard.

The verb phrase lacked the auxiliary 'do' for negation in simple present and used incorrect word order ('I not type'). Also 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase) and 'text trouble' is unclear and removed. Add the possessive 'my' for clarity.

× I learn how to type on a keyboard at the age of 12 I think when I bought a new computer.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was 12, I think, when I bought a new computer.

The action of learning occurred in the past, so the past tense 'learned' is required instead of 'learn'. Also add 'when I was 12' for natural phrasing and commas to separate the hedging phrase 'I think'.

× I improve my typing myself because of using desktop too much. Improves my typing.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing myself because I used the desktop too much.

The original mixes awkward structures and fragments ('Improves my typing'). Use present simple 'I improve' with a clear method 'by practicing myself' and correct reason clause 'because I used the desktop too much'. If referring to an ongoing habit, 'I improve my typing by practicing because I use the desktop a lot.' would also be acceptable.