打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (verb tenses, articles) and word choice (e.g., ‘requires skill and enthusiasm’). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer handwriting. I find it easier and more comfortable because I have written by hand since childhood, so it feels natural to me. In contrast, typing requires more technical skill and concentration, which I don’t always need for quick notes.

建议: Begin with a direct answer, then explain with a clear example and use linking words (e.g., ‘however’, ‘for example’). Improve fluency by avoiding repetition and fixing grammar (everyday -> every day; feel very convenient -> find it convenient). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: No, I don’t use a desktop or laptop every day. However, when I need to prepare college presentations, I use a laptop or desktop because I find the keyboard convenient for typing long documents.

建议: Answer directly with a concise time frame, then add one specific detail about how you learned. Correct grammar (tenses, articles, ‘taught’ not ‘teached’) and avoid trailing off. Use linking word like ‘so’ or ‘therefore’ if adding a result.

示例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had a computer class in the lab, so the teacher taught us basic keyboard skills and typing practice.

建议: Start with a clear statement about your method, then give specific details (what practice you did, how often, any tools). Fix grammar (requires, since my second year of college) and avoid repeating the same idea. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I improved my typing through regular practice. From my second year of college, I practiced daily using online typing exercises and by typing assignments, which helped increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I think it is easy and I am doing it since I was in a school, whereas typing require a skill and a very enthusiasm I think to complete it.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I think it is easy and I have been doing it since I was at school, whereas typing requires a skill and a lot of enthusiasm, I think, to do it well.

Multiple issues: 'am doing it since' is wrong; use present perfect continuous 'have been doing' with 'since' to show an action started in the past and continues. 'in a school' should be 'at school' for general schooling. 'require' should be 'requires' to match singular subject 'typing' (third person singular). 'a very enthusiasm' is incorrect: 'enthusiasm' is an uncountable noun, use 'a lot of enthusiasm' or 'great enthusiasm'. Also add commas and rephrase 'to complete it' to 'to do it well' for naturalness. Suggestion: practice forming present perfect continuous with since/for and check subject-verb agreement for third person singular verbs.

× No, I usually don't use laptop or desktop everyday, but whenever in use like I have to prepare presentations for my college, I type on laptop and desktop and I feel very convenient while using it due to keyboard.

✓ No, I usually don't use a laptop or desktop every day, but when I need to prepare presentations for college, I type on a laptop or desktop and I feel very comfortable using the keyboard.

Problems: missing articles before 'laptop' and 'desktop' ('a laptop or desktop'). 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb phrase). 'whenever in use like I have to' is awkward; use 'when I need to'. 'for my college' is better as 'for college' or 'for my college courses'. 'type on laptop and desktop' needs articles and parallel 'a laptop or desktop'. 'feel very convenient' is incorrect; use 'feel very comfortable'. 'due to keyboard' is unnatural; say 'using the keyboard'. Suggestion: review article usage with singular countable nouns, difference between 'everyday' and 'every day', and collocations like 'feel comfortable'.

× I learned it when I was in school and I had a subject called computer and we often go to computer classes in computer labs. So the teacher teached me about how to use laptop and.

✓ I learned it when I was in school. I had a subject called Computer and we often went to computer classes in computer labs, so the teacher taught me how to use a laptop.

Mixed tense and incorrect past forms: 'we often go' should be past 'we often went' to match 'I learned' and 'was in school'. 'teached' is incorrect past tense; correct form is 'taught'. 'subject called computer' is fine but capitalize 'Computer' as a subject; add articles: 'a laptop'. Also the original sentence was truncated; complete the idea. Suggestion: ensure verbs in a past narrative are consistently in past tense and memorize irregular past forms like 'teach' -> 'taught'.

× I think typing is a great skill that require very much practice. So I have practiced typing since I was in my college from second year only. So I improved my typing by continuous practice.

✓ I think typing is a great skill that requires a lot of practice. I have practiced typing since I was in my second year of college. I improved my typing through continuous practice.

Errors: 'require' should be 'requires' for third person singular subject 'skill' (subject-verb agreement). 'very much practice' is unnatural; use 'a lot of practice' or 'much practice'. 'since I was in my college from second year only' is ungrammatical; correct: 'since I was in my second year of college'. 'by continuous practice' is acceptable but 'through continuous practice' is more natural. Suggestion: review subject-verb agreement, common quantifier phrases ('a lot of'), and correct prepositional phrases for educational stages ('second year of college').