打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and coherence: start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and reduce redundancy. Use one or two supporting details linked with a connector (e.g., "but" or "however") and keep it within 2–4 sentences. Also replace unclear phrases ("talk down", "Internal as it's feel") with precise expressions like "write down" and "it feels more personal".

示例: I prefer typing because it is much faster and more efficient for my daily tasks. However, I still write personal goals by hand because it feels more intimate and helps me remember them better.

建议: Focus on clarity and conciseness: give a direct topic sentence (desktop or laptop), then briefly explain why with one supporting reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words, and fix word choice and word order errors.

示例: I type on a laptop every day because my work requires me to be mobile. As a result, a laptop is more convenient than a desktop for traveling and working in different locations.

建议: Use correct tense and clear phrasing: state a simple time reference (e.g., "when I was about ten") and then add one specific detail about how you learned. Correct awkward phrases and avoid repetition.

示例: I learned to type when I was about ten in primary school. We had basic computer classes where the teacher showed us touch-typing techniques, which I found challenging at first but useful later on.

建议: Structure the answer with a clear opening sentence explaining your main methods, then give a specific example using a linking word (e.g., "for example" or "also"). Remove fillers and correct word choices ("typing tests" instead of "text", "speed and accuracy" instead of "speak").

示例: I improve my typing mainly through daily work tasks and chatting with friends online. I also use free online typing tests and exercises to challenge myself and improve both my speed and accuracy.

× I definitely lean towards typing is simply much faster and more efficient for my daily tasks.

✓ I definitely lean towards typing because it is simply much faster and more efficient for my daily tasks.

The original sentence combines two clause fragments without a correct conjunction or connector, causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'because' and the subject 'it' makes the causal relationship explicit and corrects the run-on structure. Suggestion: use a conjunction or relative clause to join reasons (e.g., 'because it is...').

× However, I still enjoy handwriting when I want to talk down personal goals.

✓ However, I still enjoy handwriting when I want to write down personal goals.

The verb phrase 'talk down' is incorrect for the intended meaning; the correct verb is 'write down'. This is a misuse of verbs rather than pronouns, but it fits best under incorrect use of pronouns/word choice in the provided list. Suggestion: use 'write down' for recording goals on paper.

× Internal as it's feel more personal.

✓ Internally, it feels more personal.

The fragment 'Internal as it's feel more personal' is ungrammatical: wrong word form 'Internal' (adjective) and wrong verb agreement 'it's feel'. Correct form uses adverb 'Internally' and singular verb 'feels'. Suggestion: use adverbial form and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every single day, so my work requires me to be mobile mobile having a lot a laptop it is incre incredibly convenient.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every single day, so my work requires me to be mobile; having a laptop is incredibly convenient.

Original contains repetition ('mobile mobile'), missing articles and wrong word order ('having a lot a laptop'), and spelling error ('incre incredibly'). The tense is present and should remain so; fix punctuation, remove repetition, add article 'a', and correct adjective 'incredibly'. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicated words and ensure correct article use.

× Uh, I've routed so used to explore keyboard that's desktop once now view a big bookie to.

✓ Uh, I've gotten so used to my laptop keyboard that when I use a desktop keyboard it feels awkward now.

This sentence is heavily ungrammatical with incorrect vocabulary ('routed', 'explore', 'bookie'), wrong structure and tense. The intended meaning is present perfect 'I've gotten so used to...' followed by result clause 'that when I use a desktop keyboard it feels awkward now.' Suggestion: use clear verbs ('gotten used to') and a result clause introduced by 'that'.

× I first launched it back in primary school when I was around 10 years ago.

✓ I first learned it back in primary school when I was around 10 years old.

'Launched' is the wrong verb; learning to type is expressed with 'learned'. Also 'when I was around 10 years ago' duplicates time reference; correct phrasing is 'when I was around 10 years old' or 'about 10 years ago.' Suggestion: use appropriate verb ('learned') and avoid mixing 'when' with 'ago'.

× We had basic computer classes where the teacher taught us how to how to do T taping without looking at the case, which was quite challenging efforts.

✓ We had basic computer classes where the teacher taught us how to type without looking at the keyboard, which was quite a challenging task.

Several problems: repeated 'how to', wrong noun 'T taping', wrong object 'the case' instead of 'the keyboard', and awkward noun phrase 'challenging efforts'. Correct preposition/object is 'at the keyboard' or 'the keyboard'; 'a challenging task' is idiomatic. Suggestion: remove repetitions and use standard collocations ('type', 'keyboard').

× Mostly through daily project at work and chatting with friends online.

✓ Mostly through daily projects at work and chatting with friends online.

The fragment lacks a main verb and has number disagreement ('project' should be plural). This item fits both sentence fragment and noun number; corrected version keeps gerund 'chatting' and plural 'projects'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb or make it a complete sentence (e.g., 'I improve mostly through...').

× Occasionally also use free online typing text to challenge myself and boost my typing, speak and, uh, accuracy.

✓ Occasionally I also use free online typing tests to challenge myself and boost my typing speed and accuracy.

Original misses subject 'I', uses wrong noun 'text' instead of 'tests', and has 'speak' where 'speed' is intended. The corrected sentence restores subject, corrects nouns, and orders modifiers properly. Suggestion: include subject pronoun and use correct collocations ('typing tests', 'typing speed').