打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Usa frasi più naturali e concise; correggi errori grammaticali e scegli vocaboli più precisi. Ad esempio, evita ripetizioni come "in order for another person to read it" e usa strutture come "easier for others to read". Mantieni massimo 3-4 frasi: dichiarazione principale + breve motivo.

示例: I prefer typing on a computer because it's faster and produces neater text, so it's easier for others to read. I also find it saves time when I need to edit or share documents.

建议: Correggi l'ordine delle parole e la forma verbale; evita espressioni imprecise come "intrinsic action that". Usa collegamenti chiari tra idee (e.g. "because, so"). Sii conciso: una frase di risposta + una di spiegazione sufficiente.

示例: I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use it for classes and assignments. Over time my fingers have learned the layout, so I can touch-type without looking at the keys.

建议: Correggi tempi verbali e lessico: "teach" deve essere al passato "taught"; evita traduzioni letterali come "enjoying action" — usa "fun" o "enjoyable". Fornisci una dichiarazione diretta seguita da breve dettaglio.

示例: I started learning to type when I was about ten because my mother taught me at home. I enjoyed the lessons and practiced games that helped me improve quickly.

建议: Migliora grammatica e fluidità: usa il present perfect correttamente o il simple past/present; evita ripetizioni "every day"; usa connettivi appropriati come "by" o "through". Fornisci uno o due metodi specifici di miglioramento (pratica, esercizi, programmi).

示例: I have improved my typing mainly through daily practice while taking notes at university. I also use online typing exercises and timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing on computer because I can write faster and in a better form in order for another person to read it without any difficulties.

✓ I prefer typing on a computer because I can write faster and in a clearer way so that another person can read it without any difficulty.

Use 'on a computer' with article 'a' (article error, but classified here as present participle context not required); 'in a better form' is unnatural — use 'in a clearer way' or 'more clearly'; 'in order for another person to read it without any difficulties' is wordy and awkward — use 'so that another person can read it without any difficulty'. Suggestions: add the indefinite article before 'computer', replace 'in a better form' with 'more clearly' or 'in a clearer way', and simplify the purpose clause to 'so that... can'.

× I everyday type on my laptop keyboard and this action became natural to me.

✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every day and this action has become natural to me.

The adverb 'every day' should follow the verb or be placed at the end of the clause, not before the verb as 'I everyday type'. Also tense: 'became' refers to past change with present relevance — use present perfect 'has become'. Suggestions: place 'every day' after the verb and use present perfect for the resulting state.

× In fact, my fingers now know exactly where the letters are without even watching them.

✓ In fact, my fingers now know exactly where the letters are without me even looking at them.

The original 'without even watching them' lacks a clear subject and uses 'watch' which is inappropriate for reading letters on a keyboard — 'looking at them' with the subject 'me' is clearer. Suggestion: include the subject and use 'look at' for visual attention to keys.

× So I think it is an intrinsic action that.

✓ So I think it is an intrinsic action.

The clause ends with an unnecessary and ungrammatical 'that'. Remove the extraneous word. Suggestion: finish the sentence at 'action' or expand 'that' into a full relative clause (e.g., 'that I do automatically').

× I started learning to type on the keyboard when I was really young, in fact when I was 10.

✓ I started learning to type on the keyboard when I was quite young; in fact, when I was 10.

Grammatically this sentence is acceptable, but punctuation and wording improve clarity: use 'quite young' and add a semicolon or comma for the parenthetical phrase. Suggestion: refine phrasing and punctuation for naturalness.

× My mother teach me how to do it and it was really enjoying action to do when I was younger.

✓ My mother taught me how to do it, and it was really enjoyable to do when I was younger.

'Teach' should be past tense 'taught' to match 'started' and the past timeframe. 'Enjoying action' is incorrect; use adjective 'enjoyable' and the infinitive 'to do' or simply 'I really enjoyed doing it'. Suggestion: use past tense for both verbs and replace noun phrase with 'enjoyable' or rephrase to 'I really enjoyed doing it'.

× I have improved my typing by continuously make this action every day, in fact, every day by going to university.

✓ I have improved my typing by continuously doing this every day; in fact, by going to university every day.

After 'by' we need a gerund 'doing', not the base verb 'make'. The sentence also repeats 'every day' and has awkward word order. Suggestion: use 'by doing this every day' and place 'by going to university every day' afterwards for clarity.

× I'm used to type and following the lessons in this way, so I became more confident.

✓ I'm used to typing and following the lessons in this way, so I have become more confident.

After 'used to' meaning accustomed to, the gerund 'typing' is required, not the infinitive 'to type'. 'Following the lessons' is fine as a gerund phrase. 'Became' should be present perfect 'have become' to show a change leading to the present. Suggestion: use 'used to typing' and present perfect for the resulting state.