打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words like “so basically,” and give a specific reason and brief example. Use one linking phrase if adding detail.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, when I take notes on my laptop I can organize and edit them quickly, which saves time when I study.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and make the time claim precise. Remove redundant words and use a linking word to add purpose or result.

示例: I type every day on my laptop, usually for about two to three hours. I practice regularly to improve my speed and accuracy for school assignments.

建议: Be accurate and avoid repeating the same idea. Use correct tense and shorter sentences: state the age clearly, then give one specific reason or context. Use linking words for coherence.

示例: I learned to type when I was about 11 or 12, after my parents bought me a laptop for school. Since then I began typing every day to complete assignments and practice my skills.

建议: Introduce the app clearly and describe how you use it with one or two specific details. Avoid filler phrases and correct word order. Use linking words like “for example” or “each” to show frequency.

示例: I improve my typing by using an app called Time Master. For example, I do daily practice exercises and weekly timed tests on the app to track my speed and accuracy.

× So basically I prefer typing because it is easy to use.

✓ So basically I prefer typing because it is easy to use.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses present simple to state a general preference and a general fact. Keep as is.

× Yes, I have a laptop so I practice maybe two to three hours on laptop to enhance my performance of typing.

✓ Yes, I have a laptop, so I practice typing on it for maybe two to three hours every day to improve my typing performance.

Use of pronoun 'it' is needed instead of repeating 'on laptop'. Word order and phrasing improved: 'practice typing on it' and 'for maybe two to three hours every day' fit natural English. Replace 'enhance my performance of typing' with 'improve my typing performance'. Use present simple for habitual action.

× So when I was at the age of 11 or 12, my parents bought me a laptop for my studies making assignments for schools.

✓ When I was 11 or 12, my parents bought me a laptop for my school assignments.

Use simple phrasing 'When I was 11 or 12' instead of 'at the age of'. 'For my studies making assignments for schools' is awkward and ungrammatical; correct to 'for my school assignments'. Past tense 'bought' is correct and retained.

× So at the age of 12 I start typing everyday.

✓ So at the age of 12 I started typing every day.

The action refers to a past time, so use past tense 'started' not present 'start'. Also 'every day' should be two words.

× So there is a one app that name it time master so where we can conduct practices and test weekly or day by day.

✓ There is an app called Time Master where we can do practice sessions and take tests weekly or daily.

Use 'an app' (indefinite article before vowel sound) not 'a one app'. Use 'called' to name the app; drop 'name it'. 'Conduct practices and test' should be 'do practice sessions and take tests'. 'Daily' fits better than 'day by day'. Capitalize app name as a proper noun.